Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Ok I so cried for this chapter...it was well worth it though!
Reviewer: rowltyde (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
YAYYYYYYY! Perfect!!! :) THIS should be Bella and Edward's story :) It all flows together perfectly.
Reviewer: SuzyQ (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Oh god I've just loved this story! I'm not a regular reviewer, tending to be one of those annoying lurkers LOL, but I had to tell you how excited I got every time I saw an update for BT! I've loved the journey, although I'm also kinda sad it's almost over! :( So fab story, thanks for posting it and I can't wait to read more from you!
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Just lovely and perfect. I think I actually like more your version hehe
Thanks for the time and effort you dedicated to write this story
Im going to read your other story and hope I'll be reading your stories again soon
Have a nice week
Daniela
Reviewer: Dahlia Raynes (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Okay I'm just going to say it now. But what about the baby?! I really thought there was going to be a baby in the picture before the story ended. She absolutely forgot her pessary when they had sex for the last time before leaving Altoona. You also keep dropping hints about how important children(especially Edwards children) have become to Bella. Carlisle kept asking her if she was pregnant. I think even Maggie mentioned something didn't she? Please don't just glaze over that in the Epilogue if it is going to happen. Give us some details. I think Bella and Edward deserve that.
I just don't want to see this story end. I know its been a long time to get here but it just seems like its over too soon. You have done a fantastic job with it.
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
I loved this chapter! Curious to know how she went back in time. Maybe Maggie had something to do with it ;-)
Reviewer: stmur (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
I like how you implied canon with Midnight Sun. (If that sentence makes any sense.) When he's first in Alaska, sitting in a snowbank and can see her face everywhere he looks. Reading that with your story it's like his mind was trying to remember.
I have loved your story and cannot wait for the epi. Although waiting for the epi is a little bittersweet.
Sorry for the disjointed review. It's early. :)
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
AHHH!!!! I LOOOVEEE THIIISSS!!!!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
awww Alice's displeasure at not getting mentioned in Alistair's book was highly amusing :)
Bella's got her new&improved&old Edward back finally :)
So sad that the tale is almost over... but it's been such a great time!!!!
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Holy Crow! I am completely in love with absolutely everything you did in this chapter. You tied up every loose end perfectly! I loved all the explanations, Carlisle and Bella's reunion, Carlisle keeping a scrapbook, Alistair's book, the ending for Maggie, Emmett's step mom, ...... basically every-frickin'-thing you had jam packed into this chappie. It was wonderful, and exactly the ending I had hoped for all along. I'm so sad this story is coming to a close....but I'll definitely be rereading it many times!
Reviewer: lunastar (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Love it , love it, love it
Reviewer: melmarett (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
I almost feel sad that this story is almost over!
I am a terrible reviewier, but being a Mum kinda does that when you have so much limited time to reading and being a Mum.
Never the less I have enjoyed this fic sooo much, and it hasnt been predictable as other stories, and you have kept me on my toes all thorughout this fic in what will happen next! Its just so damn refreshing!
Look forward to the Epi! Thanks soo much! XO
Mel
Reviewer: tinkerbellkm (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
i really like how your ending the story but i'm kind of curious as to where bella and edward's wedding bands are.
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Great chapter!!!! I'm so glad he gave her some!!!
Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
omg amazing! This chapter cleared up everything! Your story makes so much sense like it could have actually happened this way. The details you included were just perfect! And Bella and Edward finally making love at the end was perfection. Awesome story, I am so glad I got the chance to read and enjoy it!
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Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
How do you make me laugh and cry in the same chapter. "Once false move and bam. Crack whore." That has cracked me up through this whole story. And I love the line, "I'll see you in Biology. Don't kill me okay." That just breaks my heart. It was nice to be reminded of the rivalry (which I loved by the way) that Edward and Carlisle had over Bella. This has been a really well written story based on a great original idea. I'm looking forward to the Epilogue!
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
That was lovely. I'm sad to see this story come to an end.
Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story so much but if I could change one thing I would have changed that damn pessary thingy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
fabulous!! kinda glad you just let them be happy and there was no her mad at him bit.... it's been overdone to death ;)
sad to see this end ;(
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
YOu know, as I was reading the explanation part, I found myself liking your version better than Stephanie's. I"ve never felt that way before. I specifically liked how Edward's reaction to Bella was so strong and he felt so protective made more sense once you learned of their long history together. That feels like a better explanation. So bravo to your creative mind! Well done...
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
AWESOME!!!! Glad they are getting a HEA in a wonderful way. Looking forward to the epi.
Thanks for a wonderfully creative story!! :)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Ah, to finally have all the answers is the best feeling. Though I do have to agree with Alice, she deserved at least a sentence in Alistar's book. Amazing job, can't wait till the epi. ;)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
As I wrote over at FF,.....just a beautiful story. Great job. One of my top fan fic's of all time (trust me, I have read a lot).
A+++++++++++++++++++++
Reviewer: shiny silver grl (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
lol@ the teeth baby reference. That was something KS said in a magazine article w/ RP & TL, right?
And yay, love the chapter, and Bella getting to finally talk to Carlisle about everything. I really, really wish Edwad could somehow get his memories back, though, that would make everything perfect. Well, even more than the perfect it already is if you leave it this way. Thanks!
Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Oh yeah, I cried with this! I can't believe the epi is all we have left! It was a perfect ending to the story! I really loved the part about Emmett. This part was great:
I nodded in appreciation. God knows we didn’t need any little half-vampire teeth babies running around, if such a thing was even possible.
I couldn't help but laugh at that nod to BD. Well done! Can't wait for the epi!
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