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Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:17 AM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
I just caught up with the story and it is original. One always fantasizes on what would happen if Edward turned up human ... Fancy, eating like a pig, getting drunk, and wanting sex all the time, Edwardian my ass!
But, would I like for him to remain human or revert to vampire? I am torn (I don't know where you are going, of course). I have the feeling that he will miss to be a vampire, and if he went back, he will accept his condition witrh a lot more equanimitiy. As for Bella, she will love him anyway, but she was attracted ALSO by the monster part. Erotically, even.
Well, anyway, now we have here two humans knowing about vampires. The Volturi are not going to like it ...
Happy writing
Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: chewycui2 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
Lol i think edward should still spend his nights in bella's room, but i keep thinking he'll fall out of the tree while climbing into her room or something. hahaha
Reviewer: venomaddict (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
I know where I'd like Edward to stay the night and Bella wouldn't be invited! *lmao* but of course, you know exactly how my dirty mind works ;)
Reviewer: Armywife22079 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
I know about thr gun thing, shes lucky her dad aint an MP or else Charly would be bringing him his M16 everynight to scare off the boyfriends, How bout Jake's Now that he aint a leech any more Edward can go in to the rez.
Reviewer: Ehllenalin (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Waking Up with Edward
This is the first human!Edward story i've found that I actually like so yay! Finally lol :) so does he get to stay human or will he eventually brome a vampire again?
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
Hmm i have no idea what edward going to do but him and bella are so screwed when they go back to school -lol - love your story cant wait for more
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
That was great! So funny.
Reviewer: EmiMills (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
This is a really interesting story. It's not the kind of thing I'd usually read, but I like it.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
OH COME ON NOW THERE ARE SO MANY THING 2 17 YEAR OLD KIDS COULD FIND TO DO AND HE IS WILLING TO TRY A FEW THINGS OUT DONT KEEP US WAITING LONG
Reviewer: MZmanda (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
OMG!! I love it! This is an AWESOME take on things. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I love Alice's post-it notes, that is too cute.....and SO Alice!
Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Waking Up with Edward
fantastic, very original, can't wait to read more now
Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
No way was I surprised by Edward! Just because he's back in human form doesn't mean he has changed his personality to totally different man, well that is unless you wanted to write it that way....
I think it's hilarious he was in awe of the menu! Having relied on Carlisle & Alice for ordering in the past! LOL!!!
I love this story! I can't wait to see how they handle their hormones...It's all up to you!!!
Regarding where he's gonna spend tomorrow night, well maybe Bella can convince Edward he needs to spend time w/his family and if he still feels extremely uncomfortable, then Bella will tell Charlie that Alice needs her to stay over for some reason.....
Thanks for writing!
dhull (Austin, TX)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
Dman those 1901 morals!......I was really excited for more to happen tonight. The drinking was funny.....
Maybe Edward can say that everyone in his family came down with something really contagious(except for Carlisle, maybe?) and he can't stay with them.. Perhaps he could sleep on Bella's couch? or get a short term apartment?
Reviewer: Sexyvamp (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:54 AM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
hahaha I am 17 and feel like that all the time...my morals come back when my boyfriend leaves
maybe thats a good thing lol
Author's Response: Maybe it is... but you're only 17 once ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:57 AM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
Ahhh, do the morals have to come back and bite him in the A**?? And, excuse me for asking, but why is it in the little world that is AU Twilight, does Bella still have to object vehemently to the idea of marriage??
Seriously, how many woman feel that way until they meet someone who completes their life and they realize that it has nothing to do with a license, or a legal institution, or a ring, or a shared name. Marriage is so much more than that and I guess I keep waiting for Bella to want to mark Edward as hers in one of the only ways a human being can.
Sorry, I will get off my soapbox and go write it in to my own story, maybe... :-)
Author's Response: All I can say is, this is AU, but I have to start as she was... give her time! I personaly agree, and thought some of Bella's character was a bit odd in the series. She will develop a lot as she has to learn to be the strong one for a while.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Ria
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 10:11 PM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
he jizzed in his pants =P
couldn't resist.
LOVE IT!
Author's Response: It's alright, I'm glad I amused you! It amused me too :).
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:54 PM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
I'm glad that Edward is choosing to embrace his human self. As for his morals, I don't think they'll be back to bite him in the ass.
Author's Response: Well, he may struggle a little... but in the long run both Edward and Bella are going to be changed quite a lot by all this!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 09:50 AM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
This is really excellent...I keep trying to figure out if this is all just a dream or something though! Edward was cracking me up looking for the post-it :)
Author's Response: There's a definite reason why he's human... but he's not giving it up just yet :).
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 08:52 AM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
RiaMaria - I'm SO enjoying your fiction! Hormonalward is really funny! Finally he can let loose even though he questions his feelings; he can't help but act on them now that he is a human teenage boy! LOVE IT!!!
I can't wait to see what's going to happen after dinner.....and how well Edward be able to handle being around his vamp family?
Thanks for writing!
dhull (Austin, TX)
Author's Response: Hormonalward.... liking that!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:53 AM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
Awesome story, love it. Are you ever going to explain how he became human?
Author's Response: Oh yes, but not for a bit just yet ;).
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Waking Up with Bella
this story is really quite interesting...I'm anxious to see where you go with it!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 11:11 PM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
Great chapter. Looking forward to seeing how the rest of their night goes. Can't wait to read more. What if this change isn't permanent? Please update soon.
Author's Response: The next update is already awaiting validation...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 10:49 PM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
Wow, I'm just about dying here for the next part. *L* I can just imagine the little things Bella's going to do during dinner to drive Edward to the point of no return. hehehe
Author's Response: In the state Edward's in right now, she's not going to need to do much....
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 10:19 PM · On: What Control?
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
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