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Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 01:20 PM · On: A Piece of Beautiful

OH!  I just translated that lat line on Google translator and it just about made me cry!

I love your fic.  It's fantastic.  How often do you update?



Author's Response:

I'll be updating again next week, hun. Until school starts again, I update biweekly. Once school starts in the latter part of Aug, I'll go back to weekly updates.

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Reveal

What a wonderful chapter! Alice, is just awesome! Can't wait for more...

Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Reveal

loved this chapter!!!! can't wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Reveal

when I read the chapter title I thought one of two things were going to happen. 1) bella would confess her love or 2) Edward would be revealed to the world... or just carlisle. But I don't think we are near option 2 yet so i'm glad she confessed her feelings. And I can't believe you left us there! what will Edward do? GAH!

just gotta note- EVERY time there is a mention of lancelot, a part of my heart throbs. god I love that thing. 

and I hope bella goes to community college- I agree with Alice. If she postpones it now, she runs a greater risk of never going. Not that I think Bella never will, but Edward's recovery is going to take years, undoubtedly, and I have a feeling Bella will push aside her education for his sake.

can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:58 PM · On: The Plan

Yes, definitely ready to learn more.  He seems way too broken to fix quickly.

Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:50 PM · On: A Slight Progression

I love the interaction between these two.  He's saying so much without uttering words (ok,just a few) and she's showing him it's ok to trust.

Very good so far.  Off to read another.

Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Don't Go

Ooooo.  I LOVE the way this is beginning.  It's all very dark and mysterious.  He really seems to be afraid, but protective of her all the same.  I wonder what/who is haunting him.

Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Hide and Seek

creepy!  I like it already.

Reviewer: ravendahlia (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Reveal

Oh wow ! That was really beautiful. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for that story. It has soul.

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Reveal

Clever idea, Alice!

Oh and Edward's got his answers sort of, though Bella's going to be blushing fire engine red right now hehe :)

Reviewer: Martimolius (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 12:10 AM · On: Reveal

ooooooooooooooh, can't wait t'ill the next chapter!

Reviewer: abw2442 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Reveal

i freakin love this story so much!!!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Reveal

loved it!!!!!!!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Reveal

Alice's local college idea is great. I think it's AWESOME of her to step up to the plate and brainstorm for Bella, even when she has just heard that Bella is going to do something so dramatically against what Alice would wish for.

Yes, telling Charlie will be an adventure.  But Alice's arguments are good ones!

I am both surprised and not that Bella spoke her heart out loud.  I was NOT surprised that, having done so, she was overheard.  lol  Of course.

Looking forward to the following convo!

 

Reviewer: Cullenist (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Reveal

Im so excited about this story :P! its the higlight of my summer!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Reveal

*cries happy tears* THIS WAS FABULOUSLY, FANTASTICALLY, KICKASS, SPELLBINDINGLY WRITTEN. I am just am in awe of this chapter. So much was revealed and I couldn't be happier to see that now Edward knows how Bella feels. Judging by Edward's beautiful portugese earlier...he feels the same way. I am so excited as to what this means to them. I will anxiously await the next chapter.

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Reveal

HOLY SCHNIKEYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EPIC EPIC CHAPTER!!  Bella must poo her pants when she sees him looking at her! good lord, I feel for her - how dreadful!!  i'd be praying that the earth swallowed me, or satan came for me, or jebus carried me home!! lol....and what is Edward gonna do? cry? shriek? twitch? jump her bones?? confess his own amour???  this is one EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVIL cliffie you're leaving us with, sista!!!!

Um...you're not gonna make us wait 2 weeks now, are you???????????

I'm sorta twitchy about Bella not going to college - I'm glad Alice figured stuff out for her.  I get why she'd want to postpone - but what if Edward takes 4 years to become acclimated?  what if he never gets there? she won't have Alice as an alibi when she's away in Seattle, either - somebody's gonna figure stuff out, ya know? 

I was also thinking about Stockholm Syndrome.  Bella is obviously not his captor, but it's natural for Edward to fall for her, considering how she's sorta rescuing him and all.  From Bella's perspective, when he gets out of the hospital and goes mainstream, I wonder if she'd feel like she had to let him date other people to make sure it was really her he wanted, and that he wasn't with her just because she rescued him??  If I were Bella, I think that's how I'd feel - like I had to let him play the field a bit so he felt like he really chose me, AND so I wouldn't worry that later, he'd want to!  BTW, has she slipped that boy the tongue yet?? lol ;)

Thanks for the update! I hope your bum is feeling better - is the tailbone mended yet??? :)  Make sure you sit on a fluffy pillow tomorrow when you send us the next update. (hehe)

:)

Reviewer: MCMANN (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Hide and Seek

I relly like this story.  The writing is elexint but it's a little to creepy for me.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Reveal

You have a wonderful way describing their growing relationship. If Bella only understood Edward's beautiful words she wouldn't be so afraid admitting her love.I hope there will be enough time for these two before everything gets into the open and I fear the concert and Mike are going to be veeery embarrassing, because Emmet doesn't know when he better keeps his mouth shut and Rosalie comes over as rather bitchy-bossy. I hope she doesn't have to fight Mike off too hard. Alice on the other hand is really the bestest of friends.

Your new banner is amazing!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Reveal

Bella finally expressed her love for Edward. Only she thought he was sound asleep.  He was when she arrived, but her presence and voice awoke him.  He heard everything she said and it surprised him to say the least.  Of course, earlier in the day he expressed those same feelings quite eloquently.  Bella spending the day with Alice was fun.  A little pampering and shopping.  Bella announcement of waiting to attend college surprised and disappointed Alice.  It was amazing that she came up with a plan that would work.  Financial reasons to attend a local community college rather than the attend the university in Seattle.  Where Bella could see Edward every day.  Especially if she took online classes.  Edward has made such progress from the boy she met in the basement bathroom.  Definitely looking forward to the next chapter to get Edward's feelings and thoughts on her declaration.  Unbelief, shock, happiness, I would guess among others.

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Reveal

What a fantastic chapter! I'm all goose pimply!

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 03:59 AM · On: Reveal

God I love this story so much. It's imbedded in my psyche! I know that sounds crazy...yeah, I'm nuts alright. But you do that, you write that good. The two weeks between chapters is killing me, but I'll wait...what else can I do? Hurry. BTW, Alice is a genious! Hope Charlie goes along with their plan.

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Hide and Seek

love it

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Reveal

Excellant. Time for Bella to get him some help!

Reviewer: fruitypebbles (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Reveal

I loved this chapter. I hope Edward's reaction is a good one.

 

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