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Reviews For Waking Up
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 04:23 PM · On: It Goes On

Big chapter, alot of things were said and I think it'll help them in the end. Great job. ;)

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 03:55 PM · On: It Goes On

Another great chapter. I loved the conversation between Charlie and Edward.

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 03:54 PM · On: It Goes On

I am so happy that Edward and Charlie talked.  I think that was great.  I think they have the potential to really get along.  It tickles me that they are together and all of their friends know of their living arrangements.  I bet I knew who had the lucky bastard comment  (Mike).  I think that it is for the best that the Cullens have left.  I think this will allow them to lead a more normal life.  I think that the wolves will help to protect them.  Maybe the Cullens can come visit when they start having babies.  I think this would make Rose and Esme very happy to see little Edwards running around.  Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: tsarcasm (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 02:36 PM · On: It Goes On

Cuuuuuuuuuuuuute! 

Reviewer: maliburg (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 01:31 PM · On: It Goes On

I love this story. I hope you can post again soon!

Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 01:13 PM · On: It Goes On

nice chapter...love Charlie!!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 12:55 PM · On: It Goes On

Charlie was very understanding considering what Edward did.  I thought it was cute that he was trying to be there for Edward when he clearly was not comfortable offering.

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 12:54 PM · On: It Goes On

Yay! So happy to see this updated! More, please!

Reviewer: maliburg (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 06:16 PM · On: If you love something, set it free

OUTSTANDING! I couldn't be more appreciative of your storytelling and writing gifts!! Bravooooo!!!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 01:45 AM · On: If you love something, set it free

How glad I am this isn't New Moon; this is a much more satisfying end to  the insanity of Edward leaving Bella. It is what should be, always, the two of them together, period.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 01:09 AM · On: A Foolish Consistency

Good grief! It's like watching a trainwreck, and not being able to do a damn thing to help. This just makes me so sad. The only hope is how much stronger Bella is becauseof the love she and Edward have shared. It may get her through this awful period. If they don't get back together, I'll be miserable, just like they will be. One last thought, I feel  real bad for all the Cullens, too.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Agony

May I have permission to step into your story, for just long enough to slap Edward, real hard? I can see what he's thinking of doing and he is going to break Bella's heart and spirit, as well as his own. What a giant mess!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Eighteen

Lord! That's a different take on Bella's birthday, same paper cut, same vampire, different victim. I sure hope Edward isn't hurt too badly. And the day started out so well, really well! It's a shame it had to end on this scary note.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 11:16 PM · On: The Last First Day

Sweaty Edward, in the shower, with Bella wrapped around him. What could be better? By the way, I'm glad Edward broke Mike's nose. How dare that little snot call Bella a slut! Especially since he wanted to screw Bella himself . Like he ever had a prayer.

Reviewer: maliburg (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:18 PM · On: Pancakes

Amazing! I love your writing. I'm absolutely captivated by the honesty and the details of the story.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 05:07 PM · On: A Bear with a Sore Head

Emmett is such a sweet-tempered guy, sometimes I just want to shake Rosalie to remind her to cherish the wonderful husband she has. You know sometimes we don't appreciate what's right in front of us, at least she finally got it figured out . Emmett is pretty happy to still have his brother to tease and pick on.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Desperate Measures

What a relief to have the treaty deal finally agreed upon. Makes sense to me that Edward no longer should be bound by it, as he is no longer any threat to the tribe. It sure makes it easier for him and Bella to stay together.Now, if nothing else goes wrong, maybe they can have a bit of peace and quiet. I know this is a story, but I get really caught up in it, and want so much for there to be a happy ending.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Desperate Times

Like any other obsessed reader, I hate cliff-hangers, but I'm also well old enough to know that they are inevitable. I also think that some authors love to torture us readers, makes it fun for them. Who am I to spoil your fun? Let's hope Bella can get this mess straightened out before all hell breaks loose.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Treaty

Oh goody, now we have the wolves to contend with, like there wasn't enough going on already. It's going to be interesting to see what kind of an agreement the Cullens and the Quileutes can hammer out. The future is never dull and certainly not boring around Forks, Washington.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Pancakes

It took longer than I figured, but Edward has finally realized how very vulnerable he and Bella ar, as human as the rest of us. This interlude in Key West has seemed very much like a honeymoon, but I have this bad feeling that real life is about to crash in on them soon.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Changing Key

That was quite simply, one of the most beautiful things I've ever read, thank you so much. There couldn't have been a better wedding night, even. You done good , girl!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Mothers and Daughters

Oh, what a revelation! God, I wanted to strangle Renee for all she said to Bella. And don't even get me started on that conversation with Charlie. That tore me up to read about his tearing up over that stupid , selfish, silly woman. Bella was born more grown up than her mother, no wonder she loves Edward, they're the same age, emotionally. This whole chapter was one of the best in the story, and I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Florida

Florida is proving to be a special time  for Bella and Edward, what with the Mustang, the coming alone time, and Renee is a riot. Most kids would love to have a mom like her, ditz factor and all. This is getting better and better!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Q&A

Sure am happy that Edward is becoming more comfortable around his family. The session in the hospital was kind of hilarious, poor Eddie! This feeding from a unicorn, takes some getting used to, though. In a strange way , it makes perfect sense, how else to explain a hundred year old vampire becoming human overnight? Rosalie will hunt forever now, trying to find another one. It's unsettling, too, that Alice can't see a good outcome for Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:42 AM · On: Acceptance

This story just keeps getting better. I had to chuckle  over Charlie's "what I don't know, won't bother me".  I can hardly wait for Renee to see these two together.

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