Reviewer: Dahlia Raynes (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Please update on time! It's difficult to wait until Sunday night/Monday for the updates. Please don't be late :( I think it's awesome that it was all real. I haven't seen anymore hints that what I thought was going to happen did. I really don't want to say anything just in case it will and I ruin it. But will any sure BD characters make it in?? I'm pretty sure Bella forgot about something when something happened right before they left Altoona. Either way a fantastic story. Tens all the way.
Reviewer: gmteenz (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
What a fantastic story, I can't believe the way it is all coming together, you are a brilliant story teller, well done.
Reviewer: Fionna (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
There are so many ways the ending to this story could have messed the whole thing up, but so far it has been absolutely perfect- just shows how well thought out you had this and really brings the whole thing together. Can't wait for the last chapter, thank you for sharing this amazing story with the world!
Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
I am so sad to see a fabulous story comming to an end! But I cried throughought this chapter. Oh Bella, TRUST HIM!!!!! I am definitly on the edge of my seat waiting to see what's next!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
I have to say, the way you've wrapped up this story, tying all the loose ends up the way you've done is amazing. I have truly loved this story. Congrats...
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
I guess Edward must've been pretty shocked when he learned the whole truth.
Do we get to find out what the others think of the whole story?
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Delay in posting? NO!!!
Please update as soon as you can. This is great.
Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Love it!
Reviewer: OKIOU1 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
O.M.G. Starting this new chapter by going back to Edward...then bringing it up to the same time as the cliffhanging end of the previous chapter was both despicably devious and masterfully suspensful. Well done! I want to to strangle you for frustrating me and kiss you for thrilling me all at the same time. Your timing and pacing throughout has been impeccable. I'm going to be sorry to see this end but I still can't wait for the next chapter. See that? You've got me going in circles here!
And I love it.
Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S COMING TO AN END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Izzy Grace (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Wow! It was so nice to see Edward's and Carlisle's POV's here. Even Alice too. I have often wondered since I started this fic back when I think you only had four or five chapters posted, what was going on and did Carlisle know? Did Edward remember her? All these questions and this chapter answered almost all of those questions.
I would have loved to see Carlisle and Edward's conversation as he told him about Bella. Outtake maybe? *grins* I'd love to know what was going through his head as Carlisle told him everything, and even what was going through Carlisle's head too.
This was a great chapter. You never disappoint. Ever. This was great. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. I've enjoyed this story so much and I'm dying to see what happens next, even if I am sad to see it coming to an end. This is one of my all time favorite stories and want to thank you for sharing it with us.
Izzy
Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Wow, just wow, how perfect. I like the way you did that with it all being along the same time line and not her actually changing the past!! Nice work!
Reviewer: ELF (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
i love this story and its a shame it has to end
Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Oh I can't believe you left it there! I am sincerely waiting on baited breath for your final chapter. I understand your need to get it right, so I'll try to be patient. I rec'd your fic in my latest author's note of my own. I think it's fabulous, and I hope my readers check it out.
I'm curious to see whether or not you'll explain how Carlisle was able to hid this form Edward all this time. That would be an interesting conversation.
Don't stress too much over the last chapter. You;ve done amazingly well so far. We'll love it, I'm sure of it!
Reviewer: MalinB (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
I don't know where to start... Your writing amazes me! This story is really one of the best fanfics I have ever read. And there have quite a few.. I can't believe it's soon to be over, and at the same time; I just want everything out in the open to read. N-O-W, he he. I sooooo hope that there will be a second story for Bella and Edward, signed Tkegl, where the happy couple finally can be together - forever. Would be so interesting to see how things would have turned out if your version of the story happened. Please, give us that pleasure. :) Looking forward to the next post!
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
God I love this story!
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!! I am so glad most everything is out in the open....I so can't wait for the rest!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
I wondered how you were going to tie this all together. Great job with that!
Reviewer: sistajalice (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
THAT'S WHERE YOU'RE STOPPING THE CHAPTER?!?!?!?
UGH!
Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
I can't understand how anyone could leave a negative review, this story is wonderful!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
okay... seriously amazing.... need more... lots more... hehe
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
Sheesh! What a whirlwind again! Brilliant misdirection, Bella running to Carlisle wanting to be changed. I was starting to hope again... And I did not see Edward coming back in this chapter. Really exciting stuff. I'm so glad he had the locket and is back. I would start guessing as to why but I think I'll just wait for the next update! I have to say this really is one of the best fics out there, and certainly the best alternative new moon. Thank you.
Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
I bawled through this whole chapter. This story has just touched my heart and I look forward to their conversation.
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
Had to re-read...begging and pleading for an update! This is definitely in my top 3 favorite stories!
Reviewer: barefootedshoelover (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
This story is possibly my most favourite fanfic ever. It's a definite number one right now, I'm even leaving water for elephants to read your fic. It's nice to see a realistic feisty bella that is still in character and an Edward who you love despite and because of his flaws. He fits perfectly in historical Chicago and yet he tried to understand and respect modern Bella
I especially love the recent twist, showing no easy hea but a more interesting plot. Can't wait for the next chapter. You're positively gifted as a writer and story teller!
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