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Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
yea
Reviewer: courty051292 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
this story is amazing!! one of the best fan fictions that i have ever read! I can not wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: cullenmother05 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
I love this story. i've cried on more than one chapter. gosh pls, pls, let rosalie and emmett get back together. i love edward sensitivity in this story and how deeply Bella has brought so much comfort to daddy and son. i cant wait for more. im totally wanting to see good thing come for all your character, even Esme and Carlisle. Seeing how they have suuffered int his story touches me very deeply and want that rough start to change to something beautiful. cant wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: khills (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
I Love this fic, how patient B is.How a wonderful woman she is, and he deserves her, he went through a lot of bad things in his life. Beautiful chapter, and btw i love Anthony!
Reviewer: 98765 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
I really love this story. It is one of the best "human" ones that I have read! I will be eagerly awaiting updates!!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
I love how they get a little closer each chapter. Great chapter!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
poor edward! i know hes trying. i think that maybe he should go see someone. but im so glad that hes trying for anthony! and poor rose is leaving and hes just getting used to her. i hope that it doesn't set him back!
Reviewer: ebayer1002 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
this is awsome. i love the take on "real" life. this story reflects real life, i love when writers bring them down to earth and they arent super millionaires that can do anything they want whenever they want! please update soon!
Reviewer: CarolinaBella (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
I think you are a wonderful writer. I began reading it and I wasn't sure about the storyline but your writing sucked me in and now I've found myself reading it every spare chance I can get. I can't wait to see how it all finishes out. Great job!
Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
Edward is so funny. He gets himself so worked up over things. I feel really bad about Rose. I liked the special friend thing. As a pre-K teacher, I can really appreciate that.
Reviewer: jesabaker (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
WOW. Eddie getts to stressed about shit...silly men
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Should I Stay or Should I Go
I'm really enjoying this. And the writing is stellar.
Reviewer: Righteous_Babe (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Highway to Hell
Bwhahahahahahahahaha.
ahhhh . . . . . . .
Hahahahahahahahahaha. . . . . . . . .
Reviewer: Righteous_Babe (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Father Figure
Ouch.
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
Aaaaaawwww. Anthony is going to see his granpa again, and Edward asked Bella to come along, which was also a huge step.
We just need to hug father and son, right?
Speaking of the father, has he thought about his mother yet? I mean, Bella's planted a 'go look there' hint for info of the past, but he hasn't done it yet, right?
See ya soon, I hope!
Spikey
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
:D I love this.
But I do kind of feel like there's a distinguishable level of difference between Edward and Bella's feelings for each other. Bella seems to be so swept in the moment but it doesn't seem like Edward is.
I sense trouble.
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
Really like this story!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
Excellent chapter! I really like that you weave the threads of the story together. The substories fit together so well and are equally interesting.
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
Ah Edward - still such a little boy emotionally. He's so lucky to have Bella who is mature and patient. I really like your Bella in this story. She's much more patient than I'd be (although my husband can act like a 5 year old at times too). I like the softening of Rose too. GREAT CHAPTER!!! :)
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
The connection between Rosalie and Anthony surprised the heck out of me; but even more so was Edward admitting to Bella that he'd taken Anthony back to the psychologist. It must have been a tough step for him to make, especially without Bella by his side to support him; but is probably reflective of how seriously he takes being Anthony's Dad. So sweet :)
And yay, for Edward finally letting down his protective walls and making it clear to Bella just how badly he needs her by his side when they go back to Oregon for Christmas. She did a beautiful job in making him comfortable enough to speak his feelings out loud.
Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
Fantastic chapter.
Reviewer: 12 doves (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Father Figure
no way the child "hates" him :O
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
Awww... these two are just so cute! He's trying so hard!
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
He's so cute and sweet with his insecurities.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out
Glad Edward came clean with what was bothering him. Anthony is just too adorable. Rosalie and Emmett need to work their shit out.
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