Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: Robsgirl82 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Meet the Parent
I can't get enough of this story it's so hella good.
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Meet the Parent
Very nice chapter!
I agree with Bella though, too easy on marcus... What is Charlie up to... he's gonna come snooping around isn't he? or emmett? hmmmm.
So sad to see Edward react to his dreams as he does, but totally expected. It's nice to know he has lancelot and bella to help with them.
Well done my dear!
can't wait until the next!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Meet the Parent
I think Bella made alot of progress with Edward, getting to touch him and having him touch her. I'm glad that Marcus is so kind and accommodating. I hope that Bella will also be the balm to his lonliness as well. Maybe they can have dinner at her house more often!
Reviewer: cessi1500 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 04:41 AM · On: Meet the Parent
I love it.
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Meet the Parent
Ooh, I can't wait for the next update! This story is so fascinating and mysterious. I love it! Edward is growing dependant on Bella and she is on him as well. I wish she could get him outside the hospital for a walk in the woods or something, but that may come later, I hope. What if Charlie decides to make an impromtu visit to the hospital? I know if it was my daughter I certainly would, just to see what exactly is going on there and to make sure it's a safe environment. Edward is hidden pretty well but Charlie's no fool. I think. Great chapter and looking forward to much more Edward/Bella. :) and looong chapters.
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Meet the Parent
Good chapter Im looking forward to more Edward interaction
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Meet the Parent
I do have faith in you. I am loving this story. It's so involving!
I am so heartbroken for Edward, not even knowing what his demons are. Glad he has come to want Bella's company and to miss her and to TELL her so, more or less. That's incredible improvement.
Looking forward to the next time!
LJ
Reviewer: oliveU (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 01:34 AM · On: Meet the Parent
Yep I'm with Bella on this one. Charlie was WAY to ready to accept Marcus. I'll bet he's doing his own little investigations. In fact I think it's probably a good idea. I'm not sure I completely trust Marcus myself. I think Bella as a member of the computer age should probably do some googling of her own. Surely someone is missing Edward somewhere? She can't stroke his head on her lap in the dark for much longer. If she really wants to help him she needs to ask some questions. Thankyou for your speedy update. It was a nice surprise.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Meet the Parent
I can't wait for the update! I'm glad Edward is trusting Bella more.
Reviewer: develindiskies (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 12:07 AM · On: Don't Go
awh, Edward!
Me thinks she should stay, but she shouldn't tell anyone he's there.
Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 11:34 PM · On: Meet the Parent
god Edward makes my heart ache!!! The more he says the more I want to take care of him!!
Reviewer: twigirl86 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Meet the Parent
oh god how i love this.
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Meet the Parent
I love Edward!
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 11:00 PM · On: Meet the Parent
Poor Edward. Night terrors? I used to have those and they are horrible. His confession about Bella making it hurt less was heart rending.
I am already dying inside with the thought about when she has to o back to school....
Reviewer: Katie_girl78 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Meet the Parent
luv it
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Meet the Parent
oooooh, going for the suspense with this one aint ya!
I Likey!
Reviewer: cullenstyle (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Meet the Parent
"No more" That broke my heart!!!
I love this!! I want to hug Edward, and Lancelot :)
Bella is going to college :( That's good for her, but bad for Edward.
UPDATE SOON!!!
Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Meet the Parent
I work at a hospital that has a creepy, abadoned area to it. This story has inspired me to check it out and hopefully find my own lonely, tortured Edward!
Author's Response: LMAO. You'll have to let me know if you succeed on that. ;)
Reviewer: Kiley (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Meet the Parent
The anticipation is awful... seeing new chapters is STELLAR! Thanks and keep up the good work :)
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Meet the Parent
Bella is making good progress with Edward. The meeting with Charlie went well.
Reviewer: twilightsfan81 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Meet the Parent
So bloody fantastic, JM. So bloody fantastic!
Reviewer: JEM22 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Meet the Parent
I enjoy this more and more every chapter
Reviewer: withherownwings (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Meet the Parent
GOOOOOOD!
I hope Edward gets more comfortable touching/being touched by Bella. He's so broken; I just want to hug him until he hurts no more.
-Sara
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Meet the Parent
this was great i mean him actually telling her it doesnt hurt so much when youre here was soooo sweet i just am so glad that i started reading this ;D you are brilliant doll :D cant wait for more :D
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Meet the Parent
Still love it! Almost dreading finding out what happened to Edward but of course I NEED to know now! Looking forward to more!
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
| 
