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Reviewer: Shazarabbit (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 14
I was actually hesitant of this at first, based on the summary it seemed unusual. But I am really glad i did. This is one of the few pieces ive seen where the characters are real. I could see myself reacting as Bella did, everything.
Im thinking that Bella and Edward will end up getting their marriage involuntarily annulled. But good will come out of it, he will court her, propose and they will get a happy wedding album! (Hopefully a honeymoon baby)
Update soon.
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 14
nooo...they can't do that!!
i want Bella to get pregnant!! more!!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 14
This is pure torture.... Can't wait for more though!!!!
Reviewer: tone (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 14
Oh no! Ohnoohnoohnoohno!
Mike's clearly a psycho how the hell did he and Bella get such a good match?
I hope this works out ok.
Reviewer: such a tween (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 14
I was totally not expecting this! I'm going to hang in there with the hope that all will be well in the end, since this is Bella and Edward and they are destined to be together.
Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 14
NONONONONO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this can't happen!!!!! Please it's Christmas - have mercy!!!!
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 14
OMG! Update soon. Rocking chapter and a total twist I wasn't expecting!
Reviewer: VampireFeatures (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 14
i nearly had a panic attack when i suddenly realsied "THERE ARE... NO... MORE... CHAPTERS"
please please please post the next one soon, i'm hooked!
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 14
Holy Crow! I didn't know that their marriages could be revoked! How awful! Wow, what a fiercely controlling society! don't leave us all hanging!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 14
Mike is a rat! Bella and Edward are perfect together.
Reviewer: yagalinus0420 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 14
What a dirty little fucker!! I pray to god they get through this......and Mikey boy pays for what he did!! Sorry ass dick!! Please update again soon.....I so need more and can't wait to see where this goes!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 14
That would be horrible. THey have really grown to rely on eachother now. They need to be strong and show a united front. Maybe Bella needs to come out and admit to being a Hopeless too!!!
Reviewer: DarkenNightLife (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 14
NOOOOOOO!! this is why i didnt like mike, i didnt like him is the whole saga especialy new moon. the nerv. well still like it in my fav 5 chapters. hope hopeless gets updated soon.
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 14
i know it is fiction but i don't think my heart can take it if they are separated...i hope they have an hea
Reviewer: if only (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 14
Oh, that vile Newton.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Avaanne (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 14
Oh wow that was so unexpected. I loved it.
Reviewer: aly1390 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 14
I'm going to castrate Mike Newton's creepy, self-assured, delusional self. I want him to look like a fool when this turns around and bites his ass. Scores be damned, if anybody could see the way that Bella and Edward are compatible with eachother then, it wouldn't be an issue, please don't drag this out and make then suffer, they've been through so much together...
Reviewer: emilyrose (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 14
i love it you have to update soon
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 14
It was creepy with Mike, But If I could make a request can we have more Fluff with E and B. There is hardly interaction between them within your chapters. He is in their in between her family drama.
Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 14
I'm shocked! :O
I really like this story! Keep up the good work. :D
Reviewer: axd3258 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 14
oh wow! i was so not expecting this twist, and i LOVE it. i was kind of expecting mike to go all crazy and try to stalk her or something lol, obviously yours is much better than what i was thinking :]
i cant wait for the next chapter! ah!
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 14
You are so mean....
But I can't wait to read the next chapter...
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 13
Love it!!!
I'm glad mother and dauther could talk about their fellings...
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 14
aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh I can't believe you let Mike do that!! gah! I absolutely love this story.. and I really hope that their compatibility was higher than Mike's. omg hurry up already!
(wow I sound like such a teenager.. lol no offense!!)
Reviewer: fotogirl (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 14
ughhh...i really hate mike
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