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Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Waking Up with Bella
Love the way you described the confusion, fear and love Edward was feeling!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Waking Up with Edward
This is different from anything I've read and it's really intriguing. What the hell has happened? Is it permanent?
Reviewer: xrxdanixrx (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 06:15 AM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
Well, at least Edward didn't cum in 3 minutes! Or did he? Maybe Bella is just as horny as he is. :-)
Reviewer: xrxdanixrx (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 04:19 AM · On: What Control?
"You know me Bella, built in radar detector." I tapped the side of my head and tried to smile, but it turned into a grimace.
"Edward... you're only doing 15 miles an hour..."
- lmao! I nearly died. Too funny.
It's great how he became a horny teenager. He is 17, afterall. :-)
Reviewer: xrxdanixrx (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 04:06 AM · On: Being Human
Very funny chapter!
"No, no wait, I have to cook it!" I snatched the piece out of his hand that he was about to eat raw, and went to look for a frying pan. Meanwhile, Edward continued his investigation of the kitchen. -- LOL, too funny.
No, I did not like "chili" in the slightest. - OMG HAHAHAH!!!
Great job! :-)
Reviewer: xrxdanixrx (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Waking Up with Bella
You're right. This chapter is necessary. Loved the EPOV, and it answered some of my questions from the first.
Clicking next...
Reviewer: xrxdanixrx (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 03:32 AM · On: Waking Up with Edward
I'm LOVING this. I don't usually read AU's, and I found your fic cause I was browsing through people's stories that favorited my "Always Human" series, but I'm really glad I began reading this. I have several chapters to get updated on, but just wanted to let you know!
-Dani
Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Balance of Power
Carlisle and Charlie are awesome dads. I love how you wrote their scene. Deep while still being guys.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I always loved Charlie, even when he was being fed up with Edward, it was only because he deserved it!
Next chap's already in the queue!
Ria
Reviewer: LeeLeeLee (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Balance of Power
Yes i am but i wanna no whats going to happen at night is charlie going to catch him or what lol i cant wait you are an amasing writer.
This story is great keep gonig its so good cant wait for the next chapter. keep writing for me please
Loyal Fan Leonie Waiting And Wanting More lol
Until Next Time xx.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading & Reviewing!
Next chapter's already in the queue...
Ria
Reviewer: hannahmiddleton (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 02:10 AM · On: Balance of Power
i'm really loving your story! Confused and struggling Edward is just to adorable! So glad that Edward won't have to be alone tonight, though curious as to what Alice saw him doing if he had been alone. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: You will get to hear a little from Alice a couple of chapters down the line.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Balance of Power
:) *LMAO* This is just setting up Edward & Bella for romantic nookie failure! hehehe As if either of them is going to be able to resist sneaking to the other, even with the threat of Charlie with a shotgun.
Author's Response: Well, you know there's bound to be trouble of some sort... lol
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Balance of Power
I', glad Edward won't be alone. I just hoe he and Bella can control themselves or he'll get himself kicked out.
Author's Response: Well, you'll soon find out, hormones are a bitch ;)!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Balance of Power
aw that was kinda sweet, but lets get back to those rolling hormones!
Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Balance of Power
I gotta say.. at first I was skeptical about their story and how believable it would be until you had us read it in Carlisle POV (good choice)... once he started to describe it in more detail, I was like, "Yeah.. Edward can sleep on my couch and I wouldn't mind if he slips into my room and...."
oops... mind was wandering off again... my bad *blush*
But, to sum it up.... Good chap and can't wait to see how much more teenward is going to eat ;)
Ok... I kinda have a perverted mind, so I really didn't mean that the way it sounded... (or did I?)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Balance of Power
I AM glad Edward won't be alone in a hotel room! Well, Edward and Bella said they want to wait for sex....this will really test them...Maybe they can have some fun makeout sessions when Charlie is away,,,bet he will be home more, now..LOL!
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Balance of Power
Wow Charlie bought it! This should be very interesting. I liked hearing from Carlisle's pov.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Balance of Power
wonderful, very sweet.
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Balance of Power
Yay I am glad, but will you be able to explain how and why Edward is human?
Reviewer: meeroom16 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Balance of Power
This story is so darn good. I get so excited when I see a new chapter posted. I can't wait to find out why Edward became human again and see the rest of the Cullens.
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Balance of Power
wow i cant believe charlie allowed it - well nm didnt happen so - he really dont hate edward that much lol - i love your story cant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Balance of Power
=]
Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Balance of Power
wow! this is really great!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Balance of Power
why do I see charlie's gun in Edward's future? :P I'm seriously dying to know the big secret...obviously Edward knows. I really have no idea!
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Balance of Power
Well...at least Edward has a home:) I sure hope his hormones stay in check..hehe..or maybe not:) Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: nielanut (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 05:46 PM · On: First Night Blues
Love this story!
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