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Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 35
Ah....hello... a newborn on plane??? FTW. U can't be serious. Private or not, there is still a human on board.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 32
1st off: John survived????. ( Taking some liberties i see). Vamp bite are supposed to be poisonous
2nd: Gr8 fight scenes Bella vs W.Wolf and Bella vs John. She is 2 -0, in this chapter. But all together she is 3 - 3 if you count the fights w/ jasper, edward and emmett.
3rd: Tanya may not have know, but im sure John did. He was practically committing suicide. Tanya is not going to like the fact that he held back that piece of information.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 31
Going after a werewolve.... mistake. You didnt mention the color of the wolf, so im guessing its sam.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 30
oh oh, Tanya better inform the family quick about trying to change John. She needs to be warned against trying to change a wolf. I assume he imprinted, so that means he has been transforming. PROBLEM!.
Secrets are bad!.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 29
Tanya got imprinted on. That leaves me w/ a question. Is imprinting as strong or stronger than mating?. From the fact that bella was trying so hard to break her mating bond leaves me to believe that imprinting strips away will as well.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 27
I had not given one thought as to the upcoming move to Russia or how Edward and I would handle that. Would I leave my family or would he leave his? -excerpt
I honestly don't know how this is gonna play out... This version is very AU, normal decisions and circumstances don't apply.
Bella is Edwards mate... that has been confirmed and accepted. Now the drama begins.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 24
Its about bloody time she stop denying the fact that she is part of a mated couple. When she left w/ that dude, it was almost as painful to watch her w/ that first dude. What am i talking about, it was worst. She left w/ the intention to get pounded out by someone who wasn't her mate. That really sucks.
I understand her need to please tanya in your version, but seriously; the only one that thought tanya and edward was in a relationship was tanya. Everyone else the truth. If edward didn't fall in love w/ her instantly, the as a vampire she should know it wasnt meant to be. And if he has sex w/ her or something then he still would've ended up leaving her, b/c she is NOT his mate.
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Q:DId they still have thier clothes on?... thats what it sounded like. What's that french word...oh yea, frottage!
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 24
DId they still have thier clothes on?... that what it sounded like. What's that french word...oh yea, frottage!
Reviewer: Rebeca (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 10:45 AM · On: Epilogue
I just read this story again, for like the millionth time!! I love it so much! Definitley one of my all time favourite stories!!! :D <3<3<3
Author's Response: OMG. You don't know what that means to me! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 18
awwwww shit.
Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 16
Damn...
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2011 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 21
Friends with bennifits(; I'm enjoying your story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 10:57 AM · On: Epilogue
I loved the story! But I was wondering.... where were Carmen and Eleazar?
Author's Response: Thanks. I decided not to have them as a part of my Denali coven.
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 16
Ah! It's so good! I love how you end the chapters, always leaving the reader in Edward's position, desperately wanting more.
Author's Response: Lol. Thank you so much. I can't believe you're reading it a second time!!! It always makes me feel so happy when I see pople truly enjoying something I created.
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 9
I love this story. It's my second time reading. Thank you.
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 30
AWE!!!!!!!!!! John and Yanya are so cute together!!!!!!!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 28
Oh my gosh Tanya and Jacob!!!!
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Epilogue
this story was really good. it was mostly fluffy and gah the build up to the first lemon was AWESOME lol. Some writers have a gift where they can suck you into the world they created and you can see everything unfold so clearly, and you have that gift. Great work!
Author's Response: Oh Thank so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: pattyway (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Epilogue
you did pimp it out gf! nice job i enjoyed it a great deal.. very creative.
Reviewer: pattyway (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 24
mouthwatering
Reviewer: pattyway (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 16
Breathtaking
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 25
Poor Tanya!!!!!!!!!!
I do love how Irina and Kate reminded Bella tha they loved her no matter what!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 24
Poor Bella!!!!!!!! I love how she finally told Edward everything and how she's not fight her attraction to edward any more!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 20
I love how Jasper and Bella have a brother/sister relationship and how she confides in him!
I also love how Edward is confiding in Esme!
""What? You don't have to thank me! I've been waiting for this opportunity for nearly 80 years!" she laughed before kissing""
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 11
"It's about time. You move almost as fast my old pet turtle," I said. It was my turn to wear the smug smirk.
"Cocky and a boaster...figures," he replied rolling his eyes but I could see the humor in his eyes. "And to think I was going to congratulate you."
"I don't need a congratulations. I just want to hear you admit defeat," I told him.
He shook his head in exasperation and swept me a grand bow. "I have eaten the dust of the almighty speedy one," he said in a mock grovel""
AWE Poor Edward is jealous of Jasper!
I have read Aegis and I loved it!
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