That was excruciating.  I'm glad Bella knows he's lying.  Update soon

this way was so much more believable  when he left in new moon it showed her as  weak and helpless we all know thats now how she is made inside I always said there was no way she would of ever believe  he didnt love her     he just is a stupid boy   emmet should of hung his ass in the tree outside of her house and waited there with him and told her the whole truth of his plan then she would of kicked his ass   he neds it    bad

Author's Response:

Well, between Emmett, Rosalie, Esme and Alice Edward got a bit of a bashing in this chapter... I thought he needed it too ;).

Thanks for R&R

Ria

THAT WAS THE BEST THING YOU COULD HAVE EVER EVER EVER EVER DONE!! YES!! BELLA HAD ENOUGH SENSE THIS TIME! yES!! YOU ROCK!! i know edward will come back, and which is why i can't wait to read more and how you will tkae it on. Thanks for writing this. ironically, throughtout this song, i was listening to Avril Lavigne's 'When You're Gone'. :P Update

 

 

I usually don't review, but I felt that had to commend you on this story especially this chapter. I love Meyer's Bella, but I always felt that she was a little to weak for my liking. I was so glad to see your Bella have a back bone. To see her stand up for herself and believe in the love they share is touching and empowering...I was a little worried considering how attached they are...I have so much respect for your writing because although you are writing with someone else's characters, you some how make them your own. You are very talented and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Awesome, awesome, awesome!!!!!

i love that Bella stood her ground!

Oh my god. Edward you are a stupid DOUCHE!!!! (@PUOU@O#U@O#!!!!!!!!

*LMAO* Ok, am taking a deep breath now.

I'm glad that Bella could see right through you, trusts enough in your love for one another not to believe what you're trying to feed her. Your problem...you need to deal with it lad because you will never be so happy and complete as what you are when you're with Bella.

PLEASE!!!!!!

UPDATE!

SOON!

This was BETTER than NM and I hope he comes crawling back through the door in time for dinner.

God how I adore Emmett and Alice.  I just wish that could have really kicked his emo ass.  And as I sit here with tears in my eyes I absolutely adore Bella for not believing one single word of his self sacrificing bullshit.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Loving the story, though I think I know where Edward's mind is and if I'm right and he is looking at leaving Bella I just want to smack him upside the head for being an idiot. I'm really hoping I'm either wrong or Alice is going to smack/kick some sense into him.

Loving the story, though I think I know where Edward's mind is and if I'm right and he is looking at leaving Bella I just want to smack him upside the head for being an idiot. I'm really hoping I'm either wrong or Alice is going to smack/kick some sense into him.

OMG..... i read chapter called 18 a few days ago....and OMG....

and now i see you've already updated...gotta go read....I'm behind....yikes...

be back in a few to review....hey...i rhym...woo hoo

oh holy crap...I knew the minute you threw in the birthday party this was all going to go downhill!!! :(

i absolutely love the diection you took w this-how amazingly original

i am such a fan!