Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
What a wonderful proposal!!!!!
Reviewer: LoraB (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
Oh, that was lovely!!! I was weeping into my coffee!
Thank you! LoraB.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tha t was so perfect I want to cry...........Anothy is such a pefect child I hope everyon votes for him
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
I didn't think he had it in him either. Bella should still kick his butt.
Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
What a great proposal!! Loved this chapter!!
Reviewer: jan08 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
awwww.. that was really cheesy!
and it was perfect for both of em.. XD
um will Anthony get to call Bella 'mommy'?
cause it will totally be perfect!
P.S
Your chapters are gettin shorter and your updates, well, seems like it takes you longer to post em D:
but i still love this story so much..
Reviewer: metalhead (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
that was so cute!! i loved it...update soon!!!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
The whole proposal was great! I loved this chapter! Made me smile the whole way through. I didn't think Edward had that type of proposal in him :)
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
I was scared that this story was abandoned
thank goodness you came back with an amazing proposal, you so did not disappoint
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
I loved this chapter!
The scheme Edward did to propose to Bella was excellent and very romantic. I had a smile on my face the entire chapter. =)
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
I loved this chapter!
The scheme Edward did to propose to Bella was excellent and very romantic. I had a smile on my face the entire chapter. =)
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Starnani21 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
Oh My God! That was so sweet! I was holding in tears while reading about the movie. He really put a lot of work into his proposal. Awwwww. (sigh)
There was no way she could have said no even if she wanted to (okay, I don't think that saying is very nice in this situation.)
And, when Anthony knelt too... it was just... oh, my eyes went blurry.
Merry Christmas! Happy Christmas! May your first christmas together be the happiest one yet
Thanks for the update. I don't how I'll let these guys go, things are starting to smooth out for them. Happy Holidays to you and yours.
Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
OMG...Anthony is the cutest kid ever. Kneeling down like his father. Really loved Edward's proposal. Had me smiling while reading.
Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
Very cute! I loved Anthony's part in all of it, too, especially when he kneeled by Edward. So precious!!
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
awwww I have tears in my eyes!!! That was unbelievable, and sooo sweet!! That was so creative, too! Great work!!!! :)
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
Awww, how sweet!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
that was such an awesome idea!! it was so sweet! and anthony joining his dad! that was beyond cute! im glad she said yes! what will her mother think of that?
Reviewer: Kuuipo (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
I love it. What a great chapter! a thoughtful and romantic proposal. Anthony kneeling in imitation of his dad was the sweetest touch.
Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
wow now that was a creative and romantic proposal. great chapter
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
that was awesome!!!
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
That was fantastic. Thank you very much. Christmas has felt a little off this year so thank you for bringing some levity. Much appriciated.
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
That was AWESOME!!!
Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
Aww. That is a great chapter. The best proposal. That was so creative. I actually had to tell my husband about it. He said "Oooohhh. That is a good one." I had to tell him "Yeah, girls are creative like that."
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
What a cute, sweet chapter!
I love your story, but one thing I really appreciate is that you let the main characters be the focus. You have everyone we love in the story, but it's an Edward and Bella story. Some writers try to give everyone a major plot line, and it doesn't work. You put the spotlight where it should be.
Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
Awesome chapter. I enjoyed reading it so much.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
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