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Reviewer: Morbidmuch (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Don't Go
Should she stay or should she go? (channeling my inner punkrocker with some The Clash in the early hours of the morning) I am definately intrigued by this, and hope that you continue soon
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 02:12 AM · On: Don't Go
Great chapter. I think Bella should go home, let everyone know she's okay, then definitely go back to the hospital. Maybe she should tell someone, but after she's gotten to know a little more about why Edward's at the hospital. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Don't Go
She should probably leave to tell everyone she's okay but she definitely needs to go back soon. I think she should tell someone he's there but maybe not until she knows a little more about why he's there. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:24 PM · On: Enigma
Great chapter. How long has he been at the hospital? Can he talk? Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Hide and Seek
I just started this fic but I really like it so far. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Don't Go
i don't think she will.
i'm completely bewildered. and fascinated.and enamored with this story.
i'm enjoying it so much!
Reviewer: sadie_nikol (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:49 PM · On: Don't Go
I wouldn't tell anyone at first and I'd definitely go back to find out more about him. She is obviously interested and not scared anymore, seems like she genuinely cares about this stranger/Edward. I'm liking the story so far, keep it up!
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Don't Go
I fucking loved that chapter. Awwww he is so sweet. I love the bear and the symbol of comfort. I think he feels a sense of peace having her there and I think she should stay, but I know that she has to go before a search party come looking for her. she'll come back, how the hell can you resist a broken and scared Edward with Lancelot in tow. I just want to protect him from harm and make him feel safe. I really really loved this chapter and you wrote it perfectly as always. Great job hun and can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Don't Go
"With the change in position, the light animated his features so I could actually see more than just his eyes, see that they were encased in the most beautiful face I’d ever seen. He had those deep green eyes, high cheekbones, a straight nose, and perfect full lips. My God, he was beautiful."...certainly not waht you'd expect in that situation....
Hmmmm. I don't Think I would tell anyone about him right away, I guess because I'd be afraid they would just lock him up or put him in a mental hospital, and he seems so sweet and lost....
Reviewer: lovebitessobiteback (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Hide and Seek
I LOVE this story! I have not seen anything like it before. I do think that Bella should go because people are going to be looking for her, but if I were her, I would go find my friends and family and then come back to Edward ASAP. I would also bring things that I think he would need. I love this Edward, I just want to hug him! And that bear! Oh that just broke my heart! How sweet is that, that Edward would cover her up and give him something that means so much to him. I can't wait to find out why he is there. Good job on this story and please post soon!
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Don't Go
Bella should really go cause there will be others looking for her, as to wheither or not she tells anyone about Edward, it might be smarter to wait untill she returns and see if she can find out anything about him and why he's there. Great chapter and quite the story. So looking forward to your next update. I'm hooked!
Reviewer: LizPip (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Don't Go
I'm loving this. And I also love, although I may be reading way too into this, that the name of Edward's bear is Lancelot, the name of Sarah's bear in Labyrinth. My love of DB may be clouding the issue... :) Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: And the fact that you caught the connection to the Lancelot name - I admit whole heartedly Labyrinth came to mind first with that name - makes me just adore you. Lol. However, I will state that I do love the character of Lancelot - thank Richard Gere and Ioan Gruffudd for their unique and heart stopping portrayals of the wayward hero - so that played a partial role in the naming as well. Thank you for noticing, and thank you for your review!
Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Don't Go
Very good!
Reviewer: bayoubabe985 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 08:04 PM · On: Don't Go
This story is disturbingly intense. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: heyitsmattkim (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Don't Go
arrrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggggggggg ur driving me insane here! i loooove stories like this where he's all vulnerable and she saves him? omg. she should stay and now im jsut rambling like the weirdo i am pllllease update quickly. for the sake of my sanity. becuase if im insane, i cant r&r now can i?
Reviewer: marybetherrrrs (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Don't Go
OMG! She NEEDS to go back. She has to. These cliffies are driving me crazy, Jess! GAH. That was so good. I really need to know that she goes back. He totally is making progress. Abandonward I LOVE YOU!
So good bb. so good.
Reviewer: bella_edwardcullen (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Don't Go
i think she shoud let her peoples know shes ok and tell her father about edward or some one she could trust and hopefully shell go back to visit him
Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Don't Go
Oh my gosh! that was such a touching chapter! I can't wait till the next one!
Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Don't Go
Gaah! This story is amazing so far. Poor Edward! Wonder what happened to him. I'm so glad he spoke to her, though, even if it wasn't much. I really hope she'll come back soon, and I absolutely don't think she should tell anyone yet. Please update again soon!
Reviewer: Cullenfan (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Don't Go
I'm dying for the next chapter! This is such an amazing and original idea; I love it so much. :)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Don't Go
Sigh...Reading about Edward in his little dark corner is so sad. I do agree she needs to let everyone know she is ok but I want her to go back and help Edward. Nobody needs to know about him until Bella has a grasp on why he is there. Ohh i am so excited about her returning. Can't wait for your next update.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Enigma
Wow this sounds intriguing, what could have possibly made that boy react the way he did? I am fascinated by the mystery, can't wait to read Chapter 3 =)
Reviewer: Norma_Jean (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Don't Go
so good i cant think of what she should do but its soo good
Reviewer: Amber19 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Don't Go
Oh, so cute! Love it.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Hide and Seek
Ohhh this sounds fascinating...i can't wait to discover more...
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