Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
i've really loved this story! it's so original! i'm sad to see it end. great job!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
Nice story. Thanks for writing it!
Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
I loved the ending... reading this was awesome!!!! Thanks for wrapping everything up in a pretty little bow!!! much love~ Whitney
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
How cool that Bella got back her things from 1918 with the help of Maggie's bit o- the sight.
I was surprised that Bella was changed before the wedding; even though they were technically already married.
All in all, it was a fun journey
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
Excellent ending!
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
beautiful story. Although it was too late from bella to see maggie again, it was great that she got to see her grandchidren. this was truely a one of a kind story. :)
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
I can't believe it's over, it was so damn good!!!
Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future
i loved this story so much...it's sad and happy all at the same time. a sequel would do the original no justic...it was a perfect ending for a beautiful story.
Reviewer: Evaporation (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
This is has piqued my interest immediately.So I will continue.beautifully done.
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
YES!!!! I LOOOOVED IT!!!This has been an AWESOME fic, im gonna miss it ;)
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 23: Of Rings and Revelations
Thank you for the link to all your pictures on FF!!! I really think it adds to the story to see what your are writing about and to see if that is what I invision;)
Reviewer: transitory_moment (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations
Noooooooooooooooo! I feel like crying!
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
Wow this is getting good. I love the mystery! I was wondering if she was going to have to choose something..
Reviewer: tree111 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds
just love this story...you rock. most definitely i need to read more of your stuff.
Thanks!
Reviewer: vampluvr88 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Delish! I have reread many chapters before the ending. I could picture the scenes vividly!! Thanks for a great piece of Bedward fiction!
Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
This has been my favorite story. Just perfect!
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
LOVE LOVE IT! This is a great ending....i cant wait for the epilogue....i love how you tied everything together from alistair lol to everyone else and how edward found out. I am glad he didnt fight it once he heard the truth....you are a great writer!
Reviewer: moonlightfan78 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
what a wonderful story. I have been hooked from the beginning. thanks for such a wonderful story :)
Reviewer: vwbuggin1 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Hello,
I have to admit I am not quite ready for this story to end and I wish it had been drawn out especially when Bella returns home. I was hoping for Edward to have an epiphany and remember it all.
Are you thinking of a sequel? I would love that. Just an amazing story that was quickly updated, well written, and worth reading several times like the books (though not 100% fond of Breaking Dawn).
Edward slowly remembering or it all comes back would really make lots of us readers happy I believe:)
Thank you for entertaining me with an excellent fic.
Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
I have really loved this story thanks for whighting it! Bella1
Reviewer: vegivamp (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
this chapter is amazing i think is one of the best chapters of this story and this is really random but are you really 14? i was reading sex tips & star trek and i scan through your profile and i read your 14 i was just wondering cause i'm about the same age
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
I don't even know how to review this chapter lol! It was absolutely amazing!! I loved the explanations of everything that's happened! It all fit perfectly and made soo much sense!! I love when Bella and Edward had their little exchange of their saying :D!! That was soo cute!! That part combined the past couple with the present couple! Emmett being Liza's step-son was amazing too! It's like everyone was connected some how and we never even knew it lol! I loved how they were joking around with how Edward was a jerk back then, but Bella fell in love with him!
I really loved not only this chapter, but the whole story! I had no idea how everything would fit together in the end, but I think you did an amazing job! This was an amazing story :)! I know you still have the epilogue to post, but I thought I would tell you that lol! You are an amazing writer!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
That was fab! It had a really great feeling about it. I loved finding out what happened to everyone at Maggie's. And now Bella & Edward are really together again. Perfect!
Reviewer: siobhansgift (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
LOVED IT!
Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Commitments
Wow, your story is so beautiful. I am in love with it and I'm so sad it is coming to an end, I have silent tears running down my cheeks. It feels right though for it to come to an end.
I'm also mourning their children, do you think Bella could be pregnant? Could be be pregnant with Human Edward's baby?? They did have lots of sex and whatever it was she used isn't 100% safe!!! Wishful thinking. Ah well.
Thank you for writing this story. It has warmed my heart. It all tied in perfectly, good job!! I'll be recommending it!!
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