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Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 12:24 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
More!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2010 09:57 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
You end in just the right spot everytime. It is a bit of a cliffie and anticipation rolled into one :)
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 09:22 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
ahh so much progress there, but I think Bella's got some work ahead of her to calm him down now...
Oddly looking forward to Alice's "reckoning" with Bella later too hehe
Reviewer: crazymoma123 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Endeavor the Warmth
I love this story so much. Thank you for writing it. I am a full-time substitute teacher in a middle school. I have seen first-hand the effects of abuse. You are speaking to my heart.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. It's a very emotional and touchy subject, but it's one I'm passionate about. No child, woman, or man deserves to be abused. It's appalling to me.
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 07:45 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
As traumatised as Edward is, he is still after all a male. LOL
Reviewer: ayngyl22 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 03:46 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Beautifully amazing!!!!!!!! Perfect.
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 11:45 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Oh, I just love this story! I have a thing for broken Edward - and the way you describe him, it just makes me want to hug him and comfort him all the time. Not to mention that you have a great style of writing :-)
I really liked the two of them together in this chapter, and I do hope that Edward will come over the shock of being caught ogling. He just started to really let Bella in, and she wants to help him so desperately... Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 07:59 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Obviously still a 17 year old boy in there. Good chapter looking forward to more.
Reviewer: tenchis (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 07:31 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
i love your updates!
there like the air i breathe(:
Reviewer: puglover770 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 07:18 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
I love it! Please update soon!
Reviewer: trixie cullen (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 05:57 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Tormented, sexually repressed Edward is my favorite. Looking forward to future chapters!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 05:15 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Does he think he's in trouble? They made so many advancements, and then it seems like it's all coming crashing down. I do hope Bella can calm him and let him know that his curiosity is normal. Amazing chapter!
Reviewer: desireluna (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 02:02 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
ı think you should write some more in one chapter and you should write some edward parts. ıt can be fun that way
Author's Response: Well, considering that chapter was 7000 words long, I think it was pretty long, and I didn't double space it like I normally do. But if you're meaning the pacing, I'm trying to stay as realistic as I can given the storyline, so the pacing is done for a reason. As far as Epov, I don't know if I will do any. His voice is one that isn't easy to channel... not right now anyway. I am offering up an Epov for FGB, but as of right now, that's it. If I do decide to do any Epov it will be done as an outtake most likely.
Reviewer: carlybabes (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 12:18 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
God, I love this story. Please update soon!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 09:14 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Hope the bad dream was not a premonition, but rather expression of feeling cold before Edward put his arm around her. Well, Bella thinks Edward is really good looking, he probably thinks the same of her and there were not many or no females in his life so he is curious.
Reviewer: lillinna (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 08:31 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
PLEASE update soon. i cant wait for the next chapter. :)
Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 08:27 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Looks like Edward was finding some of his hormones, yes? Great chapter :)
Reviewer: CaraMia (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 06:38 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
I sound like a broken record but I love this story.........its so intense and the rate that its developing is just right. Not too slow not to fast or cliche! I give this chapter 2 thumbs up and a quarter of a lemon sliced loool actually less than a quarter of a lemon cuz this Edward is NOT ready for lemony goodness lol...........please update soon!
Reviewer: duckyd16 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 04:57 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
OH MAN! ^_^
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 04:11 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
gosh for the first time ever I'm wondering if Aro is comign after him. I guess I never considered it since he's been gone for so long. That's a weird, yet scary prospect.
Poor Edward's been sleeping on concrete. Gosh, that's just horrible!
Reviewer: vashbak (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 04:03 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Ugh! Noooo, not a cliffe, not now!
Still, such a good chapter, can't wait for more! Thank you!
Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 01:58 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Poor Edward...hes like a small child. I so hope he over comes this!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 01:46 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Oh man, update soon PLEASE? How could you leave it like that?!
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 01:28 AM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
cant wait 4the next chapter!!!!
Reviewer: DecoyDream (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 11:24 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport
Wow, you really got me hanging on the edge there...
Speechless, absolutely speechless...
Love the ending, I'm feEling the fear that Edward's feeling.
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