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Reviews For A Rough Start
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Girl Fight Tonight

Glad to see a new chapter! It was great!

Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Girl Fight Tonight

smack that bitch Rosie!!!!  while I don't condone violence (lmao, gotta get off the floor) some people just deserve a good smack in the mouth.  Great chappie 

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Girl Fight Tonight

Go Rosalie! Hope she kept the tooth as a souvenir!

Thanks for the update, great chapter as always!

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Girl Fight Tonight

There isn't much to say, except for this:

*loves*

And they'd better talk more about what happened with Edward when he was younger. He didn't say anything!

Looking forward to the roadtrip.

Spikey

 

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Girl Fight Tonight

Love it!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Girl Fight Tonight

Poor Anthony! Love Rose going after that bitch :)

Reviewer: Munchie1981 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Girl Fight Tonight

Loved it very much and i can't wait to see the look on Vicki's face when she finds out that it was Edward that told her employer update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Girl Fight Tonight

Go, Rosalie!  Great chapter!!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Girl Fight Tonight

This was a great chapter!

I am so glad that Vickie finally got what was coming to her! It was well deserved.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: NYGirl1975 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

I love this story...cant wait for more

Reviewer: lizzy1021 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

This is the first story I have read on Twilighted.net......I absolutly loved it!!!  Great reading and story line.....I have so many ideas in my mind as to what is going to happen next.....can't wait for more.  Elizabeth

Reviewer: silvervolvogirl (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out

Ok, so I just realized that it's been a while since you've updated. I hope everything is ok and that an update is in the near future? Please? I started this story on FF and abso-freakin-lutely love it!! I'm sending positive thoughts you're way=) I know this isn't your full time job or anything and that RL often gets in the way but hoping that just knowing someone out there in the cyber world has to hold back squeals when she gets the email saying "A Rough Start" has been updated might help you to get that next chapter out?? *on knees begging* lol

Reviewer: BLOOdPROMiSE (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

when are the next chapters coming?!?!?!?!?!?! i loooovvvvveee this story. good job.

Reviewer: michelle0526 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

What an emotional chapter!  I love this story!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

This story is so good! I've loved every minute of it! I can't believe, in this chapter, Edward didn't notice the conviction thing that the therapist mentioned. Or did he just not acknowledge it? Either way, great story, can't wait to read more!

~Jazz~

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Under Pressure

Wow...I understand, but Edward needs to chill a bit...

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 2 9 to 5

I would have reacted the same way towards Edward I think...

We'll see.  Perhaps he just doesn't know about lunch costs...

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Father Figure

Well, Anthony's reaction isn't totally unexpected.

I am intrigued with this story and must read more :)

Reviewer: breaking dawn 84 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

parece que edward esta dispuesto a enfrentar los fantasmas del pasado

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

:D YAY new chapter!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

Poor little Anthony. Edward really is becoming a good dad a little more each chapter.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

I've been  following your story on FF-net, but I've got to leave a review. Your story is so different, your Bella, Edward and friends are not only struggling with personal, emotional and relationship-problems, they also have to deal with money-issues and fear of unemployment. If you don't have the money you have to invest so much more energy to achieve something. I like the way Edward tries so hard to be a good father for Anthony, despite the lack of role-models in his own upbringing. I'm glad he has Bella's support and her knowledge about everything children. You're doing a wonderful job here!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

Poor Edward...he really is struggling with the being a Dad thing - but worse yet is how much pressure he's putting on himself to get it 'right'. He looks at the way Bella handles Anthony and thinks fo himself as a failure without realising that Bella went to school to learn how to deal with children - Edward is new at being a father. They're all learning together :)

Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

Another fantastic chapter. I'm so excited for more.

Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Life During Wartime

Finally, he is rady to hear it.  I was wondering why he didn't react to what she said about the convinction.  Poor Anthony...he's even acting up with Bella.

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