Awesome, incredible story!  I've never been more drawn in and attached to a group of characters!  I hope you write your own novels, you are an incredible writer!

I am loving this story, and think you are a very good writer!  You could write your own book, your writing style just "flows." 

This is the best story I've read in quite a while, I don't know how many times I cried or smiled or laughed! This is deffinetly the best alternate version of this story!! Thanks for writing such a wonderful story it's definetly one I will read several times over!!

This is so original! Love the hidden jokes between Carlisle and Bella!

Well, thank god you finished this before I started reading; I've spent the past 3 days catching up and I don't think I could have handled running out of chapters :) This story really gripped me, even though I normally can't abide sci-fi, if that's what you'd call time travelling. Thank you for spending so much time writing (+ completing!) such an intricate story with such wonderful characters, a true masterpiece for this site!! 10*

THIS IS AWESOME.


you are the best writer ever. jesus. publish an original book ffs.

I love when a story literally makes me laugh out loud...it lets me know I'm invested in the story and am believing the characters.  I laughed out loud at the last line of this chapter!  Thanks for what I've read so far, I'm really enjoying this story!

Wow what a story! Definately a must read. I felt a little weird about the Carlusle/Bella thing but in the end it makes sense and I still think that instinctually he loved her more as a daughter than a romantic interest although it does make sense how he was drawn to her. Great writing :)

Hi!  I just wanted to say I read your story as it was still being posted, but never reviewed, and I wanted to tell you now how much I enjoyed it.  I should've reviewed at the time, and I'm sorry I didn't.  I love the idea of Bella getting to know Edward while he was still human.  So much so, actually, that your story inspired me to try to write my own, which I did.  I really didn't think I'd actually finish it, but I did.  It took over a year to write, but now that it's finished and is being posted, I'm so glad I did it.  And now that I know how unbelievebly awesome it is to get reviews, I'm really sorry I didn't review yours as I was reading it, and I wanted to take a few seconds to say thank you!

I have never been so thrilled to have such a long fanfic.  Sooooo awesome! Thank you.

It is almost 2am and I have to get up in a bit to get my kids ready for school and I cant stop reading this.  Fun, energetic, engaging and I love all your characters.  Jake's spirit walk was so funny, I sat here shaking the bed, trying not to wake my husband for like, 4 miniutes.  Awesome.

My most favorite piece of fanfiv I have ever read. This is the 2nd time I read it:)/ I hope to read some more of your works in the future.

One of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I read it on my Kindle and I couldn't put it down.   If you're not a professional writer, you should be!  Absolutely loved it.  I felt that I was transported back to 1918.   Loved the way you were able to seemlessly incorporate the cannon story and the fiction story so that it all made sense.  I teared up when I read the chapters involving Edwards parents deaths and his changing.  And the love scenes were hot and sexy without being over the top or raunchy.  Wonderful job of expressing the love between Edward and Bella. 

I have just recently discovered Twilighted.net and I will be sure to continue reading your stories.  Thank you so much for all the hours of reading enjoyment.