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Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Reveal

Emmett is an idiot. Sorry, but that had to be said :-)

Alice is a wonderful friend to Bella. I really love how you describe their relationship.

And Bella and Edward? Obviously they have very similar feelings for each other, so I hope Edward won't take Bella's revelation negatively. I can't wait for the next update to find out!

Thanks for sharing this story, I love it!

Reviewer: aira_li (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Hide and Seek

this story is amazing, i love it! you're doing a great job i cant wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: aira_li (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Hide and Seek

this story is amazing, i love it! you're doing a great job i cant wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Reveal

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww THAT IS ALL i don't even know how else to express myself such an amazing story and incredible chapter you are such an inspiration to those of us who wish we could be a tenth as talented as you im serious you are fabulous doll im sucked so far into this story i cant wait to see how he reacts to her admission and i wonder how much of her speech he heard again you are fantastic amazing super brilliant and all the other positive adjectives i cant think of without taking at least a little nap lol :D

Reviewer: kathy6900 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Reveal

Another beautiful chapter!  Please hurry and post the next one!

Reviewer: edward4eva (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Reveal

Ahhhhhhh major cliffhanger, can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Reveal

Wow well at least they are kissing.  I am so glad she is not leaving him to go to college but I never thought she would. lol.  As for him hearing her say she loves him, well I think that is the best thing ever.  I just hope he will accept that.

Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Reveal

Well there you are!
Here was me just about to send out a search party.........hope you are good!
This story is building really nicely, can't wait for your next update. Xx

Reviewer: keitachibana (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Reveal

I hope your real life issues will be solved very soon.

I will pray for you and your family.


Thank you for writing this chapter.

I love this story so much!


Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Reveal

  You amaze me!  The depth of emotion you portray, is beautiful.  I am in awe of this story, and your telling of it!  Just.. beautiful.      ~   Jeannie

Reviewer: bella_edwardcullen (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:28 AM · On: Reveal

awesome chapter it was sweet sad and funny but none the less i like ths chapter the best

Reviewer: DecoyDream (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Reveal

Uh oh...

I wonder how Edward will react.

Reviewer: nbpowlk (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Reveal

oh snap.

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 04:19 AM · On: Reveal

As much as i love edward i dont thin k what she is doing is necessarily right...i am not from america but i heard community college is a really bad career move and ppl only look at real colleges like 4 yr schools and that community college is for ppl like your emmett in this story...i think she would be making a mistake...why cant she just put school off for a year to make extra money as that is what she would tell charlie...emmett did it...charlie wouldnt accept community college when she is smart as she is....i hope edward makes a breakthrough soon....i think their best bet is carlisle....,marcus is a good guy too i guess...not sure what is going on there though...

Reviewer: twilightlover909 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Reveal

Oh this chapter was sooo more than great! I cannot wait for the next update! Cannot wait for more Edward/Bella love. Update soon!

Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Reveal

Awesome!! I love it. I'm excited for the next chapter, as usual!

Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 03:11 AM · On: Reveal

Beautiful chapter!  I can't wait to read what Edward will do with this new information.  Thank goodness she was finally able to tell him how she felt, even if she did think he couldn't hear her.

I love your writing.  Looking forward to more!


Reviewer: Martimolius (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Furthersome


love this story


Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 03:48 AM · On: Furthersome


Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 02:06 AM · On: Furthersome

I am now obsessed with this story! I can't wait for the next update :)

Reviewer: Martimolius (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 09:27 AM · On: Furthersome

so beautiful


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Furthersome

aww Edward, nice line there at the end ;)

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Realize

oohhh kisses!!


I'm a little worried for Marcus, hopefully he gets better soon!!

I did like Lancelot's bargaining with Bella though hehe ;)

Reviewer: twilightlover909 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Furthersome

This is such a great story, it warms my heart! I'm eager for the next update.

Reviewer: amyat (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Furthersome

The gentleness of your writing, the ease with which your characters flow is such a nice thing to read.  Thank you for having them share the kiss, but then suddenly have the ability to take it farther.  It's very realistic and it makes that kiss all the more sweet.


I await your next chapter, for the beauty of this love story.



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