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Reviewer: Nayarit (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 08:08 PM · On: A Slight Progression

I'm honestly intrigued and very curious as to where you're going with this and what will come next . . . .

Reviewer: kiwi vampire (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 05:44 PM · On: A Slight Progression

Can't wait for next update!


Reviewer: DanniCullen (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 03:53 PM · On: A Slight Progression


You are really talented. 

Reviewer: Lamiko (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:32 AM · On: Hide and Seek

I really like the way this story is progessing...please continue it =)

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 11:51 PM · On: A Slight Progression

Great chapter--again!  I'm intrigued with what happened with Edward and whether or not Marcus is as good as he'd like Bella to think.  Is he Edward's savior or his captor?

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 11:20 PM · On: A Slight Progression

Ohhh poor Edward. I have to wonder just what happened to Edward, it's so heartbreakin to see him so introverted. I am so happy Bella and Marcus are taking it slow as it seems like Edward has been thru alot.

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 11:08 PM · On: A Slight Progression

Awsome chapter, Bella is finally getting Edward to open up a little bit each time with her. But can he understand that she is not able to stay with him at all times like I'm sure he wants her to. I can imagine his aloneness and desperation of contact yet to fear it as well.

Reviewer: twilgirl (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 04:44 PM · On: A Slight Progression

Looking forward to another chapter!

Reviewer: Avaanne (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 04:36 PM · On: A Slight Progression

I really like this fic. I'm hooked.  I look forward to finding out all about Edward and Lancelot.  Forks is a small town someone has to know something about him...

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 03:11 PM · On: A Slight Progression

It seems that everyone who knows her is on to her odd behavior, and that it's only going to lead to her either having to lie outright, or let them in.  As for what is going on with Edward?   I'd love to know what he is thinking!

Reviewer: wallflower88 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 12:52 PM · On: A Slight Progression

Perfect chapter! Every time he asks her to stay when she has to go my heart aches, poor Edward.

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 09:39 AM · On: A Slight Progression

OH! I can't wait to see what happens! I love Lancelot btw sooo cute.

Reviewer: ArdnaidOcirg (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 07:38 AM · On: A Slight Progression

Aww, you seriously gotta update! I really wanted so badly to hug Edward or give him a cup of coffee and many, many blankets.

Reviewer: fashionista19 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:56 AM · On: A Slight Progression

Just dropping by again to hopefully put a smile on your face about how I like your story very much so far. I'm intrigued to see where you take the story and learn about Edward's past. Waiting for an update!!! : )

Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:20 AM · On: A Slight Progression

Another awesome chapter! I'm seriously in love with this story - thanks so much for sharing it.

Reviewer: DancingIris (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 05:05 AM · On: A Slight Progression

awww.... this is absolutely captivating... I hope you update soon.

Reviewer: KalifDee (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 04:47 AM · On: A Slight Progression

Girl I just saw this story! So glad you have another one going! Love your writing and this one has sucked me in once again!!

Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 04:46 AM · On: A Slight Progression

Great story :)

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 04:19 AM · On: A Slight Progression

Very good I like how Bella is handling him, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 03:56 AM · On: A Slight Progression

Well, I hate to have to wait until Saturday for the next chapter, but I know all good things take I did love this chapter though. REALLY! I can  not wait until you update!!


Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 03:16 AM · On: A Slight Progression

I am so loving this...Do I have to wait until next Saturday?  Ugh!  LOL!

Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 03:08 AM · On: A Slight Progression

Awww.  How could she refuse that offer? **sigh

I really enjoy your story.  It always keeps me guessing and craving for another chapter.  Hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 02:42 AM · On: A Slight Progression

This is well heart is breaking

Reviewer: jennifer575 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 02:10 AM · On: A Slight Progression

just came across this story.  very interesting and touching.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 01:50 AM · On: A Slight Progression

Great chapter. Will Bella stay for Edward? How much longer can she lie to Charlie and Alice? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

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