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Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Man in the Mirror

.... oh man.. update soon?

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Man in the Mirror

Meg, I can't even begin to tell you how much I ADORED this chapter! Edward & Bella are making lovely progress & so is Anthony. *does happy dance* My biggest concern is how quickly Edward threw up a wall when Bella told him about Esme stopping her in the market. Edward damn well clue Bella in because it's not just about him...Bella's involved & I don't think she's planning on bailing any time soon.
Smooshes & smooches for another outstanding chapter! MWAH!

Kat

Reviewer: AdrienneRose (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Highway to Hell

Ahaha.

Oh, that's fine," Edward said, though he was sure those were dog toys, and not children's play items.

lol.

Reviewer: AdrienneRose (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 4 - She Works Hard for the Money

I love this story. When did you first post it? Now, I'm reading it straight through! Up late tonight, I guess. I love the struggle with Edward, and how true life is. Cut-backs, schedules, over-priced meds. Everything!!

Reviewer: coolcakes (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 17 - So Emotional

OMG I LOVE THIS FANFICTION

PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CANT STOP READING IT!

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Should I Stay or Should I Go

why does he still want to go out with Vicki if she can't babysit??!

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Highway to Hell

hahaha..at least bella accepts different names!

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 17 - So Emotional

very well written tale. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 17 - So Emotional

This story is amazing! I really love it and can't wait for more!

Reviewer: lilyconnors (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 17 - So Emotional

Your story has been a fun read so far - can't wait to see where you take them next. Worried about Rose though...is Derek a Royce type person?

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 17 - So Emotional

Wow, I can't even begin to tell you how addicted I am to this fic. Seriously, I kept ducking off on bathroom & coffee breaks at work today to get a few more lines/a paragraph or two in. *LMAO*

Edward's slowly growing connection with Anthony makes me tear up a little.

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 17 - So Emotional

Oh man, so dramatic! I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 17 - So Emotional

Emmett doesn't deserve to be left for Derek.  Derek is a phony dirtbag.  The Esme and Bella meeting kind of scared me.  I loved the kiss!!

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Things Can Only Get Better

Thank goodness B&E are talking again.

Reviewer: JillianPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 17 - So Emotional

love love love this :)
i just am praying that when the truth comes out there's no angst ridden break-up.

and i am also praying for a lemon very veryyyy soon.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Maneater

God I love Bella and Anthony together!

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 14 - In Your Eyes

Gosh darn it really didn't like rereading this chapter.  But it is needed to further your story.

Reviewer: btomasko (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 17 - So Emotional

how has this not gotten more reviews? you're very talented at maneuvering such a story, and i look forward to your future chapters :)



Author's Response:

Well, it hasn't even been up for 24 hours yet, so I'd say it's doing pretty well...wouldn't you :)

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Side of the Road

God, I want them to get together now.  But I will wait...I know what it going to happen. :)

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightshift

I love Edward and Anthony.  Vickie not so much. 

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Should I Stay or Should I Go

Darn them and their miscommunication.  I love B&E.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 10 - With or Without You

Darn Jasper for suggesting Vickie.  Darn Rosalie for hooking Bella up with a date.  I love Anthony

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Hungary Eyes

Dun dun dun.  Alice know what Bella did for Edward.  the ship will hittith the fanith.  I love B & E's chemistry.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Electric Youth

Bella is really gonna stick her foot in it.  She really should have involved Edward.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 17 - So Emotional

Love the update! :)

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