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Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
First of all let me just say that wow! This story has blown me away. I started reading in a few days ago and have just finished now. I live in Chicago and it really surprises me how little I know about the city I have grown up in. I miss Marshall Fields dearly since its departure. I find all of your research on the early twentieth century very enlightening. I am heading over to fanfiction now to look at all of your links. I do have a few questions that I don't think you will answer, but I will ask anyways. One, if Edward is not a vampire why would Carlisle want to change Rosalie if she was meant to be Edwards mate. 2. If Rosalie is never changed then neither is Emmett. 3. If Edwards parents visit him in Altoona they might bring the disease with them so I think it is wise that they stay away. 4. Is Bella dreaming and she will wake up and it will have been fake? Anyways update soon I can't wait to see what happens. You are very talented.
Reviewer: corrina318 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
Well It took me a few days but I ready everything you have written so far. I love it.
It is so different then anyother fanfic I have read.
Meggie is so funny with her Henry god rest his soul, I loved that part.
I am glad that Bella told Carlisle some of the things about the future.
I am still alittle concerned about what the future will hold for Bella and Edward
in both times. I keep feeling that maybe things might lead to them back to Carlisle one day.
Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
Definitly needed tissues there at the end! and with them leaving. I don't know if I could do the same as Bella. She is so strong in this! Well done!
Reviewer: bino_1990 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
Amazing chapter! the only thing I don't like is how Edward says "getting into MY bed". Is it not their bed? Bella and Edwards? haha ;P
Reviewer: readlots (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
This is a great story. I'm really enjoying it and it's had me riveted. I have a feeling as to where this is all going and how it is going to be resolved but I will have to wait and see if I'm right or not. Looking forward to the next installment. How many more chapters are left?
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
The love scenes were adorable and it was sad the good byes,,,,,
I was a little irritated at bella...i am a modern woman but she chose edward and everything that came with him....she chose to live in the past,....she cant just assume he will be ok with letting her into the financial situations just because she explains some kitchen analogy to him....this is a story so i know it might not be exactly like this andthis edward always gives into bella for anything,,,but really most men wouldnt have and she has to accept that this is the life she chose and she should accept everything that comes with it...she is so naive and thinks she has an answer for everything....things werent always pleasant in the past and she will see alot of things she doesnt like or cant accept,,,,but she has to deal and stop complaining all the time,,,it drives me bonkers,,,,i know she is a modern woman and its hard for her to accept these things like any one of us would feel the same way but she has to deal,,,seriously....i dont hate her but she drives me freakin nuts,,,,aside from that love edward and wonder how you are going to bring things around to what happened at the beginning with the mushrooms and jake or edward....i am curious as to what he is going through right bnow in the future and if he will be changed at all...probably a l;ittle,,,unless this was all a dream lol
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
enthralling! Superbly put forth. Started reading yesterday...stayed up FAR to late, got up even earlier so i could finish before work. I'm in misery now, butit was worth it! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
Bella and Edward certainly enjoyed their honeymoon - even if they didn't travel very far to start with ;)
Bella's still working on Edward regarding her independance and mutual partnership in the marriage... something I've often wondered is just how much equality was or wasn't present at that time in a marriage.
We all read the histories and certainly there were unequal partners - just as there are now - but I wonder if there were more equals that we didn't "hear" about or "see" because they were either kept hidden or just "assumed" to be that way. What really changes over time is how much we talk and reveal about ourselves - the spread of media helping this along - just think how much we know about each other thanks to Facebook for example, compared to what we might've known at the turn of last century without it :)
Edward would have had a child's perspective on his parent's relationship - perhaps they shared far more than he ever knew because he was separated from that level of their lives, and simply given the tools to (hopefully) communicate with his future bride and sort it out for themselves... eh not sure if that's making sense right now - my brain is refusing to put proper words to the thoughts :P
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
So good to have you back!!! I loved this chapter! It was very sweet and hot at the same time. I'm just worried about what will come of there lives there and what of the Flu and WHAT ABOUT BELLA AND BEING IN THE WRONG TIME???
See you soon!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
This was amazing. I literally read the entire chapter with a smile on my face. I am just so very happy for them that they have this time together. I am freaking out about what is to come.
THis Allistar person with the camera, there is more to him that meets the eye, yes? Will we see those photos in the future??? I am SO intrigued. If we end up back in modern day I just hope that Edward remembers all of this.
Is the wrought iron bed with the roses the same one that we see in Eclipse? Is there a connection there? I am so hopelessly addicted to this story... Excellent. It is simply Excellent.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures
Wow. I. LOVED. THIS. CHAPTER!!!! It was beautiful. I love the way they explored eachother. You write them so perfectly. It really feels like them. I am so captivated by the depth of emotions you portray in your writing. This entire chapter was romantic and filled with love. It was so amazing.
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
Welcome back! What a nice surprise to see an update; I was just thinking about this story the other day.
Reading about them in the claw foot tub reminded me of mine & my husband's first place. It was a 100+ year old house w/ an amazing claw foot tub. We definitely enjoyed it & missed it greatly when we moved.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
Great story...one of my favorites
Reviewer: Giselle Giselle (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
OK, LOVE this story. But also I just wanted to say that I looked at all your photos for this story and I just love it. Everything about this time period I'm infatuated with and that was great to see. Also, were the articles in this chapter that Carlisle showed Bella real articles from that time?
Reviewer: shiny silver grl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
Hmmm....where was that diaphram while they were in the tub, eh? ;)
Reviewer: caithal97 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
Hi! I love the story so far I've been following it for a while now but I have to ask . . . when do you think you'll update One of the Boys cuz I really like that one too!
Reviewer: archgirl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
Loved it, one of my favorite chapters so far. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
wonderful:)
Reviewer: maidance (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
i LOVE this!!!!!!! the ONLY resion i stick to this website is this story
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
aww. how wonderful. its kinda of sad to see bella move from chicago, i wonder how it will all go and if bella will ever make it back to the future and what will be there when she does, if she does.
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
This chapter was kinda bittersweet for me but i loved it :)
Reviewer: corrina318 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 04:41 PM · On: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
I hope this is as good as I think it might be!!
Bella went back in time...hmm
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
I cried through this whole chapter, don't ask me why, just did. Excellent job as always. I guess the countdown is starting, can't wait to see all the pieces come together. ;)
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
Aww that was so cute!! There is so much I loved about it, but I can't describe it all lol! It was so sweet, but also sad :)! I loved it!
Reviewer: cherylstweedy (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
I haven't had a story make me smile so much since MotU. Loved the update.
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