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Reviewer: raquelnjake (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
OMG, this chapter has me wondering so much. Was Bella hallucinating.
Author's Response: Oooh I have a new reader! Keep reading!!! I hope you enjoy it!
Thanks for reviewing, it's appreciated.
Reviewer: ratqueen (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
I knew it, I knew it! Why did the Cullens not expect it? Ofcourse they also did not figure out on their own that Bella should drink blood in BD . . .
Author's Response: Exactly! Hope the fact it was kinda obvious to you won't stop you from continuing to read and enjoy this story. Thanks for reviewing, I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
Love the story, but had to go back chapters to remember what was going on! Please update sooner!
Author's Response: Sorry about that, but I am back on track and will be updating regularly again.
Thanks for sticking around. I hope you continue to read and enjoy this story.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
WOw! Charlie must be strong to even remember his daughter.
Author's Response: Yeah I guess you shouldn't underestimate a fathers love. Besides, Victoria will have been telling him her plans, assuming he would be happy to go along.
Thanks for reviewing, I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: StephanieDeShaw (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
Wow! Update soon please
Author's Response: I'm working on it. Thanks very much for your review, I do appreciate it. I hope you continue to read and enjoy this story.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
I love it. I feel so bad for Charlie. Will he be opposed to Bella turning into Vampire now that he knows what it is like to be one? Will Charlie now spend eternity alone as well? He can't be friends with Billy anymore, he can't fish because they would all swim away. He has super hearing. So he would hear every time Bella and Edward are intimate. At first it sounds wonderul because he wouldn't have to lose Bella but then when you delve deeper it has so many ramifications for them. This story is so wonderful. I can't wait to read more!!!!
Author's Response: You have a lot of good questions here. I'm sorry that I can't answer them for you right now as that would spoil some things coming up. Let's just hope Charlie survives the next chapter first. Can you imagine how awful it would be if Edward had to destroy Charlie to save Bella? Yikes!
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
I knew that when there was no body that Charlie would probably be a vampire. Poor Charlie, poor Bella. I can't wait for Victoria to get a beat down!
Author's Response: Lol congrats for guessing correctly! I hope the next chapter doesn't dissapoint you. I hope you continue reading and enjoying this story.
Reviewer: amybo15 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
I thought charlie was turned! Nice little twist. Glad you are updating regularly again. I'm looking forward to the fight!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hadn't read that before and I knew right fromt he get go I wanted him to be changed by Victoria.
I hope the next chapter doesn't dissapoint.
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
Excellent chapter - so sad about Charlie but good to know he is fighting it. Looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response: Woohoo! You caught up to everyone else! I hope you continue to read and enjoy the story.
And yeah, lets hope Charlie survuves the next chapter.
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh love it but keep writing cant stand the tension!!!!!!!!!
wtm
Author's Response: LOl I'm glad that you like it. I hope the next chapter doesn't dissapoint.
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
FUUUUUCCCKKKK!!!!!
Author's Response: Emm that's a compliment right?? LOL Thanks (I think). I hope you continue to feel soo.. strongly about the chapters :)
Reviewer: prncskymmie (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
LOVE IT!!! And I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you are enjoying this still.
I hope you continue to do so and I don't dissapoint.
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 12 Arrangements
This chapter should have had a kleenes alert at the beginning - even with the tears it was very good.
Author's Response: Woops! Sorry. But emm, if you are reading my responses, you might want to keep them close by for Chapter 15. Just in case.
Thanks for always reviewing. I love reading your reactions as you progress :)
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 11 Friends
Ah how sweet - nice way to reconnect with each other,
Author's Response: Thanks :) I liked this chapter too :)
I'm excited to see that you are still reading! I hope you continue to do so.
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
This is getting so GOOD.
I am so into this.
I wish it was a book and I could just turn the page.
Author's Response: Aww thank you very much. Very nice thing to say.
I'm so glad you are enjoying this tale, I hope you contonue to do so.
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 10 Reunion
Love the part about the voices - have not heard that before - good writing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I'm glad you are still enjoying this story :)
Keep on keeping on :)
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 9 Resurrection
Edward - always the impatient one.
Author's Response: Yes he is.... stupid boy/man/child ... lol
Keep reading.
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
Excellent writing - love it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue to read and enjoy this story. I'd love to hear what you think of some of the other chapters that are posted.
