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Reviews For Waking Up
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 03:36 AM · On: Agony

Glad to see his pain wasn't from a bite. Although still sad to see that human Edward still thinks leaving Bella is a good idea. Idiot! Good thing Alice is coming to save the day. :-)

Reviewer: lettheobsessionbegin (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Agony

Stupid, stubborn Edward.  Why does he always have to leave Bella?  They are human together now.  What does he think leaving will achieve?  He would have to go with the Cullens, and then he would be in danger!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Agony

It was Jasper who banged into Edward and Bella.  Talk about the pain of being hit by a solid marble statue at incredible velocity.  Edward took the bunt of it, thank goodness Jasper's love for Edward stopped him from biting Edward.  Otherwise he would be changed back into a vampire.  Bella was cradled by Edward and had no injuries from the fall/push.  Edward dislocated his shoulder.  Oweeee!  Yikes!!!  Painville.  I liked Carlisle fooling Edward about the count of three.  Doing it while the patient is still semi relaxed and not expecting it.  I have never had a dislocated joint (knock on wood) but I have heard they are very painful.  Breaking 3 fingers on his hand was also painful, but couldn't feel it until shoulder pain was reduced.  Edward closing himself off to Bella is wrong on so many levels.  She thinks he is concerned about the horror of the event at the house.  Frightened for himself.  He's not, he's afraid for Bella.  Sounds like he is planning on taking a hike.  Leaving her thinking he's putting her in danger.  Carlisle has already mentioned the family moving because he's concerned about Edward's safety being human around the family.  Emmett and especially Jasper have been know to fall off the wagon so to speak.  Was Edward planning on leaving with them?  Or just planning on leaving Bella and going somewhere on his own?  Or he is planning on returning to a vampire to protect his Bella?  Newborn Edward would probably kill Bella rather than protect her.  Alice trying to help Jasper, but has to go back and kick Edward to get his attention for an attitude adjustment.  Whatever Edward has decided to do, Alice is upset.  I really don't want to be Edward when Alice reaches Forks again.  That boy is in for some serious verbal scolding and lectures.  Shutting Bella out is hurting her more than the truth of what Edward fears the most.  If he leaves her after all they have been through it will kill both of them to be apart.  Just his kissing her before pulling apart to sleep.  Edward was more demonstrative with his kisses than normal.  Not giving Bella must time to breath.  Almost like it will his last kiss goodbye to her.  He'll leave and never come back type of kiss.  Edward thinking what's best for Bella again without consulting her and her feelings/thoughts.  Edward isn't safe human either.  Both Edward and Bella are in danger of the supernatural.  Next chapter with Alice cutting into Edward's hide should be humorous with Alice's snide comments and serious as a heart attack with information on what he plans to do and the effects it will have on Bella, himself, Charlie, the wolves, and the remaining Cullen family members.  Go Alice give him a piece of your mind and knock him in the head.  Decisions in a relationship need to be made by both parties not one making them for the supposed good for their partner. 

Reviewer: miki_hearts_edward_cullen (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Waking Up with Edward

good point.

ill kill you AFTER you finsh the story :)

Reviewer: miki_hearts_edward_cullen (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 12:05 AM · On: Agony

he better not be leaving with them....

Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Agony

Ouch Ria ! I know how bad that hurts I dislocated mine when I was twelve ( no alcohol involved lol ) but the pain was unbearable. Make sure Alice kicks Edwards butt ! Can't wait to read next chapter.

Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 11:56 PM · On: Agony

Thanks for not leaving the cliffie for too long! 

And it seems like Bella and Edward just can't seem to escape "destiny".  First with the paper cut and Jasper almost 'eating' Bella, and now with Edward doing something retarded.  I like the way you're staying canon with the plot and characters.  It's almost like reading a different version of the book =)

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Agony

well if this is any way like his ususal thinking then whaen alice gets there I will help hold the dumb ass while she slaps some sense into him  we wont let him leave again even if we have to tie his ass to a chair

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Agony

No words...ok I lie I have two for you, so good!

Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Agony

Alice! My hero!

Reviewer: calamityme99 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 10:47 PM · On: Agony

OH JEAAABUS! PLEASE DONT NEW MOON HER!! 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Eighteen

What a heavenly wake up call for Bella from Edward.  Eye opening and blissfully pleasant all rolled up in one.  Bella took opening her birthday presents rather calmly.  I would never have thought of Edward repurchasing his Volvo for Bella.  Keeping it all in the family.  I am sure Bella enjoyed the make out session with Edward a lot more than watching Romeo and Juliet the movie.  Going over to the Cullens' home for a party.  Everyone excited  because haven't celebrated an actual aging birthday for a very long time.  Emmett/Rosalie gave Bella mechanical work for the Volvo with shock absorbers, etc... Alice's gift didn't discovered since Bella sliced her finger on the paper.  Edward and Bella were thrown across the room.  Edward screaming and then cliffhanger.  Whose going to protect Bella from the attack of the vampires?  Edward can't he's human.  The only one totally not affected by blood is Carlisle.  Emmett pulling Jasper away from Bella/Edward.  Wow what a way to celebrate your 18th Birthday.  Just trying to stay alive and in one piece with all vital fluids still pumping through your body.  Poor Alice all her efforts for decorating and having the cake, will it end in complete disaster?  Will Bella be killed, changed, or protected?  Concerned about Edward's reaction to not being able to protect Bella from his family or any other dangerous event happening to the clumsy Bella.  Will Edward consider becoming a vampire again to protect his Bella?

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Eighteen

Oh! All this time I thought something would make him want to turn back voluntarily to protect Bella! I guess Bella will really hate parties now, and maybe Jasper too!

Reviewer: K8ers (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Eighteen

AHH! It can't just stop like that!

Reviewer: lettheobsessionbegin (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Eighteen

................ *mouth wide open*

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Eighteen

Holy. Shit.

I would say that is all but *jaw drops*. Did NOT see that bit with Jasper at the party coming....I should have, but for some reason I just didn't see it happening.

Reviewer: EdwardsWifey (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Eighteen

ooo back to a vampire.. seen that coming

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Eighteen

oh dear....what's gonna happen???

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Eighteen

oh dear....what's gonna happen???

Reviewer: miki_hearts_edward_cullen (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Eighteen

 I am going to kill you.



Author's Response:

Then you won't know what happens next...

Thanks for reading and reviewing (I think). :D

Ria

Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Eighteen

I knew it! More or less anyway. LOL

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Eighteen

Wow Edward is the one to get hurt.  I wonder how bad it is and who was it to knock them out of the way.  I can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: LivingwithEdward (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Eighteen

"Having such affection for a fictional character seems quite pointless to me." LOL Very clever.

Oh this is a good cliffe.  I can not wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: His Gem (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Eighteen

Oh NO! I was hoping this wouldn't happen still!!! (Even though i knew it had to!) Please update soon!

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Eighteen

Oh no... was he bitten? Is he cut? Crap! What a terrible cliffie!

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