Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 01:24 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
i freakin love you seriously he made sooooooo much progress :D and bella im glad she stayed with him although i wish edward wouldnt have tensed like that i cant wait to see what you have planned :D
Reviewer: susan2453 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 01:18 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
The story keeps me coming back for more.
Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 12:44 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
OMG I loved this chapter. I cant believe he didn't sleep on the mattress. I am so glad that Alice sent the silky pj's. I knew right away that he would get curious. Lol. I am so glad he did. I hope Bella realizes that he has never seen a woman before naked so maybe she will be willing to show him huh???? I hope so. Maybe they will share a kiss. Oh this is getting really good. I absolutely love the longer chapter. Great Job.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 11:29 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
unnhhh i wish it would just continue forever
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 11:18 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Please update sooooon! :) Thank you for writing and sharing this amazing story!
Reviewer: nbpowlk (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 11:13 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
oh my gosh i love look after you by the fray :) probably cos it's in the movie jumper and hayden christensen is so cute lol google him! haha. good chapter :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 11:12 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
He was thinking "booooobiieeeeeees!!!" just like any guy, asylum-bound or not!! lol...
Sounds to me like his mom died in childbirth and his dad freaked out. Si? Where the hell is is father??????
Edward there or not, I'd be creeped out in that hospital and would NOT want to sleep there! :o the pics in your banner kinda freak me out. :)
Poor Edward, caught ogling. I pray he doesn't have morning wood, too - his cranium will explode!!
Thanks for the uber-zippy update!!!
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 10:46 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Poor guy!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 09:44 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Well, I'd have to say Edward was musing on the wonders of the womanly form in front of him and probably scared of the punishment now that he was caught looking! But, really he could have been contemplating the thread count in her tank top!
Reviewer: Leahtheweary (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 09:28 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
"...I noticed he wasn't looking at my face, but he was looking at me."
Wow! That line really made my heart skip a beat. Still such a beautiful story. I'm feeling some real fear from this Aro dude and I have a feeling he may be making an appearance sometime. Ugh. Frightening to even think about.
I seriously love your story. Thank you so much for sharing it and I hope to read more very soon.
Leah
Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 09:09 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
I'm still a little lost. Does edward shave? I love this story and get upset when the chapters end. Update soon!
Reviewer: Maggied86 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Home Again
hmm, maybe it's Carlisle!
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 08:34 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Edward's situation is really sad. But the idea that he never saw boobs before and that he was curious/atracted to Bella's is kind off cute and funny. Lol.
Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 08:26 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Fantastic chapter!
Reviewer: Cullenist (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 08:20 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
First of, thank you Alice for giving her that pj's set! What I wouldn't give for an Epov on this subject! (I beg you on my knees!!!)
So glad I chose reading this over sleep <3! These updates complete me. I love this story more than I could possibly express!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 08:04 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
OMG...I am so happy with the progress they have made and it warms my heart that Edward is trying to leave his nightmares behind.
LoL...I an only wonder what Edward was thinking, obviously he hasn't seen a girl before but I hope his terror at being caught doesnt cause a digression for him. please please Please update soon!
Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:59 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Ah!! Oh my gosh!!! I love to hate your cliffys!!! I can't stand them, but at the same time I look forward to them. lol. Does that make sense? Well, I loved it!!! I am screaming!! I love it and can't wait for more!!
-lionandthelamblove7
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:58 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
so glad that i didnt have to waitn long for an update! i am glad that bells is thestrong one for once in a story...i love that she stayed with edward...poor guy is scared of so much....cant wait for next chapter
Reviewer: spockdatabones (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:56 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
please tell me this ends all right! i love it!
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:49 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Great Chapter. Can't wait for answers!
Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:38 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
That last part was just torture! Makes me wish you would have an EPOV somewhere!
Update soon!!!
Reviewer: Bostonsunrise88 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:18 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
I'm so addicted to this story!!! Love it!
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:16 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Hmm...Edward... Looks like someone was curious..
Reviewer: mgg (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:06 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Yay!!!! You updated here too, I was so excited to get my updating alert for this story that I imidiatly then to ff and read, I reviewd over there too, so now I'm here reading the chappy again to see if I missed anything from my rush and excitment of reading the new one.
And I still think that Edward is a totaly inocent soul, he is very childlike, he has retrived himself in his mind and as we had read about him his reactions are always lassed with fear, so his inocent ogloing would def be just that INOCENT, her reaction is quite understandable, let just see how she pulls him out of this next fear endused fit.
Thanks again, and just shut me up with a new chappy, Ok!!
XXOO
MGG
Reviewer: nicoleaj (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:01 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Great chapter :) Love it :)
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