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Reviewer: stmur (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
That was the absolute best way for this story to go.
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
How is she going to get back to 2005???? I'm like, 'Wow, she's going to go back???' then I thought 'HOW????' when the way she got here required another person.
Reviewer: Fionna (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
Oh man, the time has come, eh? What an adventure this has been! I'm very excited to see what happens next- will everything have changed in the future? Will the story start at the beginning of Twilight? So many things to find out! Surely Edward can't deny Bella becoming a vampire now- not after she made the choice for him?!
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
That was one tear spilling chapter. Wonderful writing! Just wonderful!!!
Does this mean that next weeks the last chapter?
Reviewer: KrazieKathryn (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
OMG!!!
I Love This FanFic It Is Awesome...
Is This The Last Chapter Though???
Reviewer: ariawolf80 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean
Bella wasn't sent back to 1918 to save Edward, at least not the way she's thinking, was she? I get the feeling that she's the whole reason Edward becomes a vampire in the first place...she's the one who pleads with Carlisle to change him, not Elizabeth Masen. It was all supposed to happen this way, and Carlisle has kept the secret for a century...he did say she could trust him, and apparently he's an amazing actor, to fool even his mind-reading son and future-seeing daughter. But, no wonder Edward is his favorite...it's Bella that's his real favorite and in turn Edward, because she loves him. And I could see how he'd be grateful...she creates the Cullen Family. Oh, now I am wondering how the Present/Future will change to reflect that in terms of attitudes (namely Edward's & Rosalie's) - could go either way
Of course, I'm just assuming things and I know you're not about to answer my questions, so I'll just shut up now. Besides, I'm anxious to move on to the next chapter.
Toodles!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
I have been avoiding this chapter in my inbox because I knew it was going to be heartbreaking. This was the moment I have been dreading since I started the story. It was gutwrenching and devastating. Bella did a beautiful job with this. "See you in Biology. Don't kill me." Gah. I truly hope he remembers that!!!! It was brilliant!
Reviewer: kpaley89 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
woah woah woah. This cannot stop right there. This has gotten me so addicted. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: twlight fan 182 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
ahh this was amazing soo faveinh this great job☆☆☆☆☆
Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
OMG!
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
omg wow very intense. so how will edward see bella in biology tho?
Reviewer: maidance (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
omg! so sad. :-( i guss its for the best...
Reviewer: ariawolf80 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 13: Of Suffrage and Seduction
I know I have a bunch of chapters (chapters with answers!) to read, but I wanted to review because...well, because I really like this story, and when I really like something I usually can't keep my mouth shut. So, I just had to let you know (now, of course, because I'm so impatient) how much I'm enjoying myself. I've read a few "Bella goes back to 1918" stories, but yours is by far the best, and very well-written. Thanx for that.
And, no matter what the reality is (is it real, or just a dream?), I think letting Bella get to know this side of Edward is really important. The fact that Edward had lived so much before they met, had experienced so much she couldn't share with him, had adversely affected their relationship in canon. Whether conciously or subconciously, the inequality in their life experiences only fed Bella's insecurities and feelings of inadequacy, at the same time aggrivating Edward's own arrogance and "big brother" protectiveness over her and his "older, wiser man" syndrome that let him think he knew best - which, of course, all led to him leaving her in New Moon in the first place. So, Bella seeing him as an immature, regular human boy will do them both a world of good, should they get their HEA (and of course, they will, right?)
Reviewer: Dahlia Raynes (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
I love this! Hate the cliffhanger but love the story! I knew she'd get around to that point eventually. I'm almost 90% sure that I know where this is going. Don't worry I don't think it's obvious in any way. But there have been hints I think. Things not mentioned at specific times that lead me to believe I know where we'll end up at the end. Especially now that things have "turned". ;) Just awesome keep up the good work. I can't believe it's getting to the close.
Reviewer: eandadad (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 17: Of Hot Kisses and Horrifying Visions
I really enjoy this story. it is well written and well thought out so far. The effort af making the context of the stroy historically accurate makes it even better. Thanks for the hard work and look forward to reading more!
Reviewer: Rhi Aeffyll (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
Tk- I like this. It's definitely not a neatly tied and conveniently tight resolution, but the choice she made was the right one. I'm anxious to see how the remainder of the story plays out. How much more story is left? Hopefully plenty. Your story is refreshingly original and interesting. Our choices define us, and I like the direction that Bella moves in with her decisions.
Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
covver your ears!!!! ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: crazyfanmom (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! I thought she was going to get it and then have Carlysle change them both. Can't wait until the next update!
Reviewer: hershortness (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
No screams of outrage. This has been such a great story. Very Butterfly effect. I loved this chapter. I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for next week. Thanks!
Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
*Sobbing* Oh... that line, "I'll see you in Biology..." just pushed me over the edge and now I'm drowning in tears! Awesome heart ache! I'm a sucker for it, and you've done it all so well. Humor, angst, romance... you're amazing Chicky! *dries eyes* Okay... I'm so keen for the next update! There's no way I'll be able to leave an update unread. God, what I'd missed out on!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much for writing this gorgeous story. I just love it! Take care, bb. :D Nyomi xx
Reviewer: shiny silver grl (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
No, no, no! No screams of outrage, lol. This is what I wanted, remember?! :) I trust you to give me a HEA, and I'm loving all the angst on the way there!
Reviewer: shiny silver grl (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
No, no, no! No screams of outrage, lol. This is what I wanted, remember?! :) I trust you to give me a HEA, and I'm loving all the angst on the way there!
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
I have a brain freeze...
Shock that you left it there...I really hope there is another chapter soon...I would love to see vampire edward from the future have a conversation with bella after all this is done
rachel
Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life
I can hardly see the computer screen for my tears. It's all so sad. You write it all so beautifully tragic, my heart is aching for them all. Really well done, bb. You've excelled and I can't wait to read on to see if the transfusion has helped! What a smart cookie! I never, ever, expected that twist of hope!!! :D Nyomi xx
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
c u in biology! Priceless! Can't wait 2 see the direction this story will lead to...looking fwd 2 next update! Thx 4 sharing xo
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