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Reviews For A Rough Start
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Highway to Hell

that was funny

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 4 - She Works Hard for the Money

oh boy party for anthony

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Under Pressure

jesus edwards life's a mess the poor kid is sick and hell could life suck any more for him

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 2 9 to 5

OH SHIT

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Father Figure

well damn a kid with jessica stanley and now she gone and the kid hate him poor kid poor edward

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

oh. my god. that was absolutely and utterly PRECIOUS!!!!! so cute. and Anthony was adorable. 

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

That has to be one of the funnest proposals ever! Cheesy but really sweet! I've been grinning the whole time while Bella was being so obtuse. Just loved it! And who could ever say no to Edward and Anthony!

Reviewer: siobhansgift (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

That was great! I loved it.

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

awww "giving marry for christmas" - i'll have to remember that one :)

They finally got to the big question!

 

Reviewer: lee21761 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

OH my gosh....I am hear reading this in work..shhhh don't tell and I have tears in my eyes!  I loved it..it was perfect!

Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

WONDERFUL ,SWEET,EMOTIONAL,FANTASTIC,WELL PLANNED 

Well done ,what a brilliant update 

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

awwww...the proposal was sooo sweet!!...Edward is a sweetheart!..I love Anthony..:)

Reviewer: mathqueenb (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Caravan of Love

You're story is so unique! I love it. You make Bella sound very authentic in her teacher role. Great story!

Reviewer: distractedbyshinyobjects (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

Smiles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

Tha's what Christmastime-stress does to you - you can't get a hint even if it jumps you in the face. "Did my dad give you marry for Christmas?"- Anthony is just too adorable and Edward did put a lot of work and thought into his proposal - love it!

Reviewer: blueeyez (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

that was very cute chapter anthony is adorable

Reviewer: siobhansgift (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 14 - In Your Eyes

Your story is so real. I love it.

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

OMG that might have been the sweetest this ever!!!! xx

Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

how sweet

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

perfect

Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

yay finally!! whhooo hooo

Reviewer: fellowsandfokies (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

Awwww.... this chapter gave me a tooth ache, it was so sweet :)

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

This is the coolest proposal I have ever read about!  Love it!

Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

Love this story! Love this story!  Love this story!  Please don't keep us hanging TOO long for the rest!

Oh, and somebody shove a pine cone in Renee's ...

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

that is so sweet!  so happy for them!

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