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Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 09:29 PM · On: Epilogue

This was the perfect ending for this wonderful story.

I'm going back to re-read!

Reviewer: Perla (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 40 - We Belong

You made me cry like a baby!!!!

 

It's beatifull... Thank you so very much for writing!!!!!!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Father Figure

oh snap what a first chap Looking forward to this story!

Reviewer: jfc (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 07:46 PM · On: Epilogue

Good job.

Reviewer: jamdownah (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 07:29 PM · On: Epilogue

Ahh, what a lovely story! I'm sad to see it end but so contented with the whole thing and how it ended. So blissful, and believable. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to whatever else you decide to share with us!

 

Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 05:08 PM · On: Epilogue

I Loved It, absolutely Loved It!
Thank You.

Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 05:05 PM · On: Epilogue

loved it!!!!

Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 04:49 PM · On: Epilogue

Thank you for all the hours of wonderful reading you provided.  I really enjoyed your interpretation of Edward and Bella and all of our favourite "Twilight" characters.

 

Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 40 - We Belong

oh how wonderful! I hate this has come to and end but so happy that Carlisle seems to be getting better...Lord knows that man and his family went through it! Bless Anthony's heart...

Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 40 - We Belong

Oh. My. God! The tears I shed @ this very moment. I am so very very sad to see the end of this, but oh so very happy with how it is ending.
I look forward to the Epi, but then again I dread it for it will truly be then end end.
I have loves this story with my whole heart & then some. I cannot wait to read it all again!

Reviewer: TeamKellan (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

This is the best fan fic i have ever read please write more im adicted to it!

 

Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2011 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

poor Carlisle and Edward

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

Great chapter.  I was worried along with Bella.  I am so happy for Edward and Bella.  They deserve to be happy.

Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

Okay, so I haven't commented since I started reading, but I LOVE YOUR STORY. It's nice to have a smart, driven, Bella that can take charge! And an Edward that has some of the great qualities we love, but still have flaws. Very nice. Can't wait until you update. How many chapters do you think you'll have?

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

Such a sweet chapter...loved it!

Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

Well, it is still bad because Edward had the courtesy to keep things that were supposed to be a secret, a secret. Hmph. Well, this chapter was sweet! Can't wait for more!

~Jazz~

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

Well I finished the story all 39 chappies in about 3 days.... to say I "couldn't stop reading" would be a bit of an understatement.  As many of your reviewers say, what I like about it best is that it seems so real in that you deal with real life issues and some tough ones to deal with and it's all riveting.  I was so glad to see that Esme brought Carlisle and even more glad to see that Edward "recognized him as his father" to all those who attended his wedding small group as it were.  I can't wait now to see if Carlisle progresses positively, it's my hope as others have expressed that you write it so that carlisle comes out of his stupor and remembers and reunites with his son..... and that we get to see Bella and Edward have an addition to their already beautiful family... p.s. I loved how you wrote how Edward told Anthony all the ways he loved him, that was eloquent.  Keep up the great writing, looking forward to more updates on these three.

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

The best !!!!  Loving this story......so happy for both of them.... and Anthony!

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

:)

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

:)

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

i wish my husband liked 'that thing' like edward does! i can't wait to see what happens when they g back to the real world!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

I'm glad you made it easy for Anthony to cope with the death of yet another loved one.

Carlisle being present at the wedding and maybe? recognizing Edward was unexpected but very, very fitting.

So their friends are going to give them hell for the secret wedding in the next chapter?

I love this story!!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

That was sweet. I'm so happy for them.

Reviewer: coley1823 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2011 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Father Figure


Reviewer: coley1823 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2011 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love


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