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Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Waking Up with Bella
It was definitely interesting to see his point of view, but I too am not big on the repeating scenes.
Awesome though. Definitely awesome.
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Waking Up with Edward
First chapter down! I'm enjoying this so far; you write very well. It's very natural, conversation-style. I love that.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Florida
Edward and his prey of a unicorn. Definitely feasible with the lore of a unicorn. But how long will it last the cure? Is there a time limit on the blood flowing through his veins? Flying to Florida to visit Renee and Phil and then having time to themselves. Sounds wonderful. Bella is giving Edward a lot of pleasure lately. He sure isn't complaining in the least with the attention. Adore a blushing Edward being awkward to talk with Carlisle about physical relationship actions with Bella. It would be embarrassing to discuss those things with a parent. Wonder what all the test results will show in regards to the venom as well as sperm tests. Can he father children? Bella freaking out about marriage, don't understand the difference between marriage and living with him for eternity. It's the same thing isn't it? Renee is wrong about Edward, yes physically he is only 17. He is actually 104 living inside a hormonal body of 17 year old teenage boy. He's experiencing things now that he hasn't in over 100 years. All of those year pent up with needs it's bound to come through and take over his every thought and actions.
Reviewer: hart_of_ice (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Florida
Only Renee. haha I am really enjoying this story. I am starting to wonder what Alice saw when Edward goes back to being a vampire.
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Florida
I really enjoyed this chapter, some issues were introduced that Bella has probably never thought of. As a vampire, Edward's love for Bella would have been never-ending, as a human? Well couples fall in and out of love all the time. Great job with this one. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Q&A
I honestly didn't even attempt to think that that's what happened. It definitely threw me for a loop. I also noticed that at the end Bella wanted to feel this way with Edward 'forever'. Hmm...
Great job, sorry about the backed up reviews. ;)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Acceptance
Edward changing overnight from a vampire back to human, very different and interesting. The raging hormones of a 17 year old teenager is pretty funny. All of his self talk of trying to do the right thing for Bella. Where Bella has wanted to do things with Edward the entire time they had been together. Now Edward has decided to join the 21st Century losing a lot of his Edwardian ideals. Enjoyed the first evening in Port Angeles with the Honeymoon Suite and romantic dinner/dancing. Edward being Edward but human. It's sad Edward not being able to be too close to Carlisle. It's strange that Alice is not a problem for him. Rosalie wanted to reverse her vampirism still very curious just like Rose as to how Edward was able to accomplish it. Both of them have the same deep feelings towards each other and finding more reasons to love the other. Edward's nightly nightmares are horrible, it's good they are together where Bella can sooth and hold him allowing him to fall back to sleep. Planning a trip to Florida to visit her mother and some quiet alone time souonds delightful. Wonder if Mike will relay the information he overheard at work. Since Alice has seen Edward returning to be a vampire, is it because he will need to protect her from a foe in the future of the story? Looking forward to additional chapters to see how the story will continue.
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Florida
Ooooh good chapter. I love this so far and it's very in character I think. Good job add soon
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Florida
OH, Bella. Edward's right. His body is sventeen, but he's the same. He can't forget his experiences, or his loneliness. Can't wait for more....Looking forward to maybe jockward? Hmmm....For some reason I'm picturing a baseball uniform and Bella sitting in the bleachers....
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Florida
Edward Cullen and a copy of Juggs. Oh the imagery!!!!!!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Florida
Renee is too much! I would be mortified if my mother left porn in my room for my boyfriend!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Florida
*LOL* Vampire Edward would have literally had a tanty, thrown all of toys out of the cot when Renee made suggestions about his commitment to her; and then demanded they leave.
The Juggs magazine made me giggle - I can honestly say, I've lived in a house with four boys and NEVER come across a porn magazine ever; but the reaction to the lesbian stuff from Edward and how much Bella enjoyed seeing him amped up like that... *LMAO*
Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:14 AM · On: Florida
Fantastic chapter. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Florida
that was awesome! i really loved it (again!) and i hope you update ASAP! can't wait for more!!!!!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Florida
oh this was a funny chapter!! Got to love Renee's enthusiasm for bella and edward to get jiggy!!
Reviewer: twilightlover502 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Florida
Loved it! You're amazing. I always try to savor this, but I end up reading it too quickly... update SOON, please. =) Thank you!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Florida
Good for Edward reminding Bella where his mind is! And I think that Edward should put his foot down on the marriage thing. If he stays human, he is essentially alone. He needs Bella and she should love him enough to listen to her heart, and not the opinions of the town, mother, father, etc. She knows how special and different things are between them. It would never be a failed marriage....
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Florida
so yes I admitt I went over and read this fic on the "site we will not name" here but I promised myself I'd review here as well, this chapter was a favorite and I enjoyed reading it again (blush)
Reviewer: iliketoread2 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Florida
Another great chapter. I like Edward better now. Bella is great. It's great how they are on the same playing field now. I love how Renee is trying to help them! I hope the next chapter is longer. I also like how Edward is looking at money more humanly. I can't wait till Edward and Bella have to deal with other girls and when James (or who ever) comes in the picture, and for that matter when Edwaed has his 1st human vs human fight win or lose. I'm sure his brothers if around will keep him safe, or Alice haha Thanks John
Reviewer: Coxie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Q&A
Interesting. Of course I can see Rose going crazy hunting for one.
The real question is....how long will it last.
Reviewer: Coxie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Acceptance
That was nice of Charlie to say that to Edward. =)
Reviewer: Coxie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 08:21 PM · On: A New Man
Oh so he knows exactly why he became human. Oh I can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: Coxie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Upstairs Downstairs
His dreams are pretty darm scary.
Well, well, well......Edward is extremely horny, isn't he.. =)
Reviewer: Coxie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Not the Meadow
Hmm yeah I don't know how well that will be handled but he can try. =)
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