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Reviewer: Jaspersaysrelax1901 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 09:59 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

I really liked this chapter! PLease updated when ever you can

 

Reviewer: Bostonsunrise88 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

another beautiful chapter! love this story!!!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

I am so happy that they are moving closer.  I wonder if maybe ALice could go with Bella to visit Edward.  She isn't a man and she's friendly.  It could help him with meeting new people.  I am sad that you are leaving twilighted!!!  I will definitely continue to follow this story!  I love it!!!!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

Your story makes my heart ache in a good way, too. They are so good together. Edward has to get into contact with choice other people, like Marcus, Alice and Carlisle, soon, because I'm afraid something or someone might expose them before Edward is ready and that would be desastrous.

I still feel bad about the evening Bella has to spend with Mike at the concert.

Reviewer: sapphire_light (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

wow

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

*Happy, exstatic dance time* Edward knows now that he is loved...it is still sad that he thinks it won't last but I have faith Bella will show him otherwise. There is so much to consider when it comes to Edward...I hope he will be open to talking with Carlisle. It would be a huge step to get Edward out of the hospital...

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

Major Waahh over your decision to discontinue on Twilighted. I have an old stupid computer that won't let me get to FanFic.com so I'm stuck here!!! I hope I can get to your blog cuz this is one of my very favorite stories & I'm so looking forward to Edward's healing process.

*sniff* Linda

Reviewer: slyt2 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

OK so i have to move huh...either to FF or Twilighted? When will u be taking this down so i know?

Anyways i don't think the I love you conversation could have gone any better... I am so glad she didn't backpaddle on it and just admitted her feelings and he admitted his the same as best he could..  I am really hoping he will warm up to Marcus soon but i know that will take time..

 Carlisle sounded like a lot of what he said was positive but god just the thought that there is a chance Edward could wind up in the hospital (mental hospital) makes me sick... that would destory him and i don't think Bella could stop it from happening no matter what she promised... I am still shocked with everything i have heard that Aro has done to Edward i can still be sickened and shocked by more he does....... he is a sick bastard who does not deserve to walk around free.......

Such a great chapter as always love this story...



Author's Response:

I'll be leaving this up for about a week or so, that way it gives readers time to find out what's going on. And thank you so much for the review, hun. We'll get more info about Edward's past soon, meaning how he ended up at the hospital.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

Upon Bella's whispered declaration of love Edward was not only shocked, but was speechless.  Bella also didn't know how to retract what she said while thinking Edward was asleep or talk to him.  Edward broke the silence and questioned if she meant it and please repeat it.  His declaration was made in different words.  He has a problem with expressing himself or so he thinks.  I think he expresses himself quite well based on his life experiences.  He kissed Bella to which they both enjoyed it.  Bella has a lot of things to start into motion.  Making plans to attend community college, talk to her dad about change due to financial concerns, talk to Marcus regarding Edward, talk to Edward about facing men and heading into the light, talk to Edward about medical help for phobias, and finally talking with Carlisle regarding Edward's condition.  Alice and Bella talked in generalities with Carlisle over dinner basing on a TV show regarding the topic of traumatic abuse and living isolated from other people.  Carlisle gave general information, but couldn't say for sure unless he personally saw the patient.  Bella has a lot of work ahead of her with the time of summer quickly coming to an end.  Bella's love for Edward if possible is getting stronger the longer she is with him.  Edward has been showing adoration through his face and eyes, he wants to be physically closer to her, periodic kisses, and just generally needed to be with Bella.  Looking forward to Bella's conversation with Edward regarding Marcus (meeting him and eventually living with him), attempt to go outside of the hospital, and seek medical advice from Carlisle.  Should be an interesting chapter.

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:25 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

Carlisle is not a stupid man, so I wonder what he's thinking?

GREAT virtual interrogation, by the way.  Alice got the info, but I am sure Daddy wonders why.  

 

Okay. Lovely declarations all around by our young lovers. I wonder what Edward told Lancelot?

I am looking forward to Edward taking tiny steps into a wider world.  Hope it's kind to him.

Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

oh, i'l follow you alright! (athough i gotta admit twilighted brings special atmosphere to the story..)

i still for bella, she has this tremendous responsibility towards the ones she loves, and she still is a young girl. and i love what edward sead in Portuguese in last chapter. ;)

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

I'm sad to see that you will be leaving Twilighted, but I've already faved this fantastic story on ff.net! I don't want to miss this story or any of your updates. I just so LOVE this!!!

Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Once More With Feeling

no problem.if you don't post here i will go to fanfiction.net and put the story on alert,so i don't miss any of it.please continue.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Once More With Feeling

I didn't realize you were quiting Twilighted.net. I do read on another website I wanted to recommend if you like its called The Writers Coffee Shop.  I love reading there and they have a lot less restrictions too.  I am so glad that he was awake and heard her say I love you.  I thought he was sleeping too.  But I wish their physical relationship would progress more.

Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Once More With Feeling

Wow an early update!!!! Thank you!! :)

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Once More With Feeling

as per usual my dear i loved it and of course you can treat us to early chapters anytime you'd like haha you won't get an objection from us :D im soooo glad that edward knows and that bella told him :D i am also so glad that alice has been as supportive as she has a friend like that would be sooo important in a case like bellas i just love this all thanks for writing it :D brilliant truly brilliant :D cant wait for more doll :D

Reviewer: sunshine4047 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Once More With Feeling

Oh!!! this was a wonderful chapter!! I'm sad that you update once ever few weeks. I always have to look back the the last chapter to recap everything. Anyway, what is your fanfiction penname so I can look you up?



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. I update every 2 weeks right now because my kids are out of school, and writing is really hard to do when you have three kids home. Not to mention, I've had some serious RL issues that take precedence over writing. However, once school starts back up, I should be able to update once a week again.  We'll see how it goes.

I go by JMCullen09 on FF'n. You can either read it there or my blog.

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Once More With Feeling

so now he knows and seems to be handling it well........he also has admitted to Bella he feels the same way.........I hope in the future he can over come his fears and be able to become part of Bella's outside world.... i do believe that Marcus is the first step to desensatizing Edward to men.......he knows that Marcus won't hurt him because he never has in 7 years.........I have a feeling that Carlisle knows more than the girls think he does......teenagers always think the adults, parents in particular, know nothing!!!!!!!! so I think that is going to be a bit of a shock to the girls.......I said this along time ago when there was a mention on Alice's eye color...I think there is still something to that......so update soon and I will be looking for you on FFN

Jacki

Reviewer: IzzyBizzy (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Reveal

Awesome story. I read all 19 chapters tonight, and what a way to end the chapter. I can't wait to know what Edward does next!

Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Reveal

I hope that it will help him to heal better from the pain of his past. I really hope he can meet Marcus who loves him. I long for their friendship. I hope Bella and Marcus can bring Edward history, cience books and the other stuff people read at school. It´s important to know things ... he is so smart. 

I´m so excited to read more ... I looooove your story.

Estou preocupada com o desenvolvimento mental dele (por isso a idéia dos livros de escola) ... o emocional está indo bem graças a Bella, mas coitado do Marcus, ele é incrível com o Edward mas não consegue nem ver ou falar com ele. Faz anos isso! Tá na hora, né, Marcus merece!

Estou tão feliz q ela falou q o ama ... eu espero q ele consiga definir agora o q ele tá sentindo por ela e nao sabe o q é ... eles vão se beijar de novo!!! oba! é lindo e puro o amor deles. Tudo em relação a eles é tão natural, tão belo, fico tão emocionada com a intensidade deles.

Estou também preocupada com o lance do banheiro e de não ter janela onde ele fica ... todos precisam de luz para serem felizes, de sol! Ela precisa levar ele no quintal do hospital durante o dia pra ser o sol e sentir em sua pele seu calor ... seria como redescobrir o mundo. bjs ;)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Reveal

I am literally speechless.  This story touches so deeply.  I am SO excited to read more!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Furthersome

He melts me...

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Realize

This was endearing.  ALiceis a smart cookie and I liked all of her points.  Bella is fiercely protective of Edward and I admire her for that.  She will always put his needs first. 

I agree that they are nowhere near having a sexual relationship but Edward's curiousity will expand their physical intimacy, I'm sure.  He doesn't really understand the social standards.  I assume he will be driven by his primal needs to touch her and feel her.  Since he has had no physical contact, her every brush of skin will be magnified for him.

I love how this story is progressing.  It feels natural and subtle and right.  I adore them!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Truth Unfolding

She is TOTALLY in love with him.  I am happy that Alice finally laid in on the line for her.  Maybe now she can aknowledge it. 

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 11:44 AM · On: A Piece of Beautiful

I am sure he woke up to find her gone and wet searching for her... Or, he assumed that he was alone and was going to use the bathroom.  It wasn't a sexual feel, but it did feel like adoration, love, and purity.  It was very well done!

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