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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 05:09 AM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
Well, they have to take advantage while the getting is good! Even if this isn't temporary, how often are they going to find themselves ensconced in the bridal suite? I think Edward should just put off those morals for a little while. I mean, they are "married"!
Reviewer: nic5872 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Acceptance
really cool story so far...first one I've read with a human edward, but I like the twist that he started out vampire...can't wait to hear how it happened. How soon will we get the next chapter?!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Balance of Power
Awesome! I've been hoping for a 'Edward and Bella live with Charlie' story for awhile. You chose to address this dilemma in a less obvious fashion than I would have. I probably would have concocted a vacation or camping trip sponsored by the Cullen's but really only involving B and E.
Nice:)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 09:45 PM · On: What Control?
Well, this Edward could be alot more fun! Let's hope Bella gets a chance to explore that. And I think that Edward should have the opportunity to punch Mike, I mean he only held back in the past because it would have been lethal!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Being Human
And away we go! Two of the funniest scenes! Edward eating lard, and Edward trying to take care of human moments! Too bad Bella missed out on that one!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Waking Up with Bella
That was highly amusing! I love how you had Edward react to Carlisle, to Bella's touch, to his reflection in the mirror and to his own thoughts! I'm really enjoying this!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Being Human
Aww he's so adorable in this chapter, but I doubt he'd be that entirely clueless about food...
You did make me get a fierce craving for icecream though...
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Waking Up with Edward
I just loved that! He's almost like a newborn human with little control over himself. I can't wait to see what happens!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Waking Up with Edward
Lovin' it! Although, I started thinking half-way through that this concept seemed more natural to a post-Eclipse setting when they were firmly committed to each other?
Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: tessuhhh (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Acceptance
please please please hurry with the next chapters!!! i absolutly love this story. i always wondered what a human edward would be like and im pretty sure your hitting the nail on the head. stephanie would be proud :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Acceptance
Very risky with Charlie in the next room. I don't know many dads that would agree to any of these arangements
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 05:59 PM · On: A New Man
God I got to know the secret of how! It's killing me!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Upstairs Downstairs
What does Charlie acquate to Edward's change in eye color? Contacts? How will he be with Alice? I think he'll eventually be okay. Em, Rose, Jazz...not so much
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Not the Meadow
I kinda feel if your doing handjobs/fingering, and or oral. You've kinda are going against the principal behind and it all anyway and might as well finish it.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Balance of Power
Whatever has him human can change everyone else. This is both hopeful and scary.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 04:41 PM · On: First Night Blues
What is he going to do. Isn't school coming up. He will be alone each night. Don't they have a cottege on the Cullen's property. Would that be far enough for him to feel safe, but close enough for them to be able to reach him if he needed.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
Hangovers are a bitch. He is very lucky he had wine and not tequila, but wine does leave the head banging, tequila just leaves you sick. Eddie is cute.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 04:11 PM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
He is more comfortable human, or is he shifting back towards vampire? Did Victoria slip him a micky to make him human and therefore more vunerable. So many questions.
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Acceptance
I am still getting such a kick out of two horny teens being under the same roof at night. Loved the heavy petting that was happening in Bella's rickety old bed. That was so classic. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Prophetical (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Acceptance
Oh, i love this story. The kitchen scene was hillarious and sex in Florida...don't mind if i do! :D Also hope they get a new bed for Bellas room, one that does not make sounds ;) I can't wait to find out what Edward did to become human- since Alice didn't even know what to say to that. And Emmets teasing while (I bet Edwards blush would make it even more hillarious).Will be waiting for the next chapter, brilliant work.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 10:09 AM · On: What Control?
The contrast between confident Vampward and uncertain Human Greek God is interesting.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Acceptance
"And to be honest, I can't imagine waiting until we're married before we can be together.".....YES!! Hmmm....sex in Florida! Woo Hoo!
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Acceptance
Yay great update,
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Acceptance
I've really been enjoying your story because it's so unique. The storyline is pretty cool! I like his insecurities and how he is learning to deal with them. I loved the shopping tirp to de-old man him. Hilarious. I found the first kitchen scene to be hilarious as he tries all these foods for the first time in so long. Is lard just butter? I can't wait for your next chapter to be posted. I"m hooked!
Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Acceptance
No shouting from me....I know you're gonna let us in on Edward's secret... Just a short review from me: I love your story!
Thanks for writing it!
dhull (Austin, TX)
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