Well, so, I just found this story and have read everything in the last day and a half.  Oh. My.  and Holy. Hell.

As I'm dealing with my tears and breaking heart I'm trying to keep it together enough to tell you that this is an AMAZING story.  Really well thought out and truly interesting plot lines.  I like the way you've filled in so many of SM's "blank spaces" and the way you have the relationships unfolding.  Really brilliant.  Now then, I can't wait to see what you've REALLY done with Charlie and I can't wait for you to update.  Soon?  Please???

Author's Response:

Sorry that it took me so long to respond.  I'm not usually like this.  Real life just hit me over the head with a hammer.  I have finals this week then school is out for two months so I will be updating fairly quickly after this.

Thanks for taking the time to review, I do appreciate it.  I hope you stick around and continue reading.  Thanks for the great review.  I'm glad you have enjoyed the story so far.  I'm even glad that you cried, because it means that you were abel to connect to the plot line.

Thanks so much for such nice words.  I promise if you stick around and review again I won't take as long to respond.

OMG!  Edward makes me mad, but this is sooooo sweet!  AwWWWW!!

My God lady!  I couldn't stop crying for the last two chapters!  I'm greatful I didn't read those at work! :)  The writing is great!  Silent tears kept running down my face, by the time I stopped another would come and it would start all over again.  A lot of people don't like fluff but after that you got to put a little in there.  My nose is all stuffed up now! :(

Can't not wait for more!  I'm hooked.  Happy writing!

Author's Response:

Sorry that it took me so long to respond.  I'm not usually like this.  Real life just hit me over the head with a hammer.  I have finals this week then school is out for two months so I will be updating fairly quickly after this.

Thanks for taking the time to review, I do appreciate it.  I hope you stick around and continue reading.  Thanks too for such a fantastic review, I am so glad that you have been enjoying the story so far.  You won't need your hankies for a wee while I don't think... but don't quote me on that.

 

Hi!  I just read your story again!  It is amazing what you can miss the first time around especially when you're excited to see what happens next. 

Hope the finals are going well.  It has been a long time since I was in your shoes.  I didn't have many distractions back then (- no hubby, no kids, no Twilight!!!)  Boy, I would be in trouble today.  You know I can barely get my domestic chores done!  Anyway, hope all is going well.  I'll be watching for the next chapter!

: )

Author's Response:

Aww thank you :)  I'm glad you liked it enough to reread it.

Finals are done!  Thank goodness!  So no school for two weeks til the summer semester and the fun starts all over again. 

I'm spending time this week, working of course, then cleaning house and spending time with my hubby, but I will hopefully have the next chapter finished by the weekend.

Thanks again for sticking around :)

Donna

Lol...second try on the review. Love the story! It's plot is unique and in fanfiction that is really saying something. This chapter really made me cry, I imagine that it was quite difficult to write. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

LOL sorry!  Didn't mean you had to leave another review :) I just didn't want you to think I wasn't going to respond to you.

I am happy to know you like the story and find it unique.  Yes this was a hard chapter to write, my hubby thought I'd lost it as I was crying writing it.

I hope you continue to read and enjoy my story. 

Next chapter will be up shortly.  I got lost in my finals for the semester but I will have time come this weekend to take care of the next chapter.

Thanks again for reviewing, I do appreciate it.

Author's Response:

Hi,

If you wrote anything, then it didn't come through.  I hope you have enjoyed this story so far and continue to read and enjoy it.  Thanks for trying to review it's appreciated.

And if there was a question in here that you needed to know, feel free to contact me and I will try to answer you as best I can.

 

Ohmygosh. You made me cry. Not even kidding. That chapter...was really sad. Poor Bella. I'm so glad she's got Jazz and Edward there for her. Great job! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

LOL I'd say I'm sorry for making you cry but then I would be lying.  Because it means that you connected to the characters and the emotions that I was trying to convey in the chapter.

I'm glad you enjoyed it  and thank you so much for reviewing, I do appreciate it.

I actually found myself sobbing!  You write so well. I can't contain myself I can't wait to see what else you come up with for this story!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'd say I'm sorry that you got upset but I'd be lying.  I'm happy to know that you connected to the emotions in the chapter.  I hope you do continue to read and enjoy this story.

I have one more final to get through tomorrow and then I can concentrate on this for a few weeks.

Thanks again for all your reviews, you made me smile :)

Wow - I wanted to jump into the story and slap Edward myself. I love your writing! p.s. longer chapters are the bomb!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I am so happy that you are still enjoying this tale.

And yes Edward was out of line.  Bella was a little too but she had to say what she did.  She needed to clear the air, and if she hadn't gotten so mad, then I don't think she would ever have been so honest.  I hope you like what happens next.

Thanks again for reviewing, I luv ya for it!

oh my god this was so good, i am crying my eyes out. will there be more chapters? please let me know it is so good.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I am glad you found and like my story :)  There will definitely be more chapters.  I usually update every wekkend, but I have finals this week so might be one more week before the next chapter is up.

I hope you stick around and read and enjoy this story.

Thanks for taking the time to review, I do appreciate it.

Aw, I actually found myself getting teary eyed reading some of that. I think you write Edward very well!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  The next few chapters are all iin his POV and document his demise.  I hope you continue to read.

Thanks too for reviewing, it's appreciated.

Okay, so I finally got all caught up.  You have me in tears now.  I went from crying to laughing, to angry, to giddy and back to crying.  It is truely a touching story.  Thank you so much for sharing that with us.

 

Jennifer

Author's Response:

Wow, you must have sat down and ploughed through the whole thing eh?  I am so glad you chose to read my story and that you like it.  I'm happy to see that you were able to connect to all the emotions I tried to convey in the story so far.

I do hope you stick around and continue to read and enjoy this story.

Thanks for taking the time to review, I do appreciate it.

Donna

Sorry about my last review, I can get too emotional sometimes.  I loved the chapter, just didn't like what the characters did.  I wanted them to kiss already :) not argue!

This was nice.  I'm glad everyone talked and I like Jacob in this one.  He realy is a good friend for Bella.  I'm glad that Edward saved Seth and the village, now the wolves and the Cullens can be pals.

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you weren't put off by the argument in the chapter and you stuck around.

Thanks too, for reviewing, it's always appreciated.