loved your story...i liked the characters alot except for bella...i thought shw was a bitch....aaron is so loveable and how jake should have been instead nof what it was/....loved edward with jane

I have enjoyed reading this story so much. I love what you have done with the original story and adore how you have made it your own. Jane is a likeable and easy to relate to character. She fits in to the world of Twilight wonderfully, not taking anything away from it but still making it her own. The plot is strong and you can understand how she manages to win Edward's heart all on her own without deminishing Edward and Bella's love. I like how you have written the original characters and love the characters you have introduced, especially Aaron. The story was exciting, romantic and believable. All the drama was awesome too! I will want to read this again soon, I just know it. Thank you for writing it!

Well, It's a bit harebrained and far-fetched but even though it has certain cracks and flaws, it is reasonably good and entertaining. If you gave the story more time, it would be a plus - but the completed status is far far far bigger plus!

Btw, how much is your depiction of American schools accurate? This and similar stories definitely throw a different light on Moore's "Bowling for Columbine". If I was Edward, I would slaughter a half of that school and considered it a good deed! ...I would just have to find a way of doing in an inconspicuous way...

Author's Response:

I'm sure it happens somewhere; however, it was nothing like that when I was in school. There are good apples and bad apples everywhere, you just have to ignore the rotten ones;) Thanks for reading.

Bella is such a Bitch!!!!

This was a wonderful story.  I enjoyed reading every word! The plot was great and the characters were lovable. 

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it:)

Excelleny Story!  I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

aww it's over, but gee it's been a great read. I'm choosing to believe that Jane's dad wrote a few things in that novel that make it pretty clear he was aware of more than any of them realised ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

Hi,

I just finished reading your story up until here and I LOVE IT!!!

it's exciting, refreshing... it's beautiful... I love Jane and how strong she is. I love how much Bella wants Jane in her life, even if it means being as a vampire. I love Edward and how much he loves her.

I simply love the story and I can't wait for the next chapter(S!!!)

Inge

whoa. ok. Did NOT see the bullet coming nor the target at this point. It's a good thing I just trimmed my fingernails, otherwise I'd be wearing them down waiting to see how Jane's transformation & Bella's dealings go next :S

This story was well written, but I am disappointed. I had never been one who like love stories until I read the twilight saga. What makes twilight such a compelling story is the pure and true love shared between Bella and Edward. I kept hoping in this story they would reunite because he would love Bella 20 years later as much as he had when she was a teenager. He would have never fallen in love with anyone else. I'm so disappointed.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment.  Sorry to disappoint.  What can I say?  I had a thought — and idea and put it down on paper.  Let me say this:  Part of my reasoning for not putting him with Bella is thanks in large part to the movie Titantic.  "What?!" you must be thinking.  I must be one in a trillion who did not particularly care for the movie.  I thought it was crazy how Rose thought of what's-his-face...Jack...near the end.  A person she only spent a few traumatic days with is who she thought of as she was dying, instead of her husband who she built a life with.  What kind of reasoning...what?  Oh, she didn't die at the end?  Huh...well anyway, Bella has built a life with her husband who just so happens to be a great guy.  Wouldn't you be disappointed if she abandonded him after eighteen years of marriage to run off with someone who she spent six traumatic months with?  Someone who broke her heart?  Sure, we would probably leave our husbands for Edward, but not Bella;)

I love this story :]

Author's Response:

Thank you, my loyal reader;)

so cute! omg! u should'vemade this longer at the end! pressured eddie boy to answer the question.. "when my heart stops beating, then what?" oh god what i would've given just to hear his answer and her reaction!

Author's Response:

Hmm...you're really going to have to read the next chapter;) 

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter! =)

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  It'll be a few weeks. Sorry:(