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Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Home Again
Does Carlile know something? hm...
And the end off the chapter! Such a cliffhanger. I'm glad I have some more chapters to read!
Reviewer: LostHalo (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Acquiesce
Great chapter. Really enjoyed learning more about Edward-even though its really sad :( The Ipod part was adorable.
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Don't Go
This chapter was so emotional. I felt like crying.
Reviewer: Katie_girl78 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Acquiesce
luv it
Reviewer: twilightsfan81 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Acquiesce
OME. My heart, JM. Such a beautiful add.
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Enigma
Great mistery set up. This chapter raised a LOT of questions.
Reviewer: jennifer575 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Acquiesce
love this story. wish things would move a long a lilttle the suspense is killing me.
Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Acquiesce
I am almost afraid to ask what happened to him but I'm sure you're going to tell us. And Bella is very fearless in taking this on. Great chapter :)
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:55 AM · On: The Plan
Thank god for Marcus and his brilliant idea. It's the perfect excuse to be there for Edward. Well I'm so happy that Charlie is so far okay with her doing this as long as he meets Marcus. The ending of the chapter I was in complete awwww...That was so touching that he trusts her enough to lay his head on her lap. PERFECTION JESS *clapping hands* I love you hun.
Your invisible friend
Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Acquiesce
I am absolutely loving this. It is so emotive and touching, but I'm dreadingthe day that Bella has to go away to college. Edward has suffered so much anguish in his life and is so vulnerable and broken it breaks my heart. Thank you so much for sharing your lovely writing.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:29 AM · On: A Slight Progression
Okay hun, sorry about the lateness of my review. I so fail. Anyway I loved this chapter. I know her family is worried about her and she maybe acting a little strange, but it was right for her to reasure them. It was so sweet that she made them both a nice meal. The reading to Edward was fantastic and he's getting so used to her being there. The ending killed me when he asked her to please stay. Loved the chapter. Miss you hun. Great job.
Reviewer: sugunary (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:27 AM · On: The Plan
I know Bella is trying her best to help Edward and earn his trust, but she really needs help with this, God just want to take him home and wrap him in a loving environment.
Reviewer: sugunary (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:56 AM · On: A Slight Progression
Just want to wrap him up and take him home to mother a while. aghhh breaks my heart. Great chapter.
Reviewer: vampireyouth (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Acquiesce
Love the new chapter.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Acquiesce
Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Acquiesce
i have to review here too because this story is just awesome! i love it! iwas so happy to see it updated! keep up the good work:)
Reviewer: sugunary (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Puzzle Piece
ugh my heart is breaking for Edward. What hell he must have gne through.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Acquiesce
You still leave alot of questions! Well, we know he likes books and music. Just how educated is he? It's obvious he's pretty isolated from the world and has been for some time not to recognize technology. Does he even have any idea what that spark of touch could mean? To him is it pleasant or scary and painful? I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:53 AM · On: Acquiesce
Loving it!!!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Acquiesce
I had to skim over the ouch parts. It is a weakness of mine, the inability to ideate child abuse. *shudder* You wrote it well, don't get me wrong. What I read.
I love that she brought her iPod and that she is sharing it with him. I am wondering if she can help him feel better when she can't be with him, if he has that. An iPod and Lancelot. :)
And ahhh, the electric current. *grin* What's an E/B story w/o it? ;-) I am looking forward to seeing how you play it!
Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:37 AM · On: Acquiesce
Im really enjoying this story. I cant wait to see where Edward and Bella end up. Hopefully he can get past all of his demons.
Reviewer: bellasbestfriend (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:33 AM · On: Acquiesce
What will happen when Bella goes to college?
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:52 AM · On: Acquiesce
Great chapter. Glad we've found out a little more about Edward. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: cessi1500 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:37 AM · On: Acquiesce
I love it. The chapter is amazing, I love that you answer a few questions in each chapter, but never too much. You keep the reader interested. I'm very intrigued with this story. Keep on with the fantastic chapters. I can't wait to read more.
Hugs from Norway.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:37 AM · On: Acquiesce
The mystery behind him gets me all wrapped up in the story. Was he truly abused and I still think the good Dr. knows more than he lets on. Marcus taking care of Edward is just alittle suspicious. I love the building feelings these two are experincing though.
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