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Reviews For A Rough Start
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 08:29 AM · On: Epilogue

Anthony is Edward's son - no wonder the girls are after him :D!

Thank you for this wonderful story.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 40 - We Belong

Such a beautiful ending, they're a real family now. Loved Edward being sought after for relationship advice, he's coma a long way. And how sweet is it that both Bella and Edward don't want to go on their honeymoon without Anthony?

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Things Can Only Get Better

Oh snap his past has come back to haunt him!

I can't wait for more

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 06:36 PM · On: Epilogue

Aw.dont call him forrest. Gmp ruined that perfect.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Hungary Eyes

lmao Alice is amazing when is she not lol

Litlle menacing pixie hahahaha

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Electric Youth

Way to go Bella!!!  I am so glad shes sticking her neck out there!  Let shop it doesn't get lopped off lol

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 09:49 AM · On: Epilogue

oh that was too cute! Thank you for writing this, it was a pleasure to read, and I have to say I LOVE how you write blue-collared Edward- it's so real and its such a nice change to all the mega-rich Edwards out there.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 7 - If You Leave

Wow I can't wait to find out Edwards back story it seems he has a hell of a story to tell...   Bella is a super amazing teacher and I am kind of relieved that Edward called her !!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Little Fighter

Yay!!!  I hope everything Bella told him helps him out I would have no clue what would happen in a situation like this..

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 09:00 AM · On: Epilogue

So wonderful!!!  Loved it.  Great job.  Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 40 - We Belong

Oh, God, that was so sweet...I'm still crying...

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Highway to Hell

lmfao!!!!!  Edward is a total fail lmao so so so funny watching him suffer!

Reviewer: MitziJani (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 08:19 AM · On: Epilogue

OMG!!! So beautifull

Reviewer: bwen (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Epilogue

BRILLIANT! I don't think I have ever smiled so much or cried so much reading any other fan fiction!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 07:44 AM · On: Epilogue

I KNEW he was kissing & not fighting as soon as the kids started describing what was happening!!! 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Under Pressure

Damn that was an intense chap I like bumbling Edward it shows the true humanity in his situation!  I mean it sucks amjor but very realistic!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 2 9 to 5

Uh oh Bellas not to happy with Edward already this will be interesting!

Reviewer: gt0005a (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 05:34 AM · On: Epilogue

This was one of the best stories I've ever read.  Very close to my heart and my own life!  Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 03:50 AM · On: Epilogue

This story was so sweet.  What a perfect ending!  I'm going to miss this story but it was great while it lasted!!

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 11:10 PM · On: Epilogue

Good epi. It let me know what was going on in their lives without any major events being involved.

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 40 - We Belong

:)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 10:55 PM · On: Epilogue

Loved the epilogue! I can't believe it's all over though :( I'm going to miss this story. It was one of my favorites :)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 40 - We Belong

Aww. The Carlisle and Edward moment....no words. Loved the wedding :)

Reviewer: Perla (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 09:53 PM · On: Epilogue

It's such a wonderfull story! So realistic, well-written... it has hope, sweetnes, tears, laughs... all what a good story needs.

Thank you for share this magniffical work whit all us around the world! I am reading you from Argentina, South America, and I love this story very, very much. Your story made me cry and made de laugh, and sometimes both, ever at the same time.

Thank you again, and I hope to read more of your work soon. Kisses!

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 09:47 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks for a great story!!

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