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Reviewer: werewolfchick (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

LOVE IT!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! FYI, my Twi'd beta is going to be out of town, so if you don't want to wait, you can check it out on FFn or TWCS on Friday. :-)

Reviewer: Margaret Moony (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Ooooh, they're going to get married! 



Author's Response:

Yes. :-)

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Awesome chapter as always. Had me giggling in excitement and anticipation! Very hott kiss scene at the amusement park and I loved Maggie's advice to Bella - so appropriate and straight to the point. But goodness, he's only 16! It's amazing how young they married back then! I know it was normal for them in that period, but wow. Just another reminder of how different we are today :)

So glad she said yes, and that you didn't make her put him off or her stress about it forever.

Poor Carlisle's got it bad already for Esme, and Bella's right; he'll want to step forward and intervene... it's going to be so hard for him to watch her fall into her depression and then to commit suicide. :(

Congrats on the nomination, too! I'll be sure to vote for you!  Nyomi xx



Author's Response:

Well, he is ALMOST 17... Still young, though, I know!

It's going to be tough for Carlisle... that's Bella's big worry.

Thanks for reading! :-) And thanks for voting!

Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Yes!!!  A really good one :o)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it - thanks! :-)

Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

That  was nice :) I thought Edward would cave before Bella, so that was a nice suprise! Well one!



Author's Response:

Well, Bella couldn't resist for long - could you blame her? Lol!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Emrae Penne Degrah (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

I think I did a little dance of joy! LOL. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it - thanks! :-)

Reviewer: DirtyAim (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Yay, she said yes! Can't wait for the smexin to start ^^!!!!



Author's Response:

LoL! Smexin' is on the way... eventually. ;-)

Reviewer: mrsleezcullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

OME! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING HER CAVE! I cannot wait for the next chapter! I dont think I can even wait for the sneek-peak on Monday!!! Oh god!!! I AM DEFO GONNA SAVE THIS CHAPTER TO MY FAVOURITES!!! X



Author's Response:

Aww... thanks so much! So glad you liked it! :-)

Reviewer: ElspethGordie (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Thank you Maggie. Honestly, what would be easier running away with your girlfriend or your wife. This could make things easier on Bella. And Oh they can get married in the summer... so wonderful. Excellent job. Love this story.



Author's Response:

Exactly. And really, Bella knew that, but just had to come to terms with it...

Glad you liked the chap - thanks for reading!

Reviewer: missriot (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Another amazing chapter! Wow im so happy Bella caved! But i do wish that she just has carlisle changed her and edward later on. Are you going to include the wedding? Cant wait for an update!

-missRIOT;;



Author's Response:

Hmmm... don't want to give too much away, so I can't really answer your question.

But if you liked this chap, you'll like the next couple... more fluff on the way before the drama returns. :-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: heatherbug (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

awww that's sweet although I thought an egagement ring was going to be in the cracker jacks. I really thought Edward was gonna cave first but it's cute seeing bella all befuddled! :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, a lot of people thought it would be a ring, but I think Edward would wait until she accepted his proposal first. ;-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Woohoo! Bella is finally coming around & seeing reason! As if she could've ever convinced him to live with her in sin!

I thought for sure Edward put an engagement ring in the cracker jack box.



Author's Response:

Yes... I think she knew that, she just had to come to terms with it.

Lot of people thought it would be a ring, but I think Edward wanted to wait until she accepted his proposal first. ;-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Juvarni (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Carlisle! You sly dog! I love your portrayal of him and I'm so excited that Bella finally said "yes" to Edward! I can't wait for the next update :)



Author's Response:

I adore Carlisle... :-) He is a sneaky one, isn't he? Lol!

So glad you enjoyed the chap - thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Alice Jasper 4ever (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Yay! Bella and Edward are getting married. Cant wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it - thanks for reading! :-)

Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Sweet. Love, love, love the E/B fluff--and so happy she finally realized that her fears were silly and said yes--or, rather, "okay". I am kind of wondering if there is something wrong w/Edward's parents since he was worried... and I am kind of wondering how far their human life will progress before the flu or something else happens. I am so hoping for everyone to get their HEA in this story, but I don't think it's going to be all smooth sailing just yet. Happy that the next chapter is already on the way. :)



Author's Response:

There's nothing wrong w/Edward's parents... they're just running late. They'll be back at the beginning of the next chapter.

Glad you enjoyed the fluff, because there's a bit more coming. :-)

Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: Edwardsbella2009 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

I just love this story! So good



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

YIPEEEEEE!!!!!  I'm so glad she went "with the times" and said YES!!!!!  Hmmm....wonder how this changes things.....

LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!  So much fun and bonding and flirting.  YUMMY!!  I love the pictures too - - looks so cool!!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it - thanks! :-)

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

i'm so happy she said yes



Author's Response:

Me too! :-)

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Thank God, I thought I was gonna have to smack a B!



Author's Response:

You weren't the only one! :-)

Reviewer: SiobhanDeRoiste (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

*Smiles* love it



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it - thank you! :-)

Reviewer: ElspethGordie (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

lovely chapter. I love how Edward has been planning to marry Bella for a while, and now is teasing her in order to get her to say yes.  I love the Carlisle and Bella moments, it truly shows him in a different light.  I love how he was so excited to learn about Esme. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chap - thanks for R&R! :-)

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons

oops i missed this chapter...no wonder things didnt make sense lol i never understood how edward was accused ha ha  i have to pay more attention.,,,,liked that he told bella he loved her and woo hoo to the lemons in that chapter,,,that is farther at this point then edward and bella ever got in twilight and new moon ha ha..,,sad that alice had to go but glad she got to experience humanity in a positive way instead of in that nuthouse,,,,i hope she remembers it when she gets back to jasper,,,



Author's Response:

LoL! Sorry you missed a chap - that had to be confusing!

Yes, the lemons are a little OOC, but I think if Vampward hadn't been worried about killing her, he might have gone a little farther... LOL! That's the idea, anyway. :-)

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

She is irritating the crap out of me.,,,,i mean come on this is 1918 if she wants him that damn bad she would marry him,...she will be a freak if she doesnt marry him this young....different times bella hello!!!

As for her telling carlisle---while i am glad she finally said something ----it annoys me that she thinks edward doesnt effect carlisle in any way.,,,how does he not realize that the only reason carlisle knew who rose was was because edward knew her name and what happened and carlisle changed rose for edward who doesnt happen to be there,,,what is carlisle gonna do? ask a unconscious girl dying in the streets if her name is rose hale?? is she stupid???? and without rose there is still no emmett and i think with out edward there is still no esme.,,,,i think she is naive if she thinks she can change everything to her will....on top of that she has the power to do one good thing....rose never wanted this life she could let her stay human and not be...but the only casualty is emmett and we cant have that as i love emmett!!!  still i think that edward just has to accept who he is now and move on,,,doesnt she consider that if she stops him she will never have met him,,,she could be yanked from the future when he stay human and never have met him,,,she isnt very bright is she???have to say not liken her much,,,,,love everyone else though.,.,,your story is really great though she is infuriating



Author's Response:

Oh, she knows this... but you know how Bella is about marriage. *sigh* Don't worry - I have a feeling she'll figure things out. :-)

Bella told Carlisle Esme and Rose's names so he could find them. The idea would be he would track them down before the time came to actually change them. She's finally realized that by taking Edward out of the equation, she could be leading Carlisle down the wrong path. The only way she saw to correct that was to tell him who to be watching out for. As for leaving Rose human, she knows that would condemn Emmett - and remember this is Alt-NM, so she does NOT know how Rosalie feels about being changed, not being able to have babies and all of that at this point in time.

I know some people are aggravated with her - but what should she do? Just sit back and watch from her room? (That would be a boring story, Lol!) She truly believes she was sent into the past for a reason, and the only one she can she is for her to be with Edward. In order to do that, she believes she has to save him. Alice seemed to confirm this, so she thinks she's on the right track. She has considered all the possibilities - including that she could be pulled back to the future and Edward would have never been changed, so she'd never met him - but she truly believes that she wouldn't have been sent back in the first place if that was going to happen. She's flying blind and doing the best she can.

Anyway - hope this didn't come off as a rant - I just like Bella and want people to understand her. Lol! :-)

Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

I adore this story.  I like that Bella gave Carlisle some hope for his future.  It gives him something to focus on.  I am so excited about Bella and Edward's understanding.  Let the games begin!

I have a theory... so, what if Bella is back in time because Edward needer her the way Bella needed Alice?   Could Edward be holed up somewhere in South America in a self imposed meditation that manifested in his past?  Edward wants to be human with Bella more than anything.  Could he have brought all of this on?  I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Oh, now that's an interesting theory... one no one's mentioned yet... hmmmm...

Glad you liked the chap - thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: stephieleigh (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

Oh! Relief! So very happy Edward was cleared! And I absolutely love their conversation about marriage! I have a feeling Bella will cave before Edward does! ;)



Author's Response:

You think? Well, we'll just have to wait and see... Lol!

Glad you liked the chap. :-)

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