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Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 04:39 AM · On: Furthersome

More please. I hope that Edward will get well enough to go with Bella and live with her.

Reviewer: slyt2 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Realize

OMG i don't have a clue how i missed this chapter....UGH  i can't afford to miss any of this story...... It owns my heart.....

I am so glad she was finally able to talk to Alice about what is going on (somewhat) but god i hope it doesn't come back and bite her in the ass.. like Alice doesn't tell someone like her dad or Jasper......I don't know

Anyways this was a really good chapter loved the unintention kiss...

Now on to the next chapter.......love this story......love this Edward and Bella....

Reviewer: WrittenInTheStars (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Furthersome

oooooooooooooooooh ;) This chapter was soooooooooooooo sweet!!!

Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 03:59 AM · On: Furthersome

Aww what a great chapter. I was wondering how she will tell him about going away for college, i just love this sotry, keep it up and hope you feel better

Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 02:43 AM · On: Furthersome

This one is definitely one of my favourite chapters....

OMG, he's really taken great strides, that's SO impressive!

And Alice's always right.............They DO love each other...........I mean.........Duh! Off course!

Update very soon, I just wish you never stop writing...*sigh*

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 02:39 AM · On: Furthersome

I can't believe how far he has come. I actually shivered when they approached the door. Oh dear, I'm rambling - because I'm just amazed.

I love this story, and I can't wait for more :-)

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 11:59 PM · On: Enigma

sooooo awesomeeee!!! thanks for sharing your story!!! :D continuing!!

Reviewer: Ashapea (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Furthersome

Aww this story is so cute! Please write more soon!!!!

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Hide and Seek

omg this is good writing and a really good story!!! very original also!!! i'll continue reading!!! =)

Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Furthersome

Omg, I always write the same thing but I really love your story! Keep up the great job and thank you for sharing! I hope you recover soon! :)

Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Furthersome

AWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! LUV IT!

Reviewer: lawruhn (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Furthersome

Oh my god... LOVED this. I'm so happy about Edwards progress!!!!!

Reviewer: MaliaMog (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Furthersome

MY heart is all fluttery.... how can he be such a romantic when he's lived in that Hospital for years????

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Furthersome

This is such a wonderful story. This is one of my favorites!

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Furthersome

Such a touching chapter.  The way you move through their feelings, is beautiful to behold!  You're killing me softly ...  with your words!               ~   Jeannie

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Furthersome

Wow...I mean WOW! This story totally rocks my world...I love the progress Edward is making...serious warm fuzzies! I am extremly proud of Edward making it to the door as well...happy dance!

 

I sure hope your tail bone isn't bothering you to bad and wish a speedy recovery!

Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Furthersome

aww they are too freaking cute. that kiss, thank god didn't freak him out which I thought was great. keep up the great work. i can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: Martimolius (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 03:30 AM · On: Realize

next chapter!!!

love the story

Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 10:24 PM · On: Realize

OMG OMG OMG They kissed! Sooooooooooo sweet!

I think he is doing well and she should press him to be friends with Marcus, he wants to be Ed's dad ... they should get close to each other. Marcus loved him.

Then Carlisle can help him with everything Marcus and Bella can't.

I am in awe of Edward too.

 

Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Truth Unfolding

I love this story more and more if it even possible. So beautiful!

Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 10:01 PM · On: A Piece of Beautiful

He never had love or cookies or a bed or comfort or a friend until Bella ... so sad!

I have tears in my eyes.

Portuguese, interesting ... I'm from Brazil.

Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 09:43 PM · On: A State of Serenity and Rapport

She is a great girl! He is a great guy!

Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Discern

Thank God he had Lancelot all these years ... poor sweet boy! I never knew someone so strong in my life! Edward deserves the world for that.

Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Method of Secrecy

poor guy ... he waits half a day to go to the bathroom!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG

Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Endeavor the Warmth

lots of tears ... it's so sad!

I'm taken by this story. It's incredible, creative, sweet, lots of drama ... it's captivating. it's a beautiful story. I never read something so interesting like this in a long time. Congrats!

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