Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2011 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House
Things are looking good. :)
Reviewer: amobutterfly25 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House
aww bella is going ot be his married mom , i dont think bella has to figure that one out anymore. esme is being pleasent but she always has anyway. i am hoping that eventually carlisle will come around and atleast be civil.
Reviewer: bogchild (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House
great story, so true to life
Reviewer: bwen (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House
You never cease to amaze me in how your characters have grown and matured in such an unhurried and natural fashion. You are a master at depicting those special emotional moments and evoking the intense feel those emotions.
Edward has always been my favourite character and I feel that you have been able to take the original SM Edward make him human and strip him down to the esstential Edward compents, a deeply feeling man, with a natural intelligence but still showing personal insecurities that times hold him back. He's not damaged he just unsure and little bit lost.
Your Bella is an excellent mix of the mother and lover, her naturity exceeds SM's Bella thankfully and she is more openly honest which is refreshing. Her relationship with Edward is beautiful and heart warming.
And Anthony I think should meet Nessie from the "The Practice of Love" on fan fiction they would make the cutest couple even as playmates.
Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House
Thank you so much for the update. I have loved this story from the start and to get not one but two chapters was great. I am so happy to see them moving forward, Edward had gotten so much more at ease in his own skin, and I would love to see him resolve things with his parents. It seems that Carlisle's self imposed prison is a reaction to not only Alice being taken away but also losing Edward. It was just too over whelming. Anthony is adorable. Love the direction the story is taking. Getting closer to the HEA we all wish for.
Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House
ty for updating!
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House
Sweet chapter. I am hoping that Esme and Edward will patch things up. Can't wait for another update! (thansk fro the two in a row! It was a nice treat).
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House
i hope that edward and esme can be ok with each other! they deserve to have some kind of relationship.
Reviewer: inmyownright (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Father Figure
I love this story! It has moved up the ranks quickly to sit in my top 3 - UtAT, Unexpected Circumstances and A Rough Start. The characters are entirely believable and loveable. The emotion runs the full gamut, the story can pull a tear as quyickly as it can pull a smile. The storyline is strong, engaging and addicting. You weave a gorgeous tapestry, tightly woven, very colorful, pleasing to the senses, and totally immersing.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House
kids have a way of making everything so simple that why we love Anthony so much he has such a beautiful soul
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
Oh what a bittersweet christmas. I loved how Edward wanted to make it full of special memories for Anthony. And it was lovely of them to try and share some of their christmas with Esme. But I do hope Carlisle hasn't spoilt those memories for Anthony. And talking of memories... poor Carlisle! I wonder if there's any chance he'll understand and come to terms with the past.
Reviewer: Bookaholic Girl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
I'm dying over here! Where's the love? (aka the update?)
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 33 - With This Ring
OMG that has got to be the yummiest cheese I've ever read!
Reviewer: Shazarabbit (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2011 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
Been reading for a while now. The character development is wonderful, I find myself hating Anthony, but then realize what he's going through. I absolutely loved the "With this ring chapter." Kept a non stop smile on my face (I'm sure the people on the bus thought i was crazy!!) Update soon. xo
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
awww...it's sad, but at least it shows that Carlisle really didn't want to lose Edward, despite what happened to his sister.
Reviewer: rubyred21 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
:D Drama :L
I dont review that often but i love all your chapters. Sorry i dont review but ipods dont let you -sad face- anyway, Loved this chapter :D
Reviewer: lee21761 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
My heart breaks for Edward and his dad and mom.
Reviewer: akers (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
that ending just breaks my heart.
Reviewer: T Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
This story is picking up speed, which i constiter a good thing. I love your story form the beging. I could never imagine Edward like this and it's a refreashing change. I hope you write another chapter soon!
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
wow the story so far heartbreaking in places i look forward to reading the remaining chapters. i hope carlisle gets better its so sad that he is in this state.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
Wow, so much packed in a chapter...
I love that Edward is not really an experienced lover. His voice is perfect for this story.
Carlisle reaction go to me. I hope they work through this...
Such a great story!
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
Happy New Year.. that was sad!.. Bella and Edward need a little more commications. I had a feeling Edward was going to exploed.. I m not quite sure. but they need to meet in the middle.. But with Esma, Yes I can see Edward and his mom need to reconnected but outside of that house. on equal grounds. I like the story it could of went very wrong in so many ways.
Welll thanks.. smiles Leona
Reviewer: troglav (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
wonderful chapter
Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
So real
Reviewer: gt0005a (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas
Amazing story so similar to my circumstances.....errily similar
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