Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Of Corsets and Confusion
Really really really good
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you like it so far!
Reviewer: airekel (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Of Corsets and Confusion
Thanks for another great chapter. It's great that Bella found someone to take her in -- somewhere she can stay while she's there. Of course, I can hardly wait until she meets up with Edward. I know he won't know her -- but, hopefully, he will get to know her -- causing new memories for him in the present and leading him back to Bella. At least, that's what *I* want to happen, but I guess I will have to wait and see. :)
Thanks again for another terrific chapter. I hope you post another one really soon. :)
Author's Response: Oh you know I can't tell you what's going to happen - what would be the fun in that!? :-)
Edward enters the story soon - just be patient - Bella has a few things to take care of first.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter022 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Of Corsets and Confusion
ending with bella fainting and having a spaz atack!!!!!!!! ;) evil!!! ;)
please update soon! i love it!
-twi
Author's Response: Lol! Have to keep you coming back for more, don't I? :-)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Of Corsets and Confusion
THIS IS WONDERFUL I CANT WAIT FOR MORE
Author's Response: Thanks so much - next chapter should be up soon!
Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
This is a fascinating twist. If the means by which Bella has returned to 1918 is anything like that used in the movie Somewhere in Time ... Well, I certainly wouldn't object!
And then there is the whole time loop / time paradox problem. I can't wait to see how you solve this!
Author's Response: Oh I remember that movie - with Christopher Reeve, right? Don't remember the details of how it happened though.
Glad you're liking the story so far... thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Belindella (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
Woah! Talk about grab my interest. I was wondering how you were going to do the time travel thing. Can't wait to see how it all pans out in the next chapter. Lovely writing style. "And I longed for him." made me tear up!
Glad the chapter worked out for you on the other site. ;)
Author's Response: Oh it's you!! Thanks so much for the tip on that! Glad you're enjoying the story so far... thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mom2bells1 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
Excellent plot development! Great chapter.
loved it!
Author's Response: Glad you like it so far... thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: airekel (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
I also meant to tell you that I wouldn't have known that this is your first fanfic, if you hadn't said so. What you've written so far is great! Thanks again. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :-)
Reviewer: airekel (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
Thank you for the beginning of what looks like it's going to be an awesome story. I realize that this is not actually the beginning, and I apologize for not reviewing the prologue, but, after reading it, I had to read through all you had written so far.
I have to say that I really hope that Bella's vision -- which from the prologue and your summary is obviously going to be of her going back and meeting Edward in 1918 -- really happens, and isn't just an halucination from the mushroom. And that it gives Edward new memories, and brings him back to her. I *don't* want it to end up showing Bella that she is supposed to choose the path that leads to Jacob. Sorry, I like Jacob, but he and Bella are not meant to be anything more than friends. I'm a Team Edward girl all the way, and in my world, Edward and Bella have to end up happilly together *forever*.
I laughed out loud at Jacob's vision. Couldn't possibly tell you what I think it means -- unless -- it a forsehadow of how he's going to act to Bella when she tells him she's going back to Edward -- but that's not funny.
Thanks again for a really interesting beginning. I can hardly wait to read more, so I hope you update again soon. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your wonderful review. You do bring up some excellent points and your questions will be answered. That's all I can say for now... don't want to give too much away!
Just remember, as Freud says, sometimes a cigar is just a cigar... and sometimes a giant d** is just a giant d**! Lol! We'll have to wait and see! :-)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
Great chapter
Great plot
Author's Response: Glad you like it so far - thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter022 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
yay!! thanks for the update i love this story!!!
please update soon ;)
-twi
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! Glad you like the story - next chapter should be up soon.
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
Ok this story has me intrigued!! Will be fav this. Great start, well done.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review - glad you enjoying it!
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
Dang! And I thought the prologue was good! But I was mesmerized throughout this chapter.
Your Bella is far snarkier than the original but I love her already. Too cool that you used Native rituals to travel her back in time. It's an outlandish theory (time travel) but you've grounded it well in reality. And your preface-quotes serve to "brainwash" the reader into believing it's possible. ;-D
Your story is awesome and I can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for sharing.
Author's Response: Yeah, the idea's out there - but that's why it's called fantasy, right? :-) Glad you're enjoying it so far and you like my feisty Bella. Thanks for the review - the next chapter should be up soon - hope you like it!
Reviewer: hittherhino (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
delightful! had to admit, I could not predict what kind of chapter it would be with a title like that, but I LOLed :-) I look forward to more!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review - next chapter should be up soon.
Reviewer: 0ojoyo0 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
Love it! It's so different than anything else, and I can't wait to see where it leads.
Author's Response: So glad you like it! Thanks for the review - next chapter should be up soon.
Reviewer: fashionista19 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
I'm intrigued. I love your story so far & can't wait to see where you take it; it's so unique! Definitely adding it to my favorites! Waiting for an update : )
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it so far... next chapter should be up soon. Hope you like it!
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
Lovely second chapter....well, except for the Jacob parts. I really don't like him at all but it's not like he's your original character, right? ; ) I like the idea of how Bella gets back to Edward....very original!
Author's Response: Ah, poor Jacob... destined to being unloved! Lol! Thanks for the review - I hope you like where the story goes from here.
Reviewer: ss77 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
Tricky. I like it. My curiosity of what will come next it totally peaked.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review - hope you like where the story goes from here.
Reviewer: katmom1 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
I loved it. More please.
Reviewer: katmom1 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
I loved it. More please.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing - next chapter is in the queue and should be up soon. Hope you like it!
Reviewer: orcagirl09 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
oh I love this idea. I really look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading - glad you like the premise. Update should be posted soon - hope you like it!
Reviewer: k80cue (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
Hi
Like the start - cant wait to read more.
Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing... next chapter's in the queue... should be updated soon. Hope you like it!
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
This sounds like it's going to be an interesting story! I love the premise that Bella goes back and finds Edward before he gets sick and is changed. I'm anxious to see if he's going to feel the same way about her though. ;-)
Author's Response: Well, we shall see.. :-) Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next chap will be up as soon as it's validated - hope you like it!
Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 03:18 AM · On: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
Brilliant plot bunny!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading... hope you like where the story goes.
Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Prologue - Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
Nice start. I look forward to where you go with this.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing - glad you like it so far. Update is coming soon and I hope you like where the story goes from here.
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