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Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Puzzle Piece
Ah! I loved it!
I hope everyone enjoyed it as much as I did, because it was brilliant! I loved it and can not wait until you update!! I loved it!
-lionandthelamblove7
Reviewer: iDrinkBloodshake (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Puzzle Piece
After reading the 5th chapter I definitely have more questions. I'm not going to ask you, though. I'm going to be patient and read the rest of the upcoming chapters instead. :)
2 questions answered, 4 questions asked. Sorry, I just have to say that.
Em
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
Sad but very good chapter, looking forward to more.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
Oh dear lord i could just cry tear of joy for Edward's victory. It breaks my heart to see him so scared. It definalty warms my heart that Marcus has been taking care of him. Way to go Marcus!
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
You have captured my interest. Your writing really draws a person in. Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: jenniferpattinson (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
I think this story is fantastic! Out of the 200+ I have saved in my favorites, this is the story I wait for. Very well written and I can't wait to see where you are going with it! Thank you for writing something other than the 'usual!' Okay, I'll retreat back to my corner now and continue waiting for the next chapter! : )
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Enigma
Right now I'm confused. Didn't her friends come looking for her? Sounds like she's been in the room for quite a while ... maybe it's cleared up in the next chapter!
Author's Response: It'll all be cleared up. Don't worry.
Reviewer: Robsgirl82 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
Hella fantastic story chicka. Wow.
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Oooo -- great atmosphere and really scary. Thanks for writing something so new!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
How old is Edward in this Fic?
Author's Response: You'll learn that very soon, but he is older than Bella. I'm being vague for a reason, but I promise all questions will be answered.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
Man, this story is intriguing! I can't figure out what happened to Edward and if he'll ever be able to overcome whatever it is that he's been through.
Reviewer: Katie_girl78 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
luv it alot
Reviewer: twigirl86 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
oh this is so good.
Reviewer: loyalluv (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
I am seriously loving this story! The emotions are strong and the questions and anticipation has me constantly checking if this story is updated.
Reviewer: aly1390 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
gah! i want more, every time a new facet of the story unfolds it makes me want to read it more... i've also made peace with the fact that these chapters will be short-but really good!
i feel so sorry for what happened to edward, how traumatic his experience must have been for him to retreat so much... distancing himself from other because he doesn't have a choice..
Author's Response: The short chapters are only temporary, I promise. They'll be much longer very soon.
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
how pitiful and sad this edward is.
Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
Oh wow, I am totally loving this story. I am so intrigued to find out more and more about Edward.
Great story.
Hugs,
Louise
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
oooh! Marcus! didn't think of him!
and the little bit of Edward background! wonderful!
can't wait for the next one my dear!
awesome story!
mwah!
steph
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
Oh God. I am ALREADY CRYING about your Edward and I don't even know WTF happened to him. I am so screwed with this story. You are so good.
I hope both you and your child get to feeling better soon!
Reviewer: twilightsfan81 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
Bloody brilliant, JM. By far your best work, deary.
Oustanding!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: JEM22 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
I love this...great great story
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
I love this fic so much. Thank you for the update.
Reviewer: TwitardGirl (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
I wanna hug the crap outta Edward! The poor guy! Of course that would scare the crap out of him so its kinda a moot point to try to comfort him when it would do the opposite!
Okay enough about my insaine love for your abandonward! I freaking love your story hon! I love it more and more each chapter and your writing is brilliant! You really know how to keep me intrigued and just...GAH I love this story so much! I am so glad I stumbled across it. You are super sweet and the story is amazing. I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter! I will continue to stalk the thread until you kick me out LOL.
I need to hurry up and finish writing chapter 17 so I can pimp this story more! (My Edward is being lazy and does not want to write his chapter for me...lazy butt!) But thanks for sharing this amazing story with us hon! You haz mad skillz!
-Emma <3
Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
Marcus, huh? I thought it was one of the Volturi :) Bella is a very brave girl, though. I hope she can help Edward
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Puzzle Piece
Glad he had Marcus to hide him from evil. I hope Bella can lure him out the hole.
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