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Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 10:16 PM · On: Edward

I liked the banter between Edward and Jasper. It felt very real.

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 09:59 PM · On: Edward

Okay lets go I love it and I wwant you to continue....Please

Reviewer: crazyforedwardrn (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 09:47 PM · On: Edward

Loved it red....
loved the detail on how E and J met and grew up together
and you made me have a goofy grin when E said,"revealing the most beautiful woman I had ever seen." I know they will get together in every story but each time you get to see him meet her for the first time like that....sigh....very nicely done

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 07:06 PM · On: Edward

I'm definitely enjoying this so far! Can't wait to see the story unfold.

Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 06:52 PM · On: Edward

Liking it so far, like how Edward describes Bella. Looking forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 06:21 PM · On: Edward

Hmm...it was good, but very similar to the first, I know it was the same, just in Edward's POV. I liked it though!

Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 05:30 PM · On: Edward

EXCELLENT and i jump in anticipation for the next chapter!

Reviewer: ahhelga (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 05:08 PM · On: Edward

Very fun. I can't wait to see what's in store for the two of them...
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 01:58 PM · On: Bella

This is gonna ba a good one!!

Reviewer: LiviaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 04:30 AM · On: Bella

I LOVE it !!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read more of your amazingness ! ^^

Reviewer: TheGodsCanDance (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 01:32 AM · On: Bella

Nah, I'll give ya love girl. You who gave us Date Night was only EVER gonna get love from this reader but now I suspect you are gonna get a whole lotta fandom adoration to go alongside it.
This was great. It promises much and ooh la la, I iz excited by that promise! Great stuff.

Reviewer: ahhelga (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 10:35 PM · On: Bella

Ah, very exciting first chapter! I cannot wait to see how this plays out, and, of course, Edward and Bella's relationship unfold. I hope you contine soon! :D
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 05:23 PM · On: Bella

Really Good

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 04:19 PM · On: Bella

Good start!

Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 03:15 PM · On: Bella

I like the story so far and hope that you are able to update soon, I would love to see what Edward thought when he first saw Bella.

Author's Response: EPOV in Chapter 2.....

Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 01:37 PM · On: Bella

wonderful prospects! love it so far! i like the fact that you don't beat around the bush about getting to the bella edward factor! i am kinda impatient ( a big weakness of mine) especially when i have to read like 4 chapters of monotmous backgrounds to get to the good stuff...so YAY for you!
just wondering how old are they and did bella get to go to college or am i ruining some of the plot by asking?

Author's Response: They are all 21 right now...the college question will be answered in Chapter 3 :-)

Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 09:31 AM · On: Bella

*applauds* Excellent start! Can't wait to see were you go with this.

Author's Response: Ooooh....I like applause!!!

Reviewer: BeyondDreams19 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 09:27 AM · On: Bella

Excellent start, can't wait to see how you continue with this :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm excited to write more :-)

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