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Reviewer: TopazOynx (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
WOW that was intense. The fight between Bella and Edward...shit! I am glad it worked itself into your chapter. As much as Bellas words hurt edward she needed to say them and he needed to hear them and see how much he had hurt her when he left. Great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! I completely agree, without this confrontation, I don't think edward would ever have known how badly Bella was affected by his leaving, nor would he face his congtrol issues.
Once the dust settles I hope they have the talk they need to have so they can move forward whether it be together or apart.
Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
Amazing!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate you taking the time to review.
Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
Just found this story. I like it, I really liked this chapter.
Author's Response: Hiya! I'm so glad you found my story and decided to give it a chance. I'm happy that you seem to like it so far, I hope you stick around :)
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
I love that Bella is an official Cullen, crest and all. Poor Edward, he over reacted and fought with Bella. Great update!
Author's Response: Yeah Bella was harsh on him but it was for his own good. If she hadn't then he would never have to face his control issues. Nor would either of them realize that Bella is still incredibly angry with him.
Hopefully now they will have an honest conversation.
Thanks for the review, I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: blanca1 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
I just reread this chapter again...OME I cant wait...please please continue...I feel like I have been transported...I love you work, and as I lust after a fictional man in Edward LOL I so look forward to all of your next writings...
Author's Response: Thanks you so much for this review :) I'm glad you have enjoyed the story so far and I hope you will stick around and keep reading (and reviewing too!! lol)
I will try to not keep you waiting for very long before I update
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
Strangley I feel that Edward needed to hear those things from Bella
Yes werewolves are dangerous but still Edward needs to realise that extent of emotional pain he caused Bella when he left and the issues they need to discuss before anyone can move forward
I don't normally like Jake but you wrote him as a concerned friend (which is what he SHOULD ALWAYS BE A FRIEND!)...sorry mid rant there
the pendant was a lovely gift and I can feel the turmoil Bella is feeling with Edward...she can feel the pull but i think in the back of her mind she knows that she needs to sort herself out and then their issues out before going back with edward
Author's Response: You have just hit the proverbial nail on the head (And I'm with you on the whole Jacob/friend thing) as hard as it weas to go through, the confrontation had to be done this way; Bella had to realize she was angry with Edward and that those feelings woudln't go away until she dealt with them. And Edward, he also has some resentment towards Bella, but at the same time he had to realise he has control issues.
Once the dust settles hopefully they will be able to talk rationally and work things through.
Thank you so much for reviewing, I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: blanca1 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 12 Arrangements
This is great!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) glad to know you are strill enjoying this :)
Reviewer: Noir (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
Wow! Intense! I was bracing for a fight to start between Edward and Jacob. In all of this I think my heart goes out to Carlisle and Esme the most as they stand back and watch their children have to go through this. Sometimes that's the hardest part of parenting, the standing back and letting the kids learn their life lessons for themselves.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate it. And I think you have peeked at my notes for the next chapter...
I hope you continue to enjoy this story.
Reviewer: blanca1 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 11 Friends
You are the best...please keep up the great works...OME oh my Edwards....
Author's Response: YOu make me smile with your reviews :) I'm glad you are still enjoying it, and you are almost caught up to everyone else. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Reviewer: blanca1 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 8 Tenebrosity
I love it...and my cravings for the next chapters is overtaking me.....MORE MORE MORE...
Author's Response: hehe I'll try not to make you wait too long.
Thanks for taking the time to review, I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
This was tragic!
Author's Response: I know. But so necessary. Now Edward realizes that Bella is still angry with him and he has control issues. Once the dust settles and both think over things hopefully they will actually sit down and talk things through.
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 12 Arrangements
So is Charlie alive and being held prisoner, for lack of a better word by Victoria?
Author's Response: He might be... sorry that I can't tell you that. I had intended to have this question answered in this chapter, but then the argument kind of took over, and so Charlie was set aside. You will find out in two more chapters though, I hope you stick around for it.
Thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
It was the perfect length.
I really felt the anger and frustration - Bella needed to speak those words to heal.
Edward needed to hear (and feel) what his leaving had done.
It is nice that Alice recognizes how Bella has changed and grown into a woman...now Eddie needs to follow suit. Nicely written!
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why this argument had to happen! I'm so happy about that! And thanks too for taking the time to review, I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
Ugh! I'm in agony with the anger and the angst! I really loved the part about her childhood and the whole bit with the credit cards-but can they kiss and make up already!!?
Author's Response: UU oo I hope you won't hate me when they don't? There is way too much still unresolved for them to just kiss and make up right now. But perhaps there is hope for them in the future.
Thanks for taking the time to review, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: I_love_Edward_Jacob (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
I love it! Awesome story, I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review, I do appreciate it. I'm glad you like the story so far. I hope you continue to read and review.
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
Pffft. Eddouche was to blame for it himself!
Author's Response: yes he was! let's see what he does with the knowledge that Bella is still angry with him, but is mature enough now to stick up for herself.
Reviewer: KitsunexBella (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
Great chapter! I loved it!
Can't wait to find out what's up with Charlie!
Author's Response: Thanks! and for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 2 Resolution
Mmmmm, forceful Carlisle, strangely I like it!
Author's Response: Welcome to my story :) I hope you continue to like it. And thanks for taking the time to review. I appreciate that.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
That was a fight alright! Sometimes I wish Edward would get his head out of his A@@ and quit being so overprotective. Too much to ask though. Loved the chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I'm glad you liked it. And as always, thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
My gosh the two of them just love to beat eachother up. I was about to kill Alice for interupting every time that they could have almost kissed. :P
I hope that they can make up and things get better for BElla
Author's Response: Yeah they keep skirting the main issues but this time it all fell down; she now realises that she is angry with Edward, and Edward needed to realise that he is a little too controlling, hopefully now they can really talk.
Reviewer: lexi loo (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 12 Arrangements
omg i thin thats cool but kinda sad.but u shuld stil write them bc i wuld read them.:D
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: lexi loo (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 12 Arrangements
omg i thin thats cool but kinda sad.but u shuld stil write them bc i wuld read them.:D
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you still like it, even if it's a wee bit sad. Thanks for taking the time to review, I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
As much as I adore Edward, I would have slapped him too.. That's what he gets for being an over protective bossy butt.. I am loving this story, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Yeah me too, and I LOVE Edward. But it had to be done, Bella had to realise she was still angry with him for leaving her before. And he had to realise that he is too controlling, now once the dust settles, they can talk things through.
Reviewer: bronzeandgold (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
More please - write faster!
Author's Response: LOL I wished I could! But real life keeps on coming up!! But thanks for taking the time to review, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: bigred (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 13 Crest
ahhh amazing angst how i love it so haha, awsome chapter love, and if my opinion is ne thing to go by i think u write carlise perfectly
xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, I do appreciate it and your opinion definitely counts!
I'm glad that you are enjoying this story so far.
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