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Reviewer: His Gem (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Eighteen
Oh NO! I was hoping this wouldn't happen still!!! (Even though i knew it had to!) Please update soon!
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Eighteen
Oh no... was he bitten? Is he cut? Crap! What a terrible cliffie!
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Eighteen
That was awesome
I really like your version and how you have adapted it- i cant wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Eighteen
Omg! What a twist!! Jasper bites Edward and he changes back..........genius! Oh no.....will Edward have control after the change? Will he be able to handle Bella's blood-scent? Oh my.........
Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Eighteen
Very creative I like how you put a spin on the new moon version of the party. Poor e I hope c can suck the venom out !! Or back to old e again. Can't wait to see if you go either way. Forget about your beta just write the damn story with as much mistakes as u want lol. Uoopppppdate soon!!!!!!
Reviewer: roxyklt (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Eighteen
Please updae soon. Did Jasper bite Edward? Will he urn back into a vampire? I must know. Please don't leave me hanging. I love your story. There will be no unicorn next time around for Edward since he lost his virginity.
Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Isn't it Ironic?
Edward got drunk... I though i never was going to see that.... And he is so the usual Edward with his request from Bella.... He is so good... and cute.... the way he's acting and all....!!!!! Bella is very sympathetic and doing everything she can to help him get through all of this new word...
Reviewer: DirtyAim (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Eighteen
OH NOOOOOO!!!! How will the family get through this????
Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Eighteen
I was hoping that the attack was still going to be in here in some form and it was. FANTASTIC! And what a way to wake up on your birthday! That would be perfect!
Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 02:00 PM · On: The Search for Equilibrium
Awesome.... They pretend to be married? Ahhhh!!!!! That is so sweet.... And Edward and his "getting ideas".... just perfect!!!!! I really like that he was his usual self and that he didn't regret his intimacy with Bella.... I also LOVE Alice.... The lingeries was all that Bella needed and Alice of course was there!!!!
Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 12:08 PM · On: What Control?
I can't believe him he is like a teenage kid.... not a 107 year old kid... xaxax... he was going to hurt Mike... that was going to be fun.... He can't really control himself, is he?
Reviewer: hwright605 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Eighteen
Aargh!!!! How could you leave it there!?! Did he get bitten???? Are we right back where we started from??? I hope not, but since you're the writer and I've loved it so far, I'll trust you.
Whatever is going on with your beta, I wish her well. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work!
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Eighteen
NONONO!!! After everything Edward is going to be changed back??? UUUGH! I can't take the devestation. So is that why Bella dreamt about Edward sparkling? This is exciting and sad and I don't know what else. Next chapter please!!!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Eighteen
Holy Crap!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Eighteen
Ok RM....I was REALLY thinking you were gonna do something like this....but I was expecting Bella to get it like in New Moon. I was hoping this wasn't gonna happen as I love Edward getting to be human with Bella for a while....
You just kinda brought it on quicker than I thought you would.....Dang it! *stomps foot and folds arms*
Ok...I'm anxiously over here in Austin awaiting to see how bad it is for Edward! I'm guessing he was bitten by Jazz & since your last sentence said "...the screaming was coming from me." I'm thinking he's experiencing the burn....oh jeez....well I know RL is on for your validation beta BUT HURRY w/the next chappie!!!! *jumps up and down*
dhull (Austin, TX)
Author's Response: I feel bad when I write big cliffies like this one...
If you really can't wait, you are aware that this story is also available elsewhere, and is quite a bit further down the track, yeah? Posting on Twilighted just takes forever.
I'm under the same username, if you go a lookin' drop me a review so I know where you went!
Ria
Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Being Human
xaxaxxaxxaxxxxaxa........!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The incident with the razor was hilarious..... as was and what happen with all the food tasting...xaxxaxx.... Great job!!!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Eighteen
Whoa. I didn't know you were going THERE! Wowee. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It's already in the queue, so I'm doing my best to get it to you!
Thanks for reading and revieiwing.
Ria
Reviewer: GangstaT (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Eighteen
OMG EDWARD WAS BITTEN????!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ UODATE SOOON!!
:) Love the story xx
Author's Response: Next chaps in the queue...
Thanks for reading and revieiwing.
Ria
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Eighteen
Wow! Did Jasper bite him?
Author's Response: The next chapter's in the queue, when all will be revealed...
Thanks for reading and revieiwing.
Ria
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Eighteen
I won't shout I'll remain calm thought it does take A LOT of restraint.
Are they going to have to turn him? I kinda want them human now.
Please just a little hint since updates will be slow *uses an Alice pout*
Author's Response: Um, I am working on getting the update to you as fast as possible...
If you really can't wait, you are aware that this story is available elsewhere, and that I'm quite a few chapters down the line from here, right? (same username)
If you visit me there, drop me a review so I know where you went!
Thanks for reading and revieiwing.
Ria
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Eighteen
Did Jasper bite Edward?? Update soon!
Author's Response: It's already in the queue...
Thanks for reading and revieiwing.
Ria
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Eighteen
Oh man. He's a vampire again isn't he? Jeeze! LOL!
Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Waking Up with Bella
Great POV.... I liked it better than Bella's!!! He was so afraid of Carliste despite he knew who he was.... He is so happy that he can now become everything for Bella and he won't have to leave her... They could marry have children.... BUT what will happen who the Cullens? Will he stay human?
Author's Response: Hi!
I'm glad you enjoyed it, this was my first chapter, no 1 was written by a different author. You have lots left to read, I hope you enjoy it!
Thanks for R&R
Ria
Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Waking Up with Edward
Really awesome story!!!! Edward is really become a human? Will it last? For how long?
Reviewer: xNicoleRose215x (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Eighteen
Oh my god!!!! Jasper bit Edward while trying to get to Bella????? Noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!
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