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Reviewer: leahwarrington (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Desperate Times


Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Desperate Times

What the heck is Bella up to?!?! She is crazy! I can't wait to read more! This story is GREAT!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Desperate Times

Edward is human.  Quileutes don't have any reason to stop Edward from staying with Charlie and Bella.  Bella has always claimed to be Switzerland.  Her house is neither Cullen or Quileute land, it is Swan land.  Edward is terrified to return to Cullens' home.  Concerned about all their cravings for blood.  He's human and a great temptation especially to Jasper.  He won't be able to sleep for worrying about never waking up from being drained.  He also doesn't think he can be away from Bella.  She is his reason for living.  His concern about protecting her and himself from danger.  Being human can't protect her from the mythical creatures around them.  If Bella is heading for La Puz she will have caused the treaty to be broken.  Granted Edward isn't a vampire any more, but he is a Cullen.  Edward should have let Bella vent her feelings to Billy and Carlisle.  I feel for Edward.  His fears, his desires, concern for his family's secret, doesn't want to break the treaty. What does Bella have in mind?  Wonder if her plan will work.

Reviewer: iliketoread2 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Desperate Times

Ria, i will not hate you for a cliffie if you up date soon. other wise I might have to start to dislike you ;^)

I love this story. I like how Bella is the one who has to start to be strong. I can't wait to see them back in school too.  This is a great story that is well wrote. You are doing an awesome job with this. Love the plot, very fresh. Thanks John



Author's Response:

The next chapter is already in the queue, so hopefully I won't keeo you hanging for long!

They're headed back to school in Ch22, the holidays are almost over!

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

Ria

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Desperate Times

You go girl. Tell Billy to mind his own business or wolf business will become public business. I am looking forward to their little meeting.



Author's Response:

It's already in the queue, so shouldn't be long!

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

Ria

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Desperate Times

Yes, you are so evil to leave us with that cliffie.  Is she going to the rez?  I can't imagine what she is going to do.  I love that she is taking control and making something happen.  Good for her.  Love that Edward finally (kind of) told her about how much money he has.  It makes paying the $100 or so bill at the book store kinda insignificant! 



Author's Response:

Yup, they're headed to the rez....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Desperate Times

Well this is getting more and more interesting with each update. Personally, I love the cliffies adds more to the whole dramatic effect. Can't wait to see what happens when Bella takes Edward to see Charlie and how she plans on getting him to help her. Excellent job. ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you! I like a good cliffie too, but I won't ever leave you hanging for too long! The next chapter's already in the queue.

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

Ria

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Desperate Times

I wonder how Edward is going to react when he realises where Bella's taking him, despite his arguments about his need to protect his family and loved ones. It's nice to see her taking charge - tho hopefully it won't be the wrong first time to pick to stand up for herself & Edward.

Holy hot sex scene :) Bella kinda manipulated him into staying by using sex there but hell, who could honestly keep their hands off that boy anyway? :P

Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Desperate Times

Seriously??  Oh I just loooove cliffies, NOT! That was horrible.  I was so into it and cheering Bella on so I didn't notice the page comming to an end.  I literally can't wait but what choice do I have?



Author's Response:

Sorry! But the next chapter is going in the queue today, so I won't make you wait too long....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Desperate Times

NOOOOOOOOOO Edward can't go to La Plush!

Also a cliffhanger of that magnitude is just mean. ;)

Loved it all!



Author's Response:

Well, he's going...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Desperate Times

Wow, so because he is human now is he breaking the treaty!?!?!?  That will be interesting to see how  the pack reacts to that.  But at the same time, way to go Bella for having balls like that!!!!



Author's Response:

Well, the issue was always that the wolves didn't want vampires on their land, vegetarians or not. If he's human, maybe they won't mind so much.... maybe?

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Desperate Times

I hate this cliffie! Okay...I am so pissed at Billy right now.... Really! And..... I am so proud of Bella. I've never been more proud of her... He's not ready, the consequences could be devastating.  Please, please hurry!



Author's Response:

Next chapters already in the queue...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Desperate Times

Cliffies are ugh!

FANTASTIC chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I hate it when I'm reading and there's a cliffie, I do love writing them though... it won't be the last ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Desperate Times

oh bella you devious little lady!



Author's Response:

Yup, let's just hope she doesn't get eaten by a giant wold for her trouble ;).

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: Snickles0203 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Desperate Times

She is taking Edward to La Push!! Ohh this is gonna get interesting!!! Cant wait!!



Author's Response:

Next chapter's going in for validation today, so it shouldn't be too long!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 10:52 AM · On: Desperate Times

OMG.  Sooo good.  Who is going to help her??



Author's Response:

Well, Charlie's at Billy's already, so maybe with him around, Edward will get a little time to prove he's no longer a threat... Or, maybe, to quote Edward in the next chapter:

“I think I might prefer it to being eaten by a f***ing giant wolf, Bella! "

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Desperate Times

Evil cliffie! I'm dyin' to know what Bella has up her sleeve!



Author's Response:

The next chapter's about to hit the queue, so you won't have to wait too long!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: Margaret Moony (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Desperate Times

Oooh, I can't wait to see what happen next!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Desperate Times

Bella is being radical, I really hope she doesn't blow the treaty to hell.

I loved when Edward told Bella he'd invested in Yahoo and Google. That was so awesome. Also, Bella and Edward discussed having a baby. I want them to have a baby, that would be so sweet. If their both human during conception way less imminent death drama.

Great chapter!!!! Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Well, the treaty says that vampires aren't allowed on the Quileute land, so... it depends on whether or not they believe Edward I guess!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: Intricacy (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Desperate Times

Well, cliffies seem to be a new habit of yours!! You know you'll just end up with more people asking for a sooner update right? ;)

I really your story by the way, thanks for writting it :)



Author's Response:

I love writing a good cliffie. Hate reading them though, so... sorry!

Next chapters about to hit the queue, so I won't hold out long.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Desperate Times

Omg i have a love - hate realationship witht the cliffies lol - love love your story cant wait for more



Author's Response:

So do I! I love writing them, and I hate reading them! Lol.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Mothers and Daughters

ow, I'm so moved! I love Charlie! ;)

Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Treaty

Billy Black is such a turd! Should I say it again?  How dare he tell Edward anything about his soul.  He's so hateful whish I never understood since the Cullen's are vegeatrians.  I mean sure there's the off chance one of them could slip up but what about the occasional human that commits murder?  Anyone is capable of being bad or evil.  They need to cut the Cullen's and Edward some slack. And I am just waiting for Bella to go off on them for talking crap about her man.  You know she's got some fire in her. :)

Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Treaty

That was such a fantastic chapter. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Treaty

Yet another horror to consider as the consequence of being human.  Not only will he not be able to protect Bella, or even keep his own self from danger, but if he should die what will happen to him?  If he has a soul, is it damned to hell?  Can he be redeemed?  Was he even wrong to begin with, considering it is a vampire instinct to feed off of humans?  If he has no soul, then he will never be with Bella forever.  Hmmm.

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