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Reviewer: Longingtobe (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 Alice's Vision
This is a great story... Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm happy you like it and are going to stick around. And for reviewing, I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: Ninapolitan (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 2 Resolution
Hmmm, you have me very interested. I hate not being able to figure out how things are going to go and you've stumped me!
I'm curious to see what's going to happen with Edward.
Author's Response: I hope that's a "hate not being able to figure out" in a good way?? I'm glad I have you stumped. And I hope you are curious enough to stick with it and keep reading :) Again, thanks for your review.
Reviewer: Ninapolitan (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 Alice's Vision
I saw your thread in Shameless Plugs and I was intrigued. I like the first chapter so far. I'm eager to see what's going on :)
Author's Response: LOL I know I'm shamelss for soing that, but oh well....it worked as you found my story. Glad you like the story so far. And thanks for taking time to review, I really do appreciate it.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Next three chapters are with my Beta just waiting approval. I hope you continue liking the story :)
Reviewer: Rosebud101 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
I love your story. up date soon, really really soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I really do appreciate it. Next two chapters are with my Beta right now.
Reviewer: jasperhalelover (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Next two chapters have been written and are in the hands of my beta. As soon as I have them back I will send them for validation.
Thanks for the review. I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: The Vampire Girl (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
love this story cant wait for you to put up next chap yay
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying this :) and also for takign time out to review. It's much appreciated.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
This has to be the most gut-wrenching "Edward's POV of him leaving Bella" I've ever read. And that's saying something. Dear Woman. Please continue with the EPOV. He demands to be heard! And by God, we need him!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your review. I agree with you 100% !! I have always been wary of writing EPOV as I don't think anyone can come close to doing him right and making him sound "right". I know I failed but this was the best I could do. He is definitely by far the hardestr for me to write.....I hope you enjoy the next chapter just as much. As soon as I get it back from my Beta this weekend I will post it.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
I hate to see Edward hurt, then there are times when I wished I could take a 2 X 4 and beat the living shit out of his dumbass. Terrible...yes I know, but that is just how I feel. I also hate to see Esme cry. Cant wait for more.
Author's Response: I completely agree with you on that one.
Thanks for reviewing :) I appreciate it.
Reviewer: shasta (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
I love the alternative to Edward leaving! Please keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you are liking it so far. And thank you so much for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
Aww Alice consoling him was so sweet. :( Poor Edward!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review I appreciate it. And yeah I am glad Edward has Alice looking out for him, in more ways than one.
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
This is really good. I can't wait to read more. Hope you get lots of reviews.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you are liking. The next chapter should be up in a few days.
Thanks for taking time out to review. I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
more please
Author's Response: Working on it. Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
I may have already reviewed this, but I read it again because I loved it.
AAACK!! TOO SHORT, TOO SHORT!!! LOL! I must say, I am in awe of you being able to put the Twilight-verse on hold while you refocused on your studies. Kudos on maintaining your grades and returning to the mind-warp with us!
Loved hearing this from Edward's perspective.
Author's Response: Then I hope you will enjoy the next chapter too :)
It's more of Edwards POV and much longer than this one. Just waiting on my Beta getting it back to me so I can post it.
Thank you so much for reviewing, I love it :)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
hmm...I was hoping we would learn a little more about what brought him back to her. I have a feeling though that tracking Victoria went better in your story than in New Moon.
Author's Response: Be patient with me, one more chapter on Edward and then we will find out what brought him back.
Will you hate me if tracking her was worse? Or love me if it went better? Hmm...
Thanks again for always taking the time to review. I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
I'm so glad to have Edward point of view in this story!!! I've been dying for it!!!! And i have wracked my brains trying to figure out what happened to Bella and I just CANNOT figure it out!!! who attacked her? why does she think it was edward?? i will wait patiently to find out....
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying Edwardas POV. The next chapter is also in his POV and I'm just waiting on the Beta approving it so hopefully it will be up in the next few days.
Thanks for sticking around duriing my lengthy absence and for taking time to review. As always that I really do appreciate.
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
Ohh...I like this story. Really, really like it.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it :)
Thanks for taking time out to review, I really do appreciate it.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
Still love the story! i am scared to know where its gonna go and although I do love multiple points of view I loved to know wherethe story was going to go. I have to thoughts your slighly veering off of the original or you have a whole new twisted idea and thats exciting cause I have no clue! Post Again as soon and as often as you can!
Author's Response: Glad you still like the story. I am still following my plot line, but this is kinda where my story moved from New Moon into AU. Edwards has to fall, and fall far for my story to work. He didn't hunt Victoria, he fell apart... we learn about his demise and see the consequences of what his actions did to his family and then we can focus on the violent deaths that happened in Forks. Does that make a wee bit more sense? I didn't want to give anything away but at the same time, didn't want you to be confused either.
Reviewer: cullenized (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
waah. this is too much! i need to know who tried to hurt bella! and why she thinks its edward!!! pls update soon! waaahh. :P
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Next chapter should be up in a few days but it won't answer your questions I'm afraid. You will need to hang around for another couple of chapters to get that.
<passes hankie>
Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 7 Farewells
Yay! I'm glad you haven't given up the story. Thanks for the update - eagerly awaiting the next two chapters being posted.
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking around :) I appreciate it.
Reviewer: claw (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
Pretty good so far. Eagerly awaiting more.
Author's Response: Glad you are liking it so far. Next two chapters should be posted by the weeks end. I hope you stick around.
Reviewer: kevsam (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
I can't believe I've missed this. It was awesome. And I find the idea of a "wild" Edward as unique. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm glad you like it so far. Next two chapters are with my Beta and should be up by the weeks end.
Reviewer: moonsiren (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
can't wait to see Edward's reaction! i'm dying for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Next two chapters are with my beta right now and should be posted by the end of the week.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
Please oh please update soon!
I'll give you a nice naked Edward for christmas if you do!
Author's Response: I'm afraid I missed the naked Edward :(
But next two (yes that's two) chapters are with my beta and should be posted by the end of the week.
Reviewer: Jennifersardas (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
this is an amazing story i can not wait for the next update! more please
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I'm working on the next couple of chapters right now. I am a wee bit slow updating this time as finals kind of snuck up on me.
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