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Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Reveal
You are so cruel! Talk about a cliff hanger!
Wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Reveal
Another great chapter! I have to tell you.....you are fabulous at this! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: DirtyAim (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Reveal
Shuch a wonderful chappie, can't wait for the next one! I hope Edward understands Bella's declaration and that his reaction is a good one!
Reviewer: tonitmlaymon (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Reveal
Aww! What a sweet update. I've read and loved every one of your stories! They are all spectacular, but this one is really outstanding. You truly have a talent for writing and in my opinion you should be highly paid for your efforts:)! Seriously, it's a pleasure to read your work!
Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Reveal
Oh my goodness!!
He was awake! Wow. I'm not sure as to what is going to happen. Both the reactions of Edward and Bella are a big ? for me right now. lol. Loved this chapter and can't wait for the update. Oh! I so love the banner, too!
-lionandthelamblove7
Reviewer: puglover770 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Reveal
I love it! Please update soon!
Reviewer: ecandme (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Reveal
Oh WOW! LOVE THIS!!! Can't wait for Edward's reaction. Please update soon :D
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Reveal
I READ THIS A SECOND TIME OVER ON THIS SITE SINCE I SCANNED THROUGH IT THE FIRST TIME...TRYING TO READ IT AND DEAL WITH A NEEDY HUBS IS VERY HARD. ANYWAYS, THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL FROM WHAT HE SAID AND SHE SAID TO EACH OTHER TO THE 2ND KISS AND ANOTHER ONE. THEN ALICE GIVING A SOLUTION TO A PROBLEM CUZ LIKE I SAID BEFORE SHE IS AWESOME. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE TO UNFOLD. I READ THE THREAD AND YOU ANSWERED SOME OF MY QUESTIONS THERE THE OTHER DAY.
GREAT JOB!
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Reveal
I'm glad to see a new chapter. But I'm sad that it's going to take a while to know what Edward's reaction to Bella's confession is going to be like.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Reveal
I REALLY LIKE THE TURN YOUR STORY IS TAKING ITS SUCH A SOFT AND GENTEL WAY FOR TWO PEOPLE TO FALL IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Reveal
i wish 2 weeks ended tomorrow
Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Reveal
So beautiful! I love the way they interact; and I love the way Marcus is so perceptive and kindhearted. I missed your update so much - thank you for the treat today!
Reviewer: sapphire_light (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Reveal
bi weekly updates are great, twice weekly would be even better because that's how much im loving this story but i'll take what i can get. i love the developement of the characters and their relationship. i *hate* whoever did this to edward and im a little afraid for him, for both of them, because bella does have other responsibilities, too, but i want so much for them to be happy and strong together...
Reviewer: JoMarie (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Reveal
I like that they both declared themselves, even though Bella couldn't understand him. They were both hesitant to say what they felt. Edward doesn't seem to realize the feelings he's describing can be called love. Will he realize that now that Bella has told him she loves him?
Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Reveal
Love, love love love love..they call it love love love love love...she is all, she is all I need....
Ahhhh...they love each other and it's awesome! Cue the little birdies twittering around thier heads :) Awesome chapter!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Reveal
"Edward was now awake. Edward had heard me".....,YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Reveal
I'm so glad you updated even when you were busy. You're awesome. :) thanks so much for that great update. its about time they decided what they were going to do about college. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Reveal
I'm so glad you updated even when you were busy. You're awesome. :) thanks so much for that great update. its about time they decided what they were going to do about college. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Reveal
I'm so glad you updated even when you were busy. You're awesome. :) thanks so much for that great update. its about time they decided what they were going to do about college. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Reveal
OMG..................That was just......Whoa...........
I'm completely overwhelmed right now, i want to cry and laugh at the same time.....They're getting to it............They're gonna make it I know
But please don't make him freak out.......He doesn't deserve it!They don't deserve it......They have to find a way to make things work...........Please........
Reviewer: slyt2 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Reveal
awwwwwwwwwwww wiping tears... i loved what he said to her.. awww so sweet.. and Bella omg she told him she loved him..
This was such a good chapter, i loved how you wrote about her spending time with Edward then with her family and with Alice ending back up with Edward.. When she looked at him sleeping and said she doesn't know how she could spend time away from him .. awww... and then what she said to Alice oh i am so happy she told Alice her plans about not going to college so Alice was able to come up with a plan for Bella to stay with Edward but go to College..
Edward heard Bella talk about him in her sleep...... and the way he held her while during the fireworks. and the words he spoke to her awwww..
But more then that OMG he heard her say those words to him, i wonder if he was awake the whole time.. And what is he gonna think about it. With Edward it could go both ways.. He could love it or retreat back to a shell of himself cuz he thinks he is not worthy of love...... UGH can't wait for a update .. LOVE THIS STORY....
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Reveal
Oh My Gawd...what a beautiful chapter with them declaring themselves. You did an awesome job!!! I can't tell you how much I look forward to your updates...I love this story sooo much! I hope you feel better soon. Linda xo
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Reveal
OMG!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!! This story is so powerful on so many levels!!!!!!!!!! the emotions that come pooring out of the smallest things is amazing....even with Big bro Emmett......You are a wonderful author and have a way of getting your readers trapped(in a good way) in the story......and Edward's words to Bella, my god how beautiful are they(once i know the translation, lol).......Bella finally opening up to Edward even while he sleeps, only to find him awake and aware of what she told him....I can't even imagine all the emotions that are happening to them right now....joy, fear, surprise, elation, panic......just to name the ones I felt as I read it!!!!!! Thank you for this wonderful story.... I will try to be patient for the update, but 2 weeks is a long time, lol!!
until next time
Jacki
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Reveal
Wow! Really love this story! Please write more soon!
Reviewer: littlevany (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Reveal
“Sometimes… sometimes I think I dreamed of you even before I met you, Bella, that maybe in another life time you must have been mine.”
Aww...is he cute or is he cute?! And finally Bella told him how she feels - even if she didn`t plan on it. I can`t wait for the next chapter to see what Edward will say....
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