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Reviewer: tallgirl677 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Acceptance
Wasn't this chapter updated yesterday ?
Author's Response: It was, next chapter is already in the queue. There will be a wait for validation unfortunately....
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Ria.
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Waking Up with Edward
ooow.. I really ejoyed this first chapter, looking forward to reading on x
Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Acceptance
I love love love this story. You make it so fun, and exciting, and now I love it even more since I am from the Florida Keys. If it's privacy they are looking for Florida Keys is your place, plus lots of warm oceans all around ussssss. hehehe. As usual can't wait for your next chapter!!!!!! : )
Reviewer: samiam73 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Waking Up with Edward
I enjoyed the first chapter...moving on!!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Acceptance
:) I thought this chapter was all manners of cuteness. Edward in all his old-fashioned ways, too embarassed to say *whispers* CONDOM *blushes*. Their heavy petting session was hot and risque, especially with Charlie in the room next door. I'd never have done that at 17 in my parent's house! *L*
Very much looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Acceptance
that was really really really amaizing! the lemons are HOT!! love it!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 02:13 AM · On: Acceptance
naughty bella..:D
Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Acceptance
NIce writing. Still wonder where this is going however...
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Acceptance
So he's still holding out on us. Well you definitely made up for it with the contents in this chapter! I'm dying to find out, maybe it has something to do with drinking her blood? I don't know! Anyways, again, great job! Keep up the good work. ;)
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Acceptance
I really love this story...Can't wait for more and to see if they get to the Florida Keys...
Reviewer: DazzledMexicanMidget (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Acceptance
Love, Love, Love this story!!! I wonder if all the cullens will become human? Or if Bella and Edward will become vampires instead. Because with morallity, comes death, and I really like my Edella alive! :)
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Acceptance
This is frickin adorable- You absolutely rock!!!
Reviewer: julbie (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 08:26 PM · On: A New Man
This story is yummy! I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: I am fighting against the validation queue I'm afraid. It seems to be insane atm, the next chapter has been in the queue for over a week now.
There is actually quite a bit more of this story out there already, if you look for it. I'm trying to get up to date on here as fast as possible, but that isn't going so well. I am editting and improving this story as I move it to Twilighted (not a lot, but a little), but if you wanted to get ahead of the game, you could try the usual suspects for the full 27 chapters already out there... (I'm not sure about the ettiquette of revealing that fact!)
Leave me some reviews over there if you do the cheeky thing though, eh? ;)
Ria
Reviewer: julbie (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 09:31 AM · On: A New Man
Just want you to know I love this story and I'm anxiously awaiting an update!!!
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:18 PM · On: A New Man
MEANEST CLIFFIE EVER!!!!!!!!!!! Of course I want to see/read their first time. That's a lemon worth waiting for but how the heck did Edward become human? It's driving me nuts. I keep trying to figure it out. Pixie dust, shooting star??? What the heck? All I can figure out is I think I know why he is so afraid of Carlisle. Even though he is a doctor and the most controlled, he did bite Edward at one point. It only makes sense to be afraid. Oh and Renee is way too open. Erectile dysfunction, too funny LOL
Author's Response: Meanest cliffie ever?
Nah. I can do waaaaay better than that... you'll see!
Edward will spill within the next couple of chapters, promise!
Ria
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 05:56 PM · On: A New Man
Okay, I am so curious as to what Edward did to become human. Also, can't wait for the two hormonal teens to be let loose on each other.
Author's Response: Edward will spill within the next couple of chapters, promise!
Ria
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 02:51 PM · On: A New Man
oh edward!!! exciting things to come!!
Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 03:12 AM · On: A New Man
what did he do to turn human anyway? I wanna KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i wanna know NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great chapter
Author's Response: Oh how I'd love to tell you....
Unfortunately we're both having to wait on the validation queue, Edward will spill within the next couple of chapters though, promise!
Ch12 is already in the queue!
Ria
Reviewer: StefanieRCullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 12:49 AM · On: A New Man
I stumbled over this fic yesterday and was captivated by it.
It's a tricky theme making vamp Edward becoming human Edward. There are a couple of stories out there but yours is the first one I really do like!
It is so sweet to see horny Edward who can nearly control himself but he is still old Edward in some ways :-)
Also the issue Edward has with his vampire family around him is something new.
I'm very curious how you proceed with this story and what happened that Edward became human…
I laughed so hard at the scene where Edward was at the pharmacy trying to buy condoms and failed miserably *loooool* Now I'm waiting patiently for the next chappie (with hopefully some E/B lovin' )
Author's Response: The next chappie's already in the queue.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 07:57 AM · On: A New Man
Gah! I forgot what a tease you are! The end of this chapter is so mean... Alice, with her little "I don't know what to say to that" and Edward flooring it to get to Bella after the pill discussion... your poor readers! ;-) Anyway, I'm just wondering if reviews will double in the next two chapters... what do you think?!? LOL.
BTW- How long do you suppose it will be to get caught up here on Twilighted? When can we expect new chapters??
Author's Response: You know how I love to tease ;).
I am posting new chapters literally the minute I see that the previous one has been validated onto here (I'm editting in advance), to try and catch up as quickly as possible. Unfortunately the queue seems to be an issue at the moment, as it's taking over a week for each chapter to get validated. So, I don't know how long it will take to get fully up to date, but I'm trying my best.
As for new chapters... they're still happening over the other side!
Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 05:00 AM · On: A New Man
Great chapter! I love the fact Edward is having to deal with hormones now!!! LOL! Finally, he can relate to Bella in that way!
I have been thinking about how he could have changed to a human...did he contact the Volturi? Alice would have seen it though.....hmm....I guess I'm just not creative enough to think of how it could have happened - which is why you are a writer and I am not! I'm looking forward to the answer though....possibly in your next chapter???
Love that he wanted a new BLACK Beemer! Definitely more a 17yr old's style!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
dhull (Austin, TX)
Author's Response: Hmmm, good theory, nope, not telling, sorry ;)
Edward will spill within the next couple of chapters, promise!
Ria
Reviewer: EmiMills (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 03:56 AM · On: A New Man
please post soon, this is a great concept and I love the writing style
Author's Response: The next chappie's already in the queue...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 03:14 AM · On: A New Man
Nice chapter. Looking forward to the next one. Still, I don't think they are going to like being humans in the long run...
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 02:54 AM · On: A New Man
*LMAO* @ the shopping journey together. Had to giggle at Edward's attempt to man up and not feel embarassed by his condom needs and Alice's reaction to it all. His new car sounds hot too!
Bella's conversation with her Mum was really sweet - I loved that Renee seemed to instinctively know what Bella needed, to reassure Charlie that Edward couldn't have Bella at the other end of the house from him.
Looking forward to the rest of the Cullens meeting up with Edward again, although the thought of Jasper and his well documented issues with bloodlust, might do in that situation.
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 12:25 AM · On: A New Man
Yay great update :)
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