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Reviewer: ddot (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Q&A
LMAO I WAS CRACKING UP AS SOON AS HE SAID "a kind of horse" LOOOOOOOL
HAHAHAHAHA
Author's Response: Good, I'm glad I made you laugh!
Ria
Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 10:47 PM · On: Q&A
hm,a little bit of Harry Potter here,isn't it?unicorns and hippogriffs...but who is complaining?whatever works for Edward and Bella is ok.
Author's Response: Well, mine is actually a proper unicorn, not an HP one ;). And obviously Bella's read HP, so don't expect any Hippogriff cameos soon...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Q&A
*LMAO* @ Edward and how akward he was asking Carlisle to do some more 'intimate' tests. hahaha, had the perfect image in my head of Carlisle's lips quirking up at the edges whilst he struggled not to crack up laughing at Edward's embarrassment.
Hmm...always knew 'that' conversation with Rosalie was going to be difficult - she'd do anything to be human again.
Author's Response: I'm glad I made you laugh, that's the plan ;).
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Q&A
A unicorn. Really? I absolutely loved Edward talking to Carlisle. It was priceless.
Author's Response: If you look up the original medieval lore surrounding unicorns, they work rather perfectly... don't worry, Bella will fill you in in the next chapter!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Being Human
This chapter was so hillarious that I nearly peed myself reading it. You have a gift for making people laugh. I hope the rest of the story is this funny. Gotta love Alice too!
Reviewer: Missy96 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Q&A
love it. cant wait till they get nasty!!!!!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Q&A
Edward had to make a deposit in a cup. HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!! I can only imagine an x-vampire from the victorian periods thoughts on that. I'm interested to see if Edward will be capable of having children.
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Q&A
This really is such a wonderful story! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Q&A
Leave it to Emmett to find the humor in any situation!
I certainly didn't expect unicorns, but if Harry Potter can have unicorns in his world, then why not in the Twilight universe too?
Reviewer: karene (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Q&A
um.. unicorn? lol ... well.. i guess thats okay, since this is a story that has sparkly vampires. I actually thought he sold his soul or something...lol ahh well.. yours is better. If he did sell his soul, im sure the whole family would be horrified...
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Q&A
A Unicorn! That's too cute. I totally wasn't expecting that! I like it, very creative.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Q&A
I really wish Rose would stop trying to become human.
URGh!
It's like she doesn't care about her husband- or anyone else but herself!
Author's Response: Don't worry, I'm sure she'll realise her folly somewhere down the line...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ria
Reviewer: twilightlover502 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Acceptance
Loved it! I can't wait for the next one. You're such a talented writer. I'll be checking back daily!
Reviewer: karene (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Acceptance
update!
Reviewer: karene (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 07:14 PM · On: A New Man
hey.. um... Why can't he just use his aston martin? or what ever you call his precious car...
Reviewer: karene (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Not the Meadow
I have to say.. this Edward is so frickin sexy!! love it! for a moment, I pictured Edward and Bella's return to school. Edward in black, with is sex hair and stubble.. damn.. and Bella! I mean.. come on, I don't mean to sound like a perv, but her wearing black leather to complement Edward's new found bad ass look would totally be a jaw dropper at the schooL!
i wonder what he's hiding about this humanity thing! If he does know something, i think its totally selfish not to tell Rosalie. Yea, Yea, she's a bitch, but i still think its not right for her no to get the kids she's always wanted, Emmett's kids, even if she's only human for the duration of her getting pregnant and getting the kid. (just a thought)
im loving this so far!
Reviewer: SherryBerry (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 05:08 PM · On: A New Man
I love the story. Its such a tease being spoon fed a chapter at a time. -surprise me!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Acceptance
I have a feeling Edward will get what he wants. I'm not going to say anything about the suspense kiling me because you promised it would be in the next chapter.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Acceptance
Well, I guess Charlie isn't as light a sleeper as he portends! I'm still amazed at how much you have thought about all the issues they would face. I can't wait for another chapter!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:40 AM · On: A New Man
Really, Edward is freakin' hilarious. Between his sweating hatred at the pharmacy to allowing Alice to carry all the bags, I am laughing out loud! I still can't wait to see what caused his transformation. And of course, I can't wait to see him try to wheedle Bella into forgetting her promise!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Upstairs Downstairs
Well, Edward is starting to throw everyone off base! Bella barely got out of the house with her clothes on, Charlie is actually considering letting Edward sleep in the same bed as Bella, and Alice actually had a hissy fit over clothing-oh wait-that's still normal! Aside from the horrible night terrors and reliving things that he doesn't really want to process, this is quite fun. I laughed out loud of Edward assessing his appearance as a dick. Never bothered him before....haha!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Not the Meadow
Ha! Which head is making the decisions for Edward? I know that Bella wouldn't mind, but maybe there is a happy medium to be found?
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Balance of Power
Ah, so the downside presents itself! Bella now has to face the fact that Edward can get hurt, become ill, and even die. Terrifying, and she has a greater appreciation of Edward's worry now. And Edward has just realized that he is going to have to be completely dependent on others and can't control the outcomes of many situations anymore. I like how you have thought this out!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 08:42 AM · On: First Night Blues
Huh! There's something to consider. Lots of fodder for nightmares. What is Edward going to do? He can't go home, can't go to Bella's. Can't the Cullens set him up on property somewhere? Trailer home? Heehee!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
That was just great, and I love that he still was able to voice his concerns and express that he wants her to marry him! As for Bella, that is something to consider. She was willing to tie herself to him in all eternity, but is hesitant to do it in this lifetime! Renee and Forks High be damned. They were never a typical couple anyway!
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