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Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 02:13 AM · On: Not the Meadow
*LMAO* I can only IMAGINE what kind of antics Edward is going to get up to now that he is dropping his Edwardian ways. I have a sneaking suspicion that what he thinks is going to be easy, is going to be everything but.
Close call in their 'other' meadow...mega HOT scene - not sure how Bella found the strength to remind him of the promise he made her take for him.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Not the Meadow
Great story so far! I just found it and read it tonight and I love it. I am definately curious how Edward became human again and whether or not he is going to stay that way. I'm anxious to see what happens next. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: xrxdanixrx (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Not the Meadow
I don't think he'll be able to do that very well. That kind of turn of the century mentality is pretty strong and can't be surpressed. I'm sure he might try, but certain things will stay with him. I'd be surprised if he just suddenly gives up his sex beliefs to be a kid in the 21st century. That might still take a while.
Reviewer: LikeAir (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Not the Meadow
Nice development - I'm excited to see how Edward handles this new life. Thanks for writing, please keep it up!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Not the Meadow
Wow!
Great nonmeadowish moment. :) I love that Bella is able to express herself and that Edward LET her do so. I mean, that's...like...human! :D
I am wondering if he'll be able to let go of that inner Edwardian man. If, when separated from the allure of all that is Bella and everything he'll feel all right doing so. Self-loathing has been practically his defining characteristic.
And of course...he'll be sleeping on the sofa. lol
Great chapter! This is a delightful story!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Balance of Power
That was a really smooth story for the situation! Wow. Nice one, Carlisle!
He must be torn between joy and regret, so much. You did such a rich job of conveying that. This is just remarkable.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
I love, love, love how he made his purity request in here. It is SO well done of him. He's acknowledging his personality and her own and asking her to help him, which is the BEST way to manage that. That Was. Brilliant. I don't want his morals to come back and haunt him but he obviously was doing a lot of thinking and he has come to a very reasonable place.
Drunk Edward is FUN. :)
I think it's cute that he passed out. And Bella is being wonderful. This might be one of the VERY FEW Bellas that I like!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 04:52 PM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
This is entirely sweet. Edward and his control issues and so on. And the hormones and his self-doubt and all of it. You're mixing it delightfully and I am SO enjoying.
I wonder if his morals need to come bite him in the ass...? I mean... he's HAPPY. Isn't that good?
I hope his feelings are too munched by her almost-freak-out about the wedding ring.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Being Human
Oh this is GREAT. Love the food frenzy. I can just imagine what an experience that would be!
Never knew ice cream was so...um...evocative? I'll have to ask my spouse. ;-) He's never mentioned it, but...
The shower was great. I was REALLY surprised he went there. Relieved, yes, but surprised all the same.
Terrific adventure so far. I am guessing something dreadful is up ahead but I am enjoying this so far!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Waking Up with Bella
I don't know how I've missed this so far, but it's entrancing. I think the fear and worry and the confusion and everything is very well portrayed. I think it's perfect that he's experiencing all this and that, yes, his hormones seem to be in working order. lol
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Not the Meadow
Great chapter.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Not the Meadow
Do I think I can go the next four or five years without making love to my girl?
I would have to say no....OH YEAH..baby's going to get 100 years worth of sex!!!!!!
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Not the Meadow
Yay! Edward is finally going to let loose in some stanza! But I hope he doesn't do anything bad with that letting go that could hurt his relationship.
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Not the Meadow
I'm glad Blla was able to keep her promise. I can't wait to see if Edward is abe to keep his promise to himself.
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Not the Meadow
a lot for him to think about.
Reviewer: kochkai000 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 01:12 PM · On: What Control?
this is amazing! please continune!
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Not the Meadow
Oh, I just am sooo loving this story! What a great chapter! I love to see the more teenage side of Edward. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: CleanEco (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Not the Meadow
Horray...let Edward go 21st century wild and crazy!
Reviewer: ShadowQueen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Waking Up with Edward
Congrats with the great chapter! I love it, and I have to admit that I've never read anything like it before ^^
It's very original, and I'm hoping it turns out okay between Edward and Carlisle.
Love,
SQ
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Not the Meadow
Loved it. Loved it. Can't wait to read morel
Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Not the Meadow
YYYeeeeeeeyyyyy!!!!Finally, I can't wait to see what 21st century Edward is going to be like and the things he is going to do... Great Story, so much can happend with this plot...so many posibillities you can really take the story to any place you like. : )
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Not the Meadow
love it cant wait for more =)
Reviewer: xrxdanixrx (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
Oh Edward. I don't like your promise at all! But you were right to not let him have sex with Bella. It'd be OOC.
Do not pass go, do not collect $200. <--- This is brilliant, btw. :-)
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 08:35 PM · On: What Control?
It's getting steamy...
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Being Human
Holy crap! This chapter was absolutely hysterical!!! There were so many funny parts I can't even tell you which ones I loved the most - everything was simply amazing!
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