Happy Reading And thanks for chosing my story!
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
Oh poor Charlie. Bella's not going to like this at all. At least Charlie still has a head on his shoulders, even if he is slightly distracted by Bella's blood at times. That's good! And it seems he has forgiven Edward for leaving, knowing that he's back for good now. I really hope this ends well for Charlie, that he's not killed in the process. Everyone lives except Vicotria and her gang, minus Charlie, of course. That way Charlie can live with the Cullens, and soon with Bella. Oh, and how is Jake going to react seeing Charlie like this, and Charlie not knowing that it's Jake as a wolf, too? Hmm.. I can't wait to find out! :D
Bring on the action! And PLEASE update SOON!!!!! :D
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Author's Response: Alot of interesting questions in this. Sorry that I can't answer them though. Not sure Cahrlie has forgiven Edward anything. And he hasn't even touched on the fact that he (Edward) had no right to date his daughter as a vamp! Right now Charlie is all about saving his daughter and he will use anything and everything to do so.
Will be interesting to see how the wolves react to Charlie.
Thanks for reviewing, as always yoru reviews make me smile. I hope the next chapter doesn't dissapoint.
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 3 Return To Forks
Very interesting twist - this is really good.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) glad you are still liking the story. I hope the next chapter doesn't dissapoint.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
I've been thinking all along with no body that this might be Charlie's fate. Damn that Victoria! She is such a bitch! Vampire or no, there's no reason for this type of behavior. James didn't love her, he was just using her. No need for vengeance here.
I'm worried that Bella will get hurt when the fighting starts. I'm also worried that Edward will be forced to destroy Charlie. I wouldn't want Edward to have to do that or for Bella to have to watch it happen. Oh, the angst!
Author's Response: Yes I agree very angsty. Can you imagine how bad it would be if Edward was forced to destroy Charlie? Hey! Isn't that the title of my story?? Yikes!
Let's hope he survives the next chapter.
Thanks for reviewing, I do apprecaite it.
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
Oh Charlie! Please don't eat your daughter! But with everyone dead and Charlie a vamp, it will work out nicely for Bella to change. PTL.
I liked the imagery of Bella with her arms and legs wrapped around Edward. This wasa nice chapter. I tried to read it last night when i first got the alert, but then it was blank, and I thought - she couldn't be updating that fast anyway. But low and behold... YOU DID IT!
CHARLLLLLLLLLLLLIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Vicotria's pretty hot. I can't blame him.
Author's Response: LOL even your reviews crack me up! I hope Charlie survives the fight cos it would be awful for Edward, or Jake, or anyone to have to kill him to save Bella, and you knwo they would. But how bad would that be? Hey! Isn't the title of my tale How Bad Could It Get? Hmmm.... I'd say not much worse than that.
Besides, even *if* Charlie survives, do you think that would change Edwards mind about changing Bella? Or do you think it just might throw an iron in the works?
And yeah, I kinda like the imagery of limpet Bella myself. Of course it should be limpet Lusty instead ... <sigh> .
And I think Charlie just used Victoria to ... em ... pass away the time ;p
As always, thanks for reviewing, I love ya for it! Now update already! I don't want to wait til Thursday!
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
A very interesting and exciting update. Sad how it happened but glad that Charlie would be there for Bella when she's also changed, and they wouldn't lose each other. That Victoria is evil and bitter to do such a thing - to try to manipulate a father, by turning him, to kill his own daughter.. Eager to read the fight scene. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you seem to be still liking the story. And yes, Victoria is evil. Plain evil. This is just the twisted kind of thing I can see her doing; setting a father against a daughter. I'm glad that so far, Charlie is able to figtht his baser instincts and try to protect Bella, the only way he can.
I hope the next chapter doesn't dissapoint.
Reviewer: ladee_sarah (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
Very nice twist with Charlie, very very original. That's about all the semi-original thought I have :)
Author's Response: Lol that's ok. Just knowing you are reading and enjoying this still means a lot. I'm glad you liked the Charlie twist.
Reviewer: Mav (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Charlie
I had a hunch when they couldn't find Charlie's body... but his deliberately sending his thoughts to Edward is absolutely what I can see him doing. I'm dying to see what happens next... keep on updating!
Author's Response: Yeah, shows you just how deep his love for Bella is. Let's hope he survives the next chapter.
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