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Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 12:46 PM · On: One Shot

Ooooh, I LOOOOOVE this.....can't wait for the multi chapter story!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I just submitted the first chapter of the expanded story today so hopefully it'll be up in a few days.

Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 07:22 AM · On: One Shot

Woohoo! So glad to hear that you'll be posting a multi-chapter story :)  I really loved this...especially Bella's snark.  I can't wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

Snarky Bellas are my favorite Bellas! ;)

I'm glad you liked it. I just submitted the first chapter of the expanded story today so it should be up in a few days.

 

Reviewer: justfornow (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 06:16 AM · On: One Shot

This was awesome! I can't wait for you to start posting more :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! The first chapter has been submitted for validation and should be up in a few days.

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 04:14 AM · On: One Shot

good start, not really a one shot to me but still good, only problem was you kept refrencing bella trying to complete her BA...her BA in what? :S thought that was weird that she never mentioned her major, cant wait to read the fully expanded fic :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I realized after the fact that it wasn't a one-shot in the traditional sense. When the Indie Writers' Competition opened, I'd had this story swirling in my head but had been too chicken to actually post anything so I tried to take what was essentially a full-story concept and fit it into a one-shot format.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 04:13 AM · On: One Shot

Great!  I look forward to the multi-chapter story



Author's Response:

Thank you! Chapter one is in the validation queue playV2('en/US/df/dfsjssdystdohr');playV2('en/UK/df/dfsjssdystdohr') and should be up within the next few weeks.

Reviewer: LipV (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 03:00 AM · On: One Shot

I know you've just started this, but thank you. Not only are you straying away from perfect skinny Bella, but you have made your Bella full of flaws but she still holds an incredible strength. I love that Edward isn't perfect either. Your words have motivated me to get off my ass and change my life as well. Again thank you, and I'm looking forward to this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely review! I want them all flawed, physically and otherwise, because I think that's how most people I know are. My hope is that I can make their struggles seem realistic (even in the very surreal context of a game show) but still make them full of life and entertaining to read about. *fingers crossed*

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