That chapter was BLOODY BRILLIANT! I loved it, loved it, LOVED IT! Carlisle has the hots for Bella. Edward is gonna grill Bella when he gets her alone and poor Bella and those dreams.

Alice is really trying to get her back. I know she is. Bella is really screwing up the future. What are the changes going to be if or when she gets back???

HURRY, hurry, hurry the next chapter. You have me jumping in my seat each time I get an update!!!!!

Author's Response:

Careful - don't jump too high and fall off! LoL!

So glad you liked the chapter... :-)

I've LMAO through this chapter! My fave so far!

Wonderful chapter. Bella must choose? I think she will choose her future Edward that she fell in love with. :) But I'm sentimental.

Thank you for sharing your story. Excellent writing as well.

Author's Response:

Well, we'll see... ;-)

Glad you liked the chap - thanks for R&R!

Freaking loving this story! I am really enjoying the human Edward and the interested Carlisle.

Author's Response:

Thanks - so glad you're liking it! :-)

Wow.  I LOVE this story.  Is Carlisle developing less thant fatherly feellings for Bella?  THat concerns me...

I love that Edward is jealous.  He needs to step up his game!  I am eager for him to suffer from another lack of restraint.  I can't wait to read more.  I am so eager to find out how everything is going to fall into place.  Excellent chapter!!!

Author's Response:

Erm... yes, I believe he is. :-)

Glad you liked the chapter... Edward's restraint will prove to be a bit of a challenge for Bella... we'll see how she handles that... LoL! :-)

This has nothing to do with the price of eggs in China, but I couldn't get the spirit world scene from the movie Young Guns out of my head. Dirty Steve talking to his horse, "Dawg! Dawg?! Did youuu see the size a that chicken?!?!" LMAO! Ehem...sorry, sorry.

Sooo....anyway....Great story so far! Jake narrowly escaping a giant cock in the woods?! AWESOME!!LOL Makes me wish I had paid more attention to the Freudian crap in psych. *shrugs* oh well. =)

 

Author's Response:

*giggle* Well I think Freud did say "Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar"... maybe the same goes for giant dicks! LoL!

Glad you're enjoying the story so far - thanks for R&R! :-)

I want a phonograph in my car.  That was too cute.  This whole story has me giggling.  But Carlisle seems to have faded into the background.  What's up with that?  And the Alice situation is freaking me out.  I know she's warning Bella but Bella  hardly seems concerned. 

Author's Response:

Bella just doesn't know what to make of the Alice visions. We know they're probably important, but she doesn't... and in any case, she doesn't know what she can do about them... so she just carries on.

Carlisle will be back and is important to the whole story, but E&B needed a little time for their relationship to start to develop. You'll see some more of Carlisle in the next few chapters.

Glad you're enjoying the story so far... thanks for reading! :-)

I freaking LOVE this story!  I would have gone through and commented on every chapter, but I honestly just couldn't stop pushing the next button!  It's absolutely beautiful to see Bella and Edward in such a passionate argument- or a passionate kiss.  I can't even begin to count the times I've laughed during this story- it's so amazing! 

 

But much like the other readers, I am worried about the butterfly effect.  She's meddling and that scares me.  Granted- she could as she said, take Edward away, marry him, have kids, etc etc.... but what if she "wakes up" before she has a chance to do that, and she doesn't meet Eddie in the future??? OR! What if she gets him out of hte city but he still comes down with the influenze.. and she can't get him to Carlisle in enough time! AH!

 

yes- i'm freaking out a little bit.  I can NOT wait for an update!
xoxo

 

ps- this date was ADORABLE!

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the story so far. Your questions are all good ones - and Bella will address them in the next few chapters. She does believe she's doing what she's supposed to do... *shrugs*

But don't freak out... we'll get through it together! LoL! :-)

Okay, I take back most of the negative things I said about Edward in the beginning. He's adorable!

I am still a bit nervous about the implications of what Bella's little journey will have on the future. But if this is in fact just a really long dream, well I guess it's all just a moo point anyway.

I'll be looking forward to your next update!

 

**Oh, I love all of the Rob pics you keep posting on Twitter...yummm!!

Author's Response:

Yay! Glad Edward's growing on you! :-) Thanks for R&R!

Oh - and Rob pics do make the day a little brighter, don't they? Mmmmm.... ;-)

Oh I just loved carefree Edward!  I really love vampward...but it's so nice seeing him act like a regular seventeenyearold.  And Bella trying to be seductive...bahaha...too cute!

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter - thanks for reading! :-)

I love the banter between Bella and Edward, I wish there was more of this in the series. It makes them more real and shows how well they work together.

 

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the review! :-)

Oh , she said Mr. Cullen , that is not yet Eiddie's name. I love Eiddie chasing Bella for his ribbon , I started to laugh out loud (LOL) and got weird looks from everyone in my house. Bella almost touched Alice , I now don't know what to think about the whole Alice thing, so i'll just have to wait untill you tell us. I'm starting to miss the good doctor , but the humor in your writing makes it better. I can't be mad about the lack of doctor when i'm laughing my face off. My fave. part of this chapter had to be Bella and Eddie's angry kiss , it was AWESOME. PLEASE KEEP WRITING.

Author's Response:

Carlisle will be back... he's an important part of the story. Glad you enjoyed the chapter... and we'll find out in the next one how Edward responds to Bella's little mistake... ;-)

Thanks for reading...

I just found your story and read through all nine chapters in one sitting. I wasn't sure if I would like the plot at first, but I have to admit your writing drew me in almost immediately. And now I can't get enough of it! It's brilliant!

I am glad you had that A/N at the end of Chapter 9 because I was starting to scream at Bella. What is she doing? I can understand her desire just to be with Edward and, at this point, she doesn't know that she has a future with Edward back in two thousand and whatever so this may be her only chance to find happiness. However, she could really, really screw everything up here if she really believes she has, in fact, gone back in time. I don't want Carlisle left alone without his family. It would be just too sad.

I'm loving the love story progressing with Bella and human Edward even though I am rooting for him to be back to our beloved vampire Edward before the end of this story. And I am hoping for even more Carlisle/Bella interaction where maybe she opens up to him a bit more. Could she at least tell him he won't be alone forever?

O.k., enough ranting. Please update soon as I am curious of how Edward will react to being called Mr. Cullen. Please don't make him think Bella is just a slut who can't keep her dates names right. Not a good ending to a date. Just out of curiosity, do you know yet about how many chapters your story will be?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Your questions are good ones, but if I answer them, it will probably ruin the story for you. All I can say is that you can trust that I will not make my favorite characters miserable... does that help? :-)

How long? Not sure at this point. The story is outlined, and if I had to guess on a number of chapters, I'd say 40-ish... but that's just a guess. The outline does get tweaked a bit as I go along, and some things I think will take a chapter take longer... or shorter.

We'll see how Edward responds to Bella's slip of the tongue in the next chapter.

Thanks for reading! :-